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Published: 2011-07-20 02:51:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 2477; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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EDIT 07/21/11: put the crocodile back in dino's pants. ;D

Holy shit, cameos galore.

This is the shortest set, 2 of 4.

It took forever anyways, though. I think I've been working on this for three days. Buuuuut one of those three days I didn't really do much of anything. .__.

I have decided that I'm taking way too much time on these comics.
fml.

The song playing at the beginning is "Porn Star Dancing" by My Darkest Days. Listen to it here --> [link]


Dinosaur, Mackenzie, Felix, Frill (c) ~keiva-som-ko
Shan & Ruk (c) ~Dracontar
Ori (c) *kitsune2022
Reginald (c) ~RedCalibur9
Ramona (c) ~Shrapnel-Jones
Hero, Praedator Aves & Aves Concept (c) =Sara-DiGiacomo
Alexander (c) ~Chima
"Porn Star Dancing" belongs to My Darkest Days.
Chima and Aapo belong to themselves, ~Chima & ~DreamChronicler .
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Comments: 70

Jackarais In reply to ??? [2011-07-25 17:38:29 +0000 UTC]

pffheeeheeheehee
you had better be excited, missy.
THERE'S SO MUCH MORE TO COME~

and that's interesting that you would say that, makes me think of dinosaur as more of a villain. i guess he kind of is a villain when you think about it, though. pff, delicious. nice word choice.

and yes those fingers look retarded, good eye. o.o i must've been awfully lazy on that panel or something.

thank yooooooooooou

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MightbeBianca [2011-07-24 17:54:23 +0000 UTC]

i feel bad for the male dancer XD

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Jackarais In reply to MightbeBianca [2011-07-24 18:01:25 +0000 UTC]

his name is Hero, he's one of the NPCs ><

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MightbeBianca In reply to Jackarais [2011-07-24 18:03:45 +0000 UTC]

ah XD

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sugar-warning100 [2011-07-22 00:09:38 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm maybe i should not even peek at number 3 until 4 is done...
cliff hangers make me loose the game...

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Jackarais In reply to sugar-warning100 [2011-07-22 03:07:36 +0000 UTC]

hehehe

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RedCalibur9 [2011-07-21 03:41:13 +0000 UTC]

Keiva, this is awesomer than crap. I'm diggin' the colors and characters and Hero's adorable and wow Dinosaur's not very smart and ooooh Reginald~ and it's awesome, btw.

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Jackarais In reply to RedCalibur9 [2011-07-21 04:40:27 +0000 UTC]

:3
I think reginald pops up in the background 1 or 2 more times after this~

thank you very much! yeah dino is stupid.

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2Fyamika [2011-07-20 19:49:52 +0000 UTC]

It's getting interesting...
Oh, Hero, you poor man...

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Jackarais In reply to 2Fyamika [2011-07-20 20:13:33 +0000 UTC]

dun dun dun dun
finally, action time
woop woop woop
:3

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space-aged [2011-07-20 18:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Aww, Dino looks so happy in that second panel. This is great stuff, I need moar!

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Jackarais In reply to space-aged [2011-07-20 19:20:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you :3

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UseR-MaRon-GoAnY [2011-07-20 15:51:45 +0000 UTC]

This is the best bar ever!

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Jackarais In reply to UseR-MaRon-GoAnY [2011-07-20 19:21:23 +0000 UTC]

:3

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clickmon [2011-07-20 12:40:40 +0000 UTC]

Your comics are so delicious.

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Jackarais In reply to clickmon [2011-07-20 19:21:47 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you~ that means a lot coming from you. :3

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lucasusual [2011-07-20 07:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Side-note.
Hero looks like he's freezing!
Poor guy.

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Jackarais In reply to lucasusual [2011-07-20 07:40:57 +0000 UTC]

well, if he's freezing, the other strippers must be freezing too. P:

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lucasusual In reply to Jackarais [2011-07-20 08:03:00 +0000 UTC]

I've rationalized that they make strip clubs chilly.
That's the one place that "nipply" has its advantages.

