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Published: 2008-07-29 21:43:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 609; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description Right, what have we here?
A guy with a saw and an axe at the edge of a field looking upon a windfarm. It is quite clear what is going on... or is it?

Scenario "The Farmer":
The man is in fact a farmer, the owner of the field, and is looking towards the windmills at the end of his working day. He is thinking about how in the past this was all flat farmland and is wondering what else the future may bring ...

Scenario "The Damager":
What most people I asked prior to uploading said, the guy is an angry hooligan who decided to take the mills down ...

Scenario "The Engineer":
The Windmills just started turning for the first time. The Engineer gathers some tools which the construction workers left behind and takes a last proud look at his building.

Let me know what you think the picture is of? Any comments would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks to for modelling
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Comments: 18

Timothy-Sim [2009-05-06 15:22:11 +0000 UTC]

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I didn't particularly enjoy this piece as i thought i would have when i saw the thumbs.

A few reasons to them with some solutions of course.

What's that glow around the dude's head? it makes it look like you tried a hdr on that, and left a strange highlight around his head. extremely weird i think. might be good to clear that one up since it looks too unnatural to be there.

If you'll notice to the left of the saw handle, there's this weird thing poking out of the border. Now that's admittedly, rather sloppy! Be careful what gets in the way of your picture and crop it out when you can to avoid confusion and distraction from the main subject! Even a small branch can take the attention away immediately.

The axe and saw were an interesting idea to add value to the picture no doubt. However, the foreground seems too dark compared to the lightness of the background. Sure, I didn't mind the clouds, the windmill and the lovely hue, but the foreground needs to be mildly lit up at least, to create a better well-rounded composed picture. Throw a bit of flash and that'll do!

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jayvoh In reply to Timothy-Sim [2009-05-06 16:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, some very true points there, I will look out for them in the future

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Timothy-Sim In reply to jayvoh [2009-05-06 16:17:32 +0000 UTC]

cheers! all the best!

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Phantom-Line [2009-01-28 23:15:44 +0000 UTC]

awesome and creepy at the time!

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jayvoh In reply to Phantom-Line [2009-01-29 09:30:37 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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vintage-photographer [2009-01-27 13:21:57 +0000 UTC]

I think it's somebody that takes down trees as a living and now that he sees the windmills he feels bad about what he does.

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jayvoh In reply to vintage-photographer [2009-01-27 14:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Thats very interesting actually
Thanks for your view

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moonshadow76 [2008-09-11 15:01:40 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, though my take would be the farmer wondering if he still has a place amongst the new technology.

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jayvoh In reply to moonshadow76 [2008-09-11 18:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, yeh my whole family thought it would be that

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kika1983 [2008-09-08 12:58:04 +0000 UTC]

nice contrast and details

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ideoda [2008-08-01 18:20:35 +0000 UTC]

As for me.. I would go for the 3rd version 'Engineer'.. the setting sun brings romanticism to the picture, and the state of the guy is rather proud than vicious, no matter he is holding an axe. I like the colours btw

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jayvoh In reply to ideoda [2008-08-01 18:56:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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ARphotographs [2008-07-30 07:02:10 +0000 UTC]

nice photo, really like the colour and the scenarios

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jayvoh In reply to ARphotographs [2008-07-31 05:26:13 +0000 UTC]

thx

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Drenton [2008-07-30 06:12:12 +0000 UTC]

You've got a delightfully imaginative mind to spin stories with you're pictures! Good shot too!

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Crank0 [2008-07-29 22:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Ich finde die Idee sehr geil von dir hat mir Spaß gemacht mit dir zusammenzuarbeiten!

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iwillipromise [2008-07-29 21:44:43 +0000 UTC]

this picture is amazing =]

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jayvoh In reply to iwillipromise [2008-07-29 21:49:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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