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izha — you're lucky if they kill you
Published: 2013-01-17 11:00:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 764; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 20
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she screamsdeafening conversations of millions
footsteps and wine glasses of the smart and the dull,
clinking. clinking. laughter.
life
goes
on
she screams
blankets pulled up to comforting warmth
smiles and dreams of the abandoned and the blessed,
whisper. whisper. peace.
life
goes
on
she screams
a hand covers the delicate slopes of her lips
cries and pleasure of the chosen and the thief,
echoes. echoes. silence.
life
goes
on
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Your fantastic work has been featured here !
I'd really appreciate it if you could give some love to the other features and 
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wow.. thank you for this!
i'm sorry i just saw this now.
but really, thank you very much. it's kind of late, but this made my day.
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You're very welcome, it was my pleasure 
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It's beautiful. Congrats on your DLD, i got featured too, it's what brought me to you 
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Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations and has been selected as our "Pick of the Day". It is featured in a news article here: [link] and on our main page.
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Oh, this is haunting, and so, so brilliant. Great use of pattern and repetition, in particular. Absolute favourite? "a hand covers the delicate slopes of her lips
cries and pleasure of the chosen and the thief,
echoes. echoes. silence."
Seriously. Brilliant.
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Yes, I thought as much. It's the perfect example of show, don't tell. I don't understand why writing like this doesn't get more attention.
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lol. then i'll hide that last comment. thank you. thank you. thank you. seriously. thank you. 
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