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Jackarais In reply to lucasusual [2011-07-20 08:03:43 +0000 UTC]

pfffhahahaha.
i suppose that makes sense. (:

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lucasusual [2011-07-20 07:22:17 +0000 UTC]

Woooooooaaaaaaahhhhhhh, action.
Splendid layout too, I didn't get lost even once.
Which is saying a lot for me, I don't read many comics.
The panel of Ruk first swiping his sword is fantastic.
The movement looks really good in the weapon especially.
And the one of Dinosaur in midair is AMAZING klatter topple klatter
snap
I love the hand-written sound effects.

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Jackarais In reply to lucasusual [2011-07-20 07:45:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, dude.
i'm glad the layout finally worked out on this one--i was worried it would end up being overstuffed again.
thanks for reading.

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Dracontar [2011-07-20 06:11:41 +0000 UTC]

HOLY SHOOT SO MUCH GOING ON!!!!! XDDDD

Lol, your Aves is just so damn cute... :3 (yes, he's cute now, not creepy. )

TIEM FOR ZEH ACTION!!!!

LOl typical Dino reaction of a male stripper. XDDDD

I love how we sort of reverse what happens: in yours, Ruk is already beating the shait out of Dino... a bit. But with mine, Dino is beating both my poor babies' asses... a bit. XDDDDDDD

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Jackarais In reply to Dracontar [2011-07-20 06:35:54 +0000 UTC]

yeah, well, Dinosaur is stupidly cocky, so I want to see him eat his words >:I

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Dracontar In reply to Jackarais [2011-07-20 20:55:23 +0000 UTC]

I see.

Oh, one more thing I shoulda asked awhile ago: Can DIno actually be knocked unconcious? (since he's a robot and all).

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Jackarais In reply to Dracontar [2011-07-20 21:21:01 +0000 UTC]

he would have to shut down or 'shut off' to be 'unconsious'

in my audition he was knocked out because his harddrives were reset, which was essentially the equivalent of "restarting" your computer, so to speak.

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Dracontar In reply to Jackarais [2011-07-20 21:45:30 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see.

But what about massive damage to his systems? (like the main hard drives and processors). What would that do if they were damaged substantially enough?

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Jackarais In reply to Dracontar [2011-07-20 22:15:14 +0000 UTC]

mhm , i think if you destroyed the main processors enough he would just go kaput. and not work properly anymore (but he would probably show signs of malfunctioning beforehand, like twitching and sparking and such) afterall, if you throw a computer off a cliff, it won't turn on again. right? 8D

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Dracontar In reply to Jackarais [2011-07-20 22:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Ah, okay. LOLz true dat.

But here's what I'm thinking, seeing as how he has a built-in repair system: if his main processors are damaged enough, just before the point of malfunction and/or disfunction, he has one last failsafe: a "play dead" mode, where it seems that he's pretty much deactivated, except a few core processors are still active enough to perform repairs until he is fixed enough to function at required capacity?

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Jackarais In reply to Dracontar [2011-07-20 23:37:13 +0000 UTC]

well, it takes a really long time for him to repair himself. and it doesn't start repairing until like 30 mins after he's hit, because why repair right away if you're still in battle?

and yes, i think that could work, if the repair system wasn't destroyed. so you mean like he would be destroyed and fucked up and lose the battle and be basically unconsious, and then some 30-60 mins later the repair system boots up and he fixes himself so he doesn't die, or something?

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Dracontar In reply to Jackarais [2011-07-21 07:29:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I remember that one. Heh, and it's very true, isn't it?

Well it'd be more along the lines of his head (as I assume his head contains the most essential hard drives and processors), so far as penetrating the outer shell and causing extensive damage. And possibly into a bit in his torso as well.

