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Unu-Nunium [2020-05-04 10:46:21 +0000 UTC]
Aww, they are adorable! What a lovely hiding spot! It must be super warm and comfy! >u<
I know the idea doesn't work then and this is more of a fun comic, but in case you'd like to have some critique to improve, I just can't shake the feeling that they are just WAY too small. This isn't "children size", it's more like bitty size (and no, having Ace grown up is not an excuse, Error and Ink in the background - although just shapes - appear much taller in comparison), so overall I feel like the setting clashes with the portrait of the characters. Like I said, I know their hiding spot wouldn't work if they were bigger, but I feel like this is a conflict between the setting and what you wanted to show. Once again, I know this is a fun comic, but sometimes pointing out this stuff helps people to improve. So I thought I might. It's still really adorable and I really love their faces in the last panel. I always will be ever so grateful that you spent you time and efforts to draw this. Thank you! <3
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Israel42 In reply to Unu-Nunium [2020-05-04 10:51:46 +0000 UTC]
welcome, also i understand how you feel =3=
DANG it i should have drawn the whole part of Ace, around his stomach
where Pale and Temp where HIdding..
simply speaking he was so pose to look "fat" for some reason =w=
also, i was so pose to show that Ace is technically sitting down, which explains why you can see the top of Ink and Error's head pass by.
-3-; aw man.. i need to be precise next time
sorry
but then welcome
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Unu-Nunium In reply to Israel42 [2020-05-04 13:38:54 +0000 UTC]
No need to be sorry or to apologize, friend. I didn't mean to sound rude or like I don't appreciate your work at all. It's things like these that make us grow and getting a second opinion sometimes helps a lot which is why I pointed it out. I am genuinely missing honest critiques that help me to improve in my comments for years now. Which means feel free to critique me whenever something feels off or weird, too - sometimes you grow blind for your own mistakes when staring too long at a picture xD
You're already amazing <3
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Israel42 In reply to Unu-Nunium [2020-05-04 14:15:42 +0000 UTC]
=3=;; i honestly don't know if i want to
I have a best friend who we both share critics about art together
and then i meet a guy and critic his work as well...
he became my teacher and he will never forget it =w=;;
Ever since then he will never live it down
(even though it help him improve =3=;; )
but im happy your one of those types that listen
-3-; i still have issues when some one critic about my work but i do my best to listen and test out the
water.
still sure I will ^^
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Unu-Nunium In reply to Israel42 [2020-05-04 14:38:18 +0000 UTC]
With experiences like this I can understand why you're having trouble accepting critiques. Sometimes I have trouble, too, but mostly because I just don't understand what people want. Art is hard to put into words after all. ;w;
Once again, I really hope my comment didn't seem rude or as if I wouldn't appreciate your work. If I hurt your feelings with it, I'm very sorry. Like I said, you're already amazing. u u;
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Israel42 In reply to Unu-Nunium [2020-05-04 15:58:30 +0000 UTC]
=w=;; its okay honestly i just wish i added more effort
lately this covid 19 have bin putting me down low lately
i normally try and be lazy so get the cartoon style i want but its
bin happening on my paintings and comics where im so pose to
feel more motivated and go crazy =A=;
every one has there own style and preference
aNAtomy can be hard if the person intentionally makes the leg's short cause its there style (my old college teacher does that before)
but in the end, i guess it counts on the volume
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Unu-Nunium In reply to Israel42 [2020-05-05 10:07:13 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I getcha. I never get as much done as I want to despite I have more time on my hands... it's really upsetting :/
My general problem is that I'm pretty impatient, too. I wish drawings would be done by making a few lines but that's imply not how it works xD
"Style" and "Anatomy" are connected, but... You don't practice to make legs shorter right away from the start, and I guarantee that your college teacher didn't do that from the very beginning either. In order to simplify and create a style, you usually need to understand basic anatomy first. I recommend to look for other references or maybe make some yourself by taking photos instead of overly simplified or cartoonish references if you have trouble getting anatomy correctly. Look at references that ARE anatomically correct.
I'm 100% self-taught by the way. I've never seen an art school from the inside. Probably that's why I have a feeling like I'm not as good as I could be after 15 years of drawing (with breaks in between, granted)... but at least tutorials exist so I can still improve, even if it's more slowly than a trained professional. Art is a journey. Never feel discouraged to try something new. Keep going. Let improvement happen as you go^^
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Israel42 In reply to Unu-Nunium [2020-05-05 10:18:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the encouragement
but, i bin to Animation college twice already.. it was hard but fun.
the 1st one was hard cause The school didn't had the facilities to acquire the high demands.
my 2nd one back in college wasn't just better, i meet up with weird people and even strange teachers.
It was WAY better.. i just wish i wasn't in a hurry back then, should have taken my time =3=;
But even as I graduated, its hard trying to get into the art field to earn money. To many
competitions. being an artist trying to survive on your art, is difficult where i am, thats
why most of my co workers are well off as a writter, waiter and etc.
I still need to find a new job =3=; so i can continue making my comics some how
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Unu-Nunium In reply to Israel42 [2020-05-05 10:32:56 +0000 UTC]
Again, I can say the same. That's why I have a part-time job. I finished apprenticeship 5 or 6 years ago (honestly it's been quite a long time already, wow) and now I work as an optician with a little more than half the hours that I would in a full-time employment, so I still have time to draw and do IRL chores. While I don't actively look for a drawing job, I still have my Patreon and art commissions. All of these take a lot of time and I can consider myself heavily underpaid, but that's how things are. I won't complain about it. I personally think it's a nice middle-road, though I wouldn't mind to be able to go full-time as an artist... although I already know that in my place people only look at grades and... since I don't have grades thanks to having no art school degree, that will never happen :''3
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Israel42 In reply to Unu-Nunium [2020-05-05 10:48:34 +0000 UTC]
=w= your work speaks for it self, if that Patreon has anything to say about it
your well off
Im happy for yah ^^
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Unu-Nunium In reply to Israel42 [2020-05-05 11:15:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I'm glad you think so.
Let's both keep it up and continue to do our best! ^u^
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Dragon7273 [2020-05-03 02:41:10 +0000 UTC]
That's so cute oml
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Israel42 In reply to Dragon7273 [2020-05-03 04:44:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks yes they are XD
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Nortstar [2020-05-02 16:45:57 +0000 UTC]
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Israel42 In reply to Nortstar [2020-05-04 02:01:15 +0000 UTC]
thanks ^^
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RinChan04 [2020-05-02 12:15:42 +0000 UTC]
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RinChan04 [2020-05-02 12:14:42 +0000 UTC]
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