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Published: 2010-06-12 22:46:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1355; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 27
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I support FULL VIEW!For the Fantasy Earth Zero contest.
Scout
she has the daggers in her hair and the bow in her sleeve... you can't see the arrow because it shows only when the target is hit, dripping blood.
No, srsly! I never saw this in any games and I wished someone thought of it... invisible arrows that only the archer sees... now those are some arrows I'd like to cast. :3
Oh, and for the arrow holder (can't get the english name just now... >.< ), it's actually that half-skirt on her leg... she just pulls strands of energy used to cast the arrows from the bow. Now how cool is that?
Is it that you guys never thought of it? Ha? Ha? Ha?
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Done in SAI completely, except for a few light and color touches in PS
Used a reference for the pose: [link]
Constructive critic is most appreciated.
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Last hour edits... thank you all so much for the critiques. they were very very helpful *hugs all*
I'm sorry I couldn't fix everything... still, I promise to pay more attention with future works. ^^
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Comments: 41
bah... I hate it!
So much work on it and it barely looks 'nice'... <.<
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I love the colors...especially her socks, awesome.
Brilliant method of storing arrows.
And all the highlights look good.
But the eyes...way too close together, and the nose seems off and the ear is too low, while her head is a bit too the other side. (you would have probably been better off with a profile)
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thank you! *hugs*
n-am putut modifica poz capului daca nu vroiam s-o iau de la capat cu tot desenul. >.< Si nu am timp!
daaar... am mai urcat urechea si am mai indepartat ochii putin... am uitat de nas, dar o las pe altadata ca am ex la icta next >.<
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if e look closely enough we can see that her arm is covering the neck, but judging by the looks of it it seems sh has no neck!! and her face looks more o a guy thou her boobs r awesome*drulls* but get the eyes and neck fixed i give u a 7
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awwww cmon everyone makes mistakes u cant decide to give up now it's mistakes that makes u realize where's ur weak point hold ur self together and try harder and one day u will receive a good comment from me XD
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lol, sorry about that... but I already fixed the eyes once and have no idea what else could I do to them... also that comment that she looks like a guy... that kinda threw me off balance there...
as for the neck... I just didn't draw a line or two... I'll put them now. >.<
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well u could only put one eye one the draw that way it would look more realistic dont u think?
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I won't remove the eye unless I grow really really desperate.
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no what i mean is that from that angel only one of the eyes should be viibel
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that's not true and you know it
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u know me better then i know my self
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+hides eyes from the light* that sure is a bright smile
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*chuckles* I had a chibi strip about smtg like that long time ago... wait... I think I have it here somewhere...
part 1: [link]
and part 2: [link]
happened on a rpg forum I used to play at that time. XD
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Seriously the only complaint I have about it is the eyes. They seem... of o.O
As a whole I give the picture a 9/10
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really?! Thank you!
I'll see what I can do about the eyes. :3
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You're very welcome *squeezed to death* OTL...
Send me the link when you finish it! :3
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replaced it with the fixed version. :3
Better now? ^^
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Very much so madam~
Looks good~
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thanks for pointing it out!
<---- is in a very good mood so sorry if exagerating XD
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You're very welcome~ *tries to push her off, fails and gives up* You can stay.. but only because I'm cold.
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Hm, if I give you a treat will you let go?
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melon and apple and wild fruit and... *thinks*... mocha ice cream plz. *grins*
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I guess you're staying then...
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*pouts*
I go get it myself then... *lets go and heads for the fridge*
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Sorry.. I just didn't have any of that.. I do have other treats though.. I suppose.. I could buy you some to make up for the ones that I didn't give... Oh boy... I dug myself into a hole..
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*throws rope in the hole*
Okay... buy me some then. *wags tail*
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What am I buying... *hands pencil and paper*
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those icecream flavors I mentioned earlier... a lot of each!
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*grabs his wallet and keys* Alright.. come on...
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