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Jackarais In reply to Dracontar [2011-07-21 07:38:38 +0000 UTC]

i'm lead to believe that his head has a lot of sensory processors, but most of the control centers and crucial hard drives are spread throughout his upper torso (think: heart) and his head. its not just his head. since his drives were wiped by having the whatever was lodged into him accessing by his HEAD, i assume this because the sensory areas would send all of their information to the core processors in his chest, and i assume this because his chest is a lot better protected than his head is. .__.' buuut its probably near impossible for him to function properly without his head in good shape seeing as how it has all the sensory things (balance/sight/smell/hearing)

i'm sorry if i ever told you otherwise before! essentially what i'm saying is that his "brain" is really where his "heart" would be.

but

if you've already written it out and drawn it out to work at his head and its irreversable, then don't worry about it, because i didn't put this information on his ref sheet.

i certainly will when this round is over though

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Dracontar In reply to Jackarais [2011-07-21 18:27:31 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay. Very interesting information here man.

Yeah, I was confused about that....

And sadly yes, his head... well, it ain't completely "bye bye" but.. heh, don't wanna say everything! XDD BUt yes, it's been drawn out already... getting close to finishing all the linework, actually!

Okay then. But thanks so much for letting that slide dude! Very appreciated!

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Jackarais In reply to Dracontar [2011-07-21 19:32:37 +0000 UTC]

don't worry about it then ^__^ nobody knows what i just told you so they won't mark you off for it XD

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Dracontar In reply to Jackarais [2011-07-23 19:47:02 +0000 UTC]

Okay, cool. ^_^ Heh, something that I probably should have mentioned too (dialogue wise when it comes to Shan and Ruk):

Since they're hermaphrodite, in their cultural mindset gender has little meaning in terms of sexual orientation and things relating to that. So they almost never use masculine or feminine words when talking in another language (so in english, instead of saying he or she, they would say "that human", or "it", since the word "it" in their language is also used when refering to another individual).

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Jackarais In reply to Dracontar [2011-07-24 00:20:54 +0000 UTC]

ooh, okay. *writes it down* o.o if i remember, i will fix that in my dialogue. thanks :3

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Dony123 [2011-07-20 05:28:13 +0000 UTC]

This SHOULD be named "Orgasmagoria."

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Jackarais In reply to Dony123 [2011-07-20 05:29:49 +0000 UTC]

you're just saying that because you jizzed after reading it.
i knew it would be too awesome for you.
also, get in the RC chatroom if you want. :3

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Dony123 In reply to Jackarais [2011-07-20 05:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Right meow? I may.

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Cranberry-Soap [2011-07-20 05:15:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh Frill just has the cutest derp face.

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Jackarais In reply to Cranberry-Soap [2011-07-20 05:29:56 +0000 UTC]

hee, he always does~

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Cheesy-Mac-N-Cheese [2011-07-20 04:33:13 +0000 UTC]

NEEDS MORE SPEED LINES AND SOUNDS EFFECTS AND EXPLOSIONS AND TITS
but overall pretty boss piece
AS IN HOLY TITS EPIC

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Jackarais In reply to Cheesy-Mac-N-Cheese [2011-07-20 04:54:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you baby <3 :3

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PutridProphet [2011-07-20 04:25:34 +0000 UTC]

DAMN IT WHY SO MUCH SUSPENSE
IT'S KILLING ME MAN

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Jackarais In reply to PutridProphet [2011-07-20 04:25:53 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS A GOOD THING
MAKES YOU WANT TO READ THE REST
MAHAHAHAH

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PutridProphet In reply to Jackarais [2011-07-20 04:31:03 +0000 UTC]

YOU ARE A MONSTER
A VILE MONSTER.


NOW GET BACK TO WORK THE PUBLIC IS COUNTING ON YOU

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Jackarais In reply to PutridProphet [2011-07-20 04:56:28 +0000 UTC]

I THINK I'LL PROCRASTINATE INSTEAD

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PutridProphet In reply to Jackarais [2011-07-21 00:20:12 +0000 UTC]

YOU MONSTER WHYYY

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Mage0fDo0m [2011-07-20 04:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Goodness, your story telling and paneling skills are so amazing ;u;
I can't wait for the next page~

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Jackarais In reply to Mage0fDo0m [2011-07-20 04:17:51 +0000 UTC]

n'awwh, you're too kind. :3 thank you so much <3

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