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Published: 2018-07-09 11:53:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1534; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 1
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Description I have nothing else to post here   so here you have the lines of my current WIP 

This is a scene from chapter 9 of Pain and Hope! READ HERE  

“Are they after you?” she asked, eyes eyes locked on the approaching boys.

The boy’s small nod was all she needed. One look at his dirty face, uncombed hair and old clothes told Yahizui all she needed to know. He was an outcast, most likely an orphan left to fend for himself. Sink or fight your way to the surface was the motto at the academy, and she hated it. She pushed him behind her taller frame in one swift motion and quickly tied her new forehead protector around her head, assuming a confident pose.

The four younger boys halted before her, surprised by the new turn of events. “W-who are you?” asked one of them, apparently the bolder one of the group.

Yahizui raised her head high, making sure to look at them down the length of her nose as if they were nothing more than dirt beneath her feet. “I’m the reason everyone in this school knows that picking on defenseless kids is a short-lived practice,” she said with a sneer.

The boys paled and took a step back. For a moment, it looked like they were going to turn and run, but bravery seemed to come from the fact that they outnumbered her, overriding their initial fear. “Oh yeah! Well, you graduated, so you’ve got nothing to do at the academy! Starting tomorrow, you have no power here!”

Yahizui clicked her tongue, her earlier burst of joy turning into annoyance. These brats… “I’d watch my back if I were you, brat. I’ve got eyes and ears everywhere, and I will know what you’re up to! And when I find out you picked on other kids again…” She left the threat hanging, finishing in a sinister tone. Their faces had gone white with fear, and Yahizui grinned at them, showing her teeth like a predator.

“Let’s get out of here!” screamed the bravest of them all, running as fast as his little feet could carry him, the other three cronies quickly following behind him.

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davidshadow275 [2021-06-06 03:12:28 +0000 UTC]

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Baztey [2018-07-16 20:06:17 +0000 UTC]

So sweet to see Hizui defending Naruto, so you're including more moments between them as I see, it's really nice!


also did I mention that I have this headcanon of kuma being one of naruto's bullies? lmao

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Itygirl In reply to Baztey [2018-07-17 05:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh noo!!! Bad Kuma, bad! 

I'm glad you like it! Yeah, I'm having them meet earlier on

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Baztey In reply to Itygirl [2018-07-17 06:00:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but he's more of the just laughing type rather than the being physically aggressive bully.


Man I really need to read your story xD



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Itygirl In reply to Baztey [2018-07-20 11:42:22 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I'd see him like that. It was hard to imagine Kuma as being really.... mean, like harrassing bully mean.


I can't wait until you do!

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KitsMits [2018-07-12 03:14:27 +0000 UTC]

Looking good so far! I should try doing illustrations of scenes again...anywho, looking forward to the final piece! That background looks great, how'd you do it?

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Itygirl In reply to KitsMits [2018-07-12 09:32:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

Clip studio has this ruler feature that created guides to drawing buildings in perspective. So I looked at some screenshots with the building and went from there

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badbloodpredator131 [2018-07-09 12:12:12 +0000 UTC]

vary awesome she and kaiya are both right to keep little naruto safe i wish i could as well and give him a hug telling him to to give up damn same with garra to be far i am old enough to be both there father lol  

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Itygirl In reply to badbloodpredator131 [2018-07-09 12:27:10 +0000 UTC]

haahha! same here, lol! I could be their mom if I would have had them really early XD 

Yes, both Yahizui and Kaiya are all for protecting little Naruto. Kaiya because of feelings she can't describe (hint at a family connection), and Yahizui because she's just such a sucker for underdogs. 

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badbloodpredator131 In reply to Itygirl [2018-07-09 12:37:57 +0000 UTC]

i am 30 so it's a common age to have a 4 year old son as for my character sad to say he would put the  the bully's in a genjutsu kill any of the higher ups and do what madara or obito would do and take naruto and show him the dark side of how the worlds spins sorry if that turned dark but the truth is the world is a dark place to most please don't block me for speaking my mind  

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Itygirl In reply to badbloodpredator131 [2018-07-09 13:05:04 +0000 UTC]

no worries, it's interesting to have a dark OC. Oh well it is in the Uchiha genes to go all haywire over such things, so perfectly canon (I guess you are talking about your Uchiha oc, no?) 

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badbloodpredator131 In reply to Itygirl [2018-07-09 13:18:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks and yes this is my oc orig00.deviantart.net/bc11/f/2…

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Itygirl In reply to badbloodpredator131 [2018-07-09 19:22:33 +0000 UTC]

nice! Yeah, KithMits did this, no?

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badbloodpredator131 In reply to Itygirl [2018-07-09 23:59:44 +0000 UTC]

she did i my self did a little editing 

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Itygirl In reply to badbloodpredator131 [2018-07-10 06:51:39 +0000 UTC]

nice!

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badbloodpredator131 In reply to Itygirl [2018-07-10 08:04:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks  

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