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Published: 2008-07-11 20:58:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 1986; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 0
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Lala
I hate Aerith/Cloud
Not sure why I did it, but enjoy! Gimme any tips if you have any, I'm not sure I did the best with the blending the two images. "Advanced critique" if you will.
Note: If you look closely you will notice that I tried to smudge Cloud's frown into a semi-smile. Or at least not a frown.
Credit.
Sky Image - [link]
Butterflies -
Adam for his wonderful vectorish brushes
ALSO:: I do NOT own the two images, they are characters that belong to Square Enix. They are from Final Fantasy VII.
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I love this *-* But as you mentioned the critique, then I can't help myself but expressing a few details I noticed :3
-If you make the borders of the characters a little softer, they probably would blend a little more with the background.
- I'm not sure what happened with Cloud's right shoulder, but I think it would be better to have Aerith's shoulder totally in front of him (showing her complete shoulder), so it could look like he's semi hugging her *-*
- And! I don't know if it's just me but I think she looks a little taller than him o.O but anyway, those are detailes that I only noticed after staring at the image for a few seconds more than usual xD
Nice work *-*!
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i like it a lot
but the hand of aerith seams to go nowhere
ore it looks a bit nuaghty even
try and crop of some of the bottum
that would make it blend much more, and take you'r eye of it, and make it much more intimite..
btw i love what you did with the smile
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wonderful blending 
But I prefer CloudxTifa u.u
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Lol as do I xD
But I thought these two pictures looked like they would fit nicely together
Thankyou :]
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Wow that's really good,I could never do that xP
Criticism huh?The only thing I don't like about it is Aeris,cross her out put Tifa in & im good xD
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Lol I feel the same way xD
But Couldn't find a dang Tifa picture. That fit anyways
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wow i thought it was real o.O you tricked me
:3 lovely job
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Aww that is so cute!
I think you did really good. I'm a fan of both shippers sooo yeah.
Anyway, I think you did awesome.
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-Looks at other comments- O.O
I'm not really good with judging arts and all. But i really liked this one. I liked how you cut out aerith and how you added the building behind her. I thought that was real creative. And....=/
GAH! What am i here to talk about. -__-" I know nothing about art. LOL. This was just real good, i meant perfect!
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Jilly! This is really nice. I love how you had their heads together, it's oh so intimate.
Advanced critique, eh? I love to be positive, and in fact, I usually can't find flaws in your work. I don't really think there is much negative to say about this one either!
I think it was challenging making it look real, that goes without saying. Maybe to soften it up you could add a light blur? Idk, just to make it look a little less layered/hardy.
I think it was a really good idea that you executed nearly perfect! So faving, my lil photoshopper! ^_^
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Aww I love yah Rikky! Thankies so much :]
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The text has a rigid hard feel compared to the image. I would use softer or bold font as opposed to something that is technical and computery. The "i missed you," I can see that you tried to blur it/give it a glow, but it can still be seen has 'hard' underneath. Is that making any sense?
Not sure if you're just starting out or not on this type of thing, but always always try to use the highest quality images as possible and large, high quality images are the best. The bigger the better (if high quality) because then you have the option to start large and scale it down to smaller sizes whenever needed.
Your cropping is really good, but the more I look out it, the more it feels like they are standing out and not blending in to the background of the image--they look a little out of place. The foreheads look a little off, Areis' is seems slanted a little too much.
I do like this image, though. It caught my eye on the recently uploaded page.
Maybe if you added a slight sepia washed/worn out look? Maybe make it a slightly tattered photo of some sort? Just throwing ideas out there to help you improve. I apologize if I went overboard!
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Yeah that does make sense, I see how you mean it's rather..choppy? I agree with you on the computer text, I don't really like it now looking back.
Well I haven't really been doing digital art for very long, but yes I know what you mean about the quality of the pictures.
Ooh yes, that sounds like a good idea.
Haha well the long comment scared me at first, but I appreciate your thoughts, thanks! :]
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OKay, that relives me a little bit! I didn't want to sound like a jerk about any of it because I really think it's a great start. Your idea was executed well, like others have said, but I wanted to help you with the smaller details that people will notice.
My digital photo teacher has taught me that sometimes artists need their work critiqued from people they don't know. Relatives/friends can be soft and say it's good no matter what. Do you know what I mean? Yes, they are helpful and encouraging (which is NOT a bad thing), but they can't give you the full scope of what you may need and might not even notice things that someone unknown will see, who are much more likely to pinpoint faults in work and act more scrupulous.
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Oh yes, I know what you mean. I'll probably do a remake in a few months or so, and I'll take in to thought about the ideas and criticism. Thanks!
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