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JigokuHana — Pondera - Prologue Pg3

Published: 2010-10-22 03:22:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 3864; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description ....Okay, I take back what I said about not inking these digitally anymore.

I'm not too fond of how my linework came out for this page. Maybe it's just me who thinks that, though.

Lol The dialogue was starting to annoy me. It sounds very church-like to me.....sucks that it's what I was going for, though.

And just for the record...the dialogue here is only one view of the situation. The whole comic is supposed to show both the good & bad sides of both of the people.

Enjoy~

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Comments: 13

Laylabelle97 [2014-05-04 20:10:37 +0000 UTC]

Those are some big ass apples

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LaylaVanHellsing [2012-02-18 01:24:39 +0000 UTC]

I really like the third panel. Her pose is lovely, and the shading is excellent

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VampiressRukia [2011-05-18 02:45:16 +0000 UTC]

this is pretty good! i would love to see more of the story and its characters.

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Funny95 [2010-10-27 04:07:36 +0000 UTC]

finally! in the first bullet is a guy in a dress? O-o

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JigokuHana In reply to Funny95 [2010-10-27 07:08:22 +0000 UTC]

the guy kneeling down is wearing cropped pants (Though if you mistook the older woman in the foreground for a guy...I don't blame ya. She was originally gonna be.)

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Dreamdarkbabygurl [2010-10-26 09:40:13 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...I think its interesting.I wanna see more of the story before I really give what I think about it.But right now I can say that I truly think its interesting.

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d4r1n [2010-10-25 01:19:10 +0000 UTC]

...Rachael. This is a classic. I raise my bottle and drink to you. Not sure what you've got planned for the future of this story, but if it in any way involves anything to do with the word steampunk... that's an automatic round on me when I eventually get up there to party. (I have friends in Jersey, it's GONNA happen). Name your drink and it shall be so!

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EleosArgentum [2010-10-23 17:31:31 +0000 UTC]

nice. Really good as intro.
ANd great art too n_n

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maggi-power [2010-10-23 01:12:06 +0000 UTC]

great ^^

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UrbanBanshee [2010-10-22 18:43:14 +0000 UTC]

pretty cool this is a lot of fun so far

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JOHN-DOEnKRIS-DARIO [2010-10-22 07:26:38 +0000 UTC]

hmm interesting

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Spencers13 [2010-10-22 03:27:44 +0000 UTC]

I think it sounds awesome! And I think you should do the linework however you feel most comfortable with. Because it looks just fine either way.

Great page!

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JigokuHana In reply to Spencers13 [2010-10-22 03:34:27 +0000 UTC]

I'll probably just pencil the pages out, scan them, & ink them on Photoshop. Saves me paper & ink. ^_^

& thanks~

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