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Published: 2007-10-15 22:46:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 6465; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 56
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Description Chapter One, Page Nineteen, of Open Your Eyes.

Please read from left to right.

A lot of you thought Jiraiya looked like crap on the last page. I sort of agreed with you and then I read some NARUTO chapters (Jiraiya's sexiness is in full force in the recent chapters). Now I full-heartedly agree with you. I will not correct the previous page, but this does serve as a lesson: use a reference. Save The Cheerleader, Save The World, Use a Reference.

We all get that you shouldn't say things about Ino's dad, huh?

Some of you may not have read this from the beginning...if you haven't then go read the beginning. Inoichi is dead. That's VERY IMPORTANT INFORMATION.

On a side note, Ino looks like she's trying out for Pokemon.

"BINDER, I CHOOSE YOU!"

One last note: I completely redrew this page today. It looked terrible the first time around and Jiraiya looked...like crap. The original had nine panels (oh my gosh) and everything was way too compressed. I got some nice panels this time around, and about the same amount of emo-ness from Ino.

For no real reason: [link]

Prologue:

Cover: [link]
Page One: [link]
Page Two: [link]
Page Three: [link]
Page Four: [link]
Page Five: [link]
Page Six: [link]
Page Seven: [link]
Page Eight: [link]
Page Nine: [link]

Chapter One:

Cover: [link]
Page One: [link]
Page Two: [link]
Page Three: [link]
Page Four: [link]
Page Five: [link]
Page Six: [link]
Page Seven: [link]
Page Eight: [link]
Page Nine: [link]
Page Ten: [link]
Page Eleven: [link]
Page Twelve: [link]
Page Thirteen: [link]
Page Fourteen: [link]
Page Fifteen: [link]
Page Sixteen: [link]
Page Seventeen: [link]
Page Eighteen: [link]
Page Twenty: [link]
Insert Pages:

Inoichi: [link]
Rock Lee: [link]
Chouji: [link]

"Fun" pages:

Confusion: [link]

Yamanaka Ino, "Sai", Akimichi Chouji, Nara Shikamaru, Haruno Sakura, Rock Lee, Danzou, ???, Hyuuga Hinata, Ichiraku, Hayate, Shiranui Genma, Aburame Shino, Inuzuka Kiba, the Fourth Hokage/Namikaze Minato, and the original Yamanaka Flower Shop are from NARUTO by Kishimoto Masashi
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Comments: 38

Aetheru [2010-10-23 08:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Whoa...Ino...
Perfect wife for the heartless killing machine.

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rininuzuka [2010-09-23 03:35:03 +0000 UTC]

I have read this from the beggining an I still do not understand the thing about Ino's dad O_o

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tophina009 [2007-10-26 20:41:51 +0000 UTC]

yay! can you draw more i seem to be addicted...O_O

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jam2599 In reply to tophina009 [2007-11-07 01:37:03 +0000 UTC]

It has been done.

[link]

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Death-N-Decay [2007-10-23 06:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I love how Jiraya looks now!...

So are we going to be seeing Hiro in this?

Maybe as a background char.

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jam2599 In reply to Death-N-Decay [2007-10-23 13:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Hiro? As in Nakamura Hiro from HEROES?

You know...why not. I was wondering what I'd do when I needed to draw crowds.

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GenesisGoBoom [2007-10-19 21:52:42 +0000 UTC]

I love Jiraya in the fourth panel

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jam2599 In reply to GenesisGoBoom [2007-10-19 21:54:16 +0000 UTC]

Everyone does...

Thanks!

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GenesisGoBoom In reply to jam2599 [2007-10-19 21:54:48 +0000 UTC]

XDDDD welcome

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DelinquentDuo [2007-10-17 19:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Ino's mean. But we knew that much already

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jam2599 In reply to DelinquentDuo [2007-10-18 00:40:34 +0000 UTC]

Heh heh.

