jorbulas [2018-06-23 13:27:30 +0000 UTC]
Hi! Thank you for working so hard on this I really appreciate the effort you have put into it!
I actually quite like how it turned out! Especially the blend of colours; the mood matches exactly what I had in mind.
The only quick suggestions I have are to perhaps remove the graffiti on the vending machine (it stands out a little from the rest of the background and takes focus away from the main character) and place the character exactly in the centre. For your consideration, please.
I am most definitely looking forward to the second piece too!
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Izkiz-EFHN In reply to jorbulas [2018-06-23 14:51:35 +0000 UTC]
great, I'm glad you like it
unfortunately I have no way to improve it
I tried to get rid of the grafiti from the vending machine -> Commission V2
but thank you for the advice
the second will be ready soon
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