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iurypadilha — Commission: Starfire
Published: 2013-11-18 01:49:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 50636; Favourites: 1322; Downloads: 1497
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Commission forStarfire
Art by me
Hope you like it
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Starfire © DC/Warner
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Comments: 51
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super good is there any 3dcg modeling involved with this?
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nope, only digital painting
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Starfire looks hot and sexy in this picture
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The hair is excellent and of course those boobs 😍
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Today I think I can make the hair better
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Podia ter mais roupa. HEHEH brincadeira!
Está incrível! Gostei de sua técnica. Abraços.
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Mas ai você tinha que falar lá com o pessoal da DC que fez ela com tão pouco roupa e com a pessoa que encomendou o desenho hehehe.
Valeu, abraços
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Hehehe eu sei, tava de brinks! :3
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Probably the best fanart I've seen for this character. Very well done.
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ADORO a starfire, mesmo quando me sinto só amando essa dona. :c
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Most excellent work! The colors, backfround. I especially love her hair!
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Thank you very much!
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You're very welcome, hun!~
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Weak points:
Hand/feet proportions
Left boob is bigger than the right one.
Knee and elbow joints.
Eyes are too close together.
Face expression not vivid enough.
Hair at the top is too bland.
Strong points
Lighting
Background.
Clothing
Detail
The pose is pretty good too.
Flame on the hair
I enjoy the termination values / borders especially on the left leg.
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Women generally have left breast being bigger than their right.
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Thanks for the feedback.
From the weak points I can agree with the face expression, the top of the hair, and the down foot proportion
but the hands are well proportioned, based on perpective distortion as the front hand may look bigger than the back hand
but you can see if you bring them to the front of the face they will have the right propotion, same for the up foot as it have the size of the forearm.
the eyes have the size of one eye between them, as for the boobs the perspective from this point of view (from below) and the lighting gives this wierd feeling as they are wrong sized, but they are ok, maybe I should have done the shadow bigger.
for the knees and elbow I just have I clue about what you wanted to say, but not for sure.
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I hope this helps. You're very talented so pay attention to mistakes that kick your art in the buttockles!
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Always happy to. Your top-down Powergirl is still one of my fav pieces in the genre.
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excuse me for being rude here.
but what gives you the right to critique like this?
are you some kind of expert at this ? that you know how to draw things.
because looking at your profile, you havent posted any art on DA.
in my opinion this artwork looks pretty good, but sure things could always improve.
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25 years doing this, does.
Yes, I'm some kind of expert.
And exactly because it looks pretty good and he done messed up on the rotundity factor, I took my time and effort to point it out so that him, myself, and we all may learn from this mistake.
This is how art improves.
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Note that he wasn't upset about it either.
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Awesome job as always, might have to see if you could do Raven next.
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Thanks! When I reopen commission I'll tell you.
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No thank you sir. This came out REALLY good 
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