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BeamStar24 [2007-10-16 11:20:30 +0000 UTC]

in my train of thought bruises arent a good thing
wonder what relationship she had with her father now

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jam2599 In reply to BeamStar24 [2007-10-17 00:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Heh heh.

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BeamStar24 In reply to jam2599 [2007-10-17 11:06:29 +0000 UTC]

...my brain cant figure it out DX....just got to wait for the next page ^_~ which of course be wonderful

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mooona-chan [2007-10-16 10:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Jiraiya looks great~! >w< and I really like Ino's face in the third pannel~ nice job C:

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jam2599 In reply to mooona-chan [2007-10-17 00:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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nwfairy [2007-10-16 05:00:37 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm! the Plot thinkens!

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jam2599 In reply to nwfairy [2007-10-17 00:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Yup!

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sasukesfang [2007-10-16 01:28:27 +0000 UTC]

Your perspectives are getting better! And eh, everyone needs some emo time. The angst adds character, in small doses. ^^ But if you keep up art like this...Ash is going to have some major competition. Binders are violent things. x3

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jam2599 In reply to sasukesfang [2007-10-16 01:44:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm ever thankful for your comments that are actually about art.

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sasukesfang In reply to jam2599 [2007-10-16 02:04:10 +0000 UTC]

I try to stay on task for those who'd like it.

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shadowwolf2192 [2007-10-15 23:58:43 +0000 UTC]

wow ive been waiting for this for a wile and im still waiting for the next one cuz i love ur comics!! wat took u so long to post this one? school?

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jam2599 In reply to shadowwolf2192 [2007-10-16 00:07:19 +0000 UTC]

Exams, labs, going home for the weekend, dates, lazer tag, stuff for clubs, chores, grocery shopping, cooking, organizing...

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shadowwolf2192 In reply to jam2599 [2007-10-16 01:18:34 +0000 UTC]

wow busy busy... wat do u mean by go home? were r u now?

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jam2599 In reply to shadowwolf2192 [2007-10-16 01:43:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm at my apartment--I was visiting my mom and little brother.

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shadowwolf2192 In reply to jam2599 [2007-10-16 18:09:53 +0000 UTC]

that makes sense. so how are u then. out of curiosity.

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jam2599 In reply to shadowwolf2192 [2007-10-17 00:43:45 +0000 UTC]

Sick.

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shadowwolf2192 In reply to jam2599 [2007-10-17 01:21:44 +0000 UTC]

no way! wats up? wats wrong?

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jam2599 In reply to shadowwolf2192 [2007-10-17 01:56:50 +0000 UTC]

It's just a cold.

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shadowwolf2192 In reply to jam2599 [2007-10-17 17:50:54 +0000 UTC]

ok thats goodbut not as good as not being sick.

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KaylaNostrade [2007-10-15 23:34:18 +0000 UTC]

nice job!

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jam2599 In reply to KaylaNostrade [2007-10-15 23:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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KaylaNostrade In reply to jam2599 [2007-10-15 23:53:35 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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ihatecollege [2007-10-15 23:10:20 +0000 UTC]

HAha I like the bottom panel Jiraiya

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jam2599 In reply to ihatecollege [2007-10-15 23:50:43 +0000 UTC]

He's speechless in the face of the emo-ness.

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lil-kendra-bear [2007-10-15 22:50:58 +0000 UTC]

I like Jiraiya's expression on the bottom left >w<;;
I wonder what Ino and her dad's relationship was..):

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jam2599 In reply to lil-kendra-bear [2007-10-15 22:52:31 +0000 UTC]

How do you type that expression?

o.o

or something like that?

Heh heh, I want to get the reader's brain going on their relationship. Are the bruises clear enough or do I need to darken them?

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lil-kendra-bear In reply to jam2599 [2007-10-15 23:47:19 +0000 UTC]

maybe this, too XD
•____•
Yah you did really good on that! I think the bruises are clear enough, that's why I wonder what happened. But then again it also depends on the readers screen set-up

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