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Published: 2018-06-23 10:32:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 1
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commission for-
I tried 3 days but it did not work out like I wanted

I had problems with making a background, I do not draw architecture too often
Fortunately, the next commission bakground will be the forest, so it will definitely go better

I'm sorry that it did not work out

without this shitty BG -> 
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Character- jorbulas

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Comments: 3

planetI [2018-06-23 13:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh a Monster

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jorbulas [2018-06-23 13:27:30 +0000 UTC]

Hi! Thank you for working so hard on this   I really appreciate the effort you have put into it!

I actually quite like how it turned out! Especially the blend of colours; the mood matches exactly what I had in mind. 

The only quick suggestions I have are to perhaps remove the graffiti on the vending machine (it stands out a little from the rest of the background and takes focus away from the main character) and place the character exactly in the centre. For your consideration, please.

I am most definitely looking forward to the second piece too!  

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Izkiz-EFHN In reply to jorbulas [2018-06-23 14:51:35 +0000 UTC]

great, I'm glad you like it

unfortunately I have no way to improve it
I tried to get rid of the grafiti from the vending machine -> Commission V2
but thank you for the advice

the second will be ready soon

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