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Description ~Pegasus Rising~

She runs the sky trails on wings of stardust

Entered under the Power category of #Artists-of-Equus 's competition

Thanks to moonchilde-stock for the use of the beautiful stock [link]
The horse is from my own photos.

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I've been thinking about trying to rework this picture some more. Maybe adding more detail to the eye, more light effects around the head and smudging the body a little to give it a smoother look. Any comments on this or any other improvements would be appreciated. Also I'm in two minds about the mane. I smoothed it out to blend a little with the wings. Does this work or do you think it would it be better to have definite, clearly defined strands of hair? Thanks
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Comments: 13

Charlene-Art [2010-12-10 15:05:54 +0000 UTC]

this is a pretty awesome concept of pegasus - in space! Great idea of flight.

Yeah, definitely make the light on his head stand out a bit more its barely noticeable. Another way to possibly make the body blend more smoothly into the wings is to perhaps to digitally paint over the horse a bit with those greeny light colours. Painting over the entire horse digitally so its actually reflecting the light off the wings will make the whole piece look more cohesive I think. I think the mane with individual strands are nice. Personally I would have used a white coloured horse because they are more associated with being mythical and magical but perhaps you wanted to avoid that cliche. Or maybe even a black horse would be awesome. I guess brown kinda says to me typical barnyard animal and it looks a little strange there to me. But maybe that was the effect you were going for.

I hope this helps and you don't find any of my comments offensive.

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jacij In reply to Charlene-Art [2010-12-31 10:41:20 +0000 UTC]

There's some really nice ideas in there, thank you!

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Charlene-Art In reply to jacij [2010-12-31 11:59:31 +0000 UTC]

More than welcome

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PaperDart [2010-11-14 09:21:39 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, the wing effects are really awesome!

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jacij In reply to PaperDart [2010-11-14 13:11:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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TinaCaper [2010-11-13 07:28:44 +0000 UTC]

Well done!

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jacij In reply to TinaCaper [2010-11-14 13:03:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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TinaCaper In reply to jacij [2010-11-15 03:25:16 +0000 UTC]

sure nice work

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NorthOne [2010-10-31 21:41:39 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful effects!

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jacij In reply to NorthOne [2010-11-02 01:14:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ANIMALGIRL1869 [2010-10-31 21:40:21 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!

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jacij In reply to ANIMALGIRL1869 [2010-11-02 01:10:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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ANIMALGIRL1869 In reply to jacij [2010-11-02 04:08:34 +0000 UTC]

your welcome :d

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