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Irken-Maniac — Sever
Published: 2008-09-23 23:44:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 405; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 8
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Description The Irken elite sat in the darkness of his room, the dim red and purple lights outside continuously blinking, every so often filling the room with the light of that color.  The slightly taller than average elite rested his head in his hand, the other hung loosely around a glass of an odd golden fluid, something very few Irken would know about unless they had been to the Tallest storage facility.

On the table beside him resided a hologram, him and his wife mere moments after they said their vows to each other.  He’d been through a lot since then, he now retained a large scar over his left eye, and his antennae had been broken a couple times but he kept them dangling loosely behind his head.  Beside the hologram lay his pistol, he’d tried to destroy himself, but for some reason he just couldn’t force himself too.

He leaned back in his chair, placing the glass on the table and folding his arms over his chest, closing his eyes he tried to remember happier times.  Their wedding, his promotion and Elite training, the news of their first child.  The child which was destroyed along with his wife.  Sever opened his blue eyes and yelled angrily as he pushed everything onto the floor.  His PAK forcing him to recount the day’s events.

‘Sever, Sir, we have terrible news.’ The Irken soldier had said to his superior, Sever’s waist skirt swayed loosely in the wind as he turned to the soldier. ‘Terrible news?  What can be terrible on a glorious day like today?’ Sever asked with a smile, offering his hand toward the other, who did not move to shake.  He merely offered a data and bowed low to the ground his voice so soft it was hard for Sever to hear. ‘I’m so sorry sir.’ With that the soldier scurried away without another moments hesitation.

Sever looked at the data pad with shock, his eyes wide, his antennae drooped and twitching at the tips, his mouth hung open in horror, as on the data pad he watched as his wife was attacked, their unborn smeet removed and devoured, then at last, her execution.

Without a word he closed the data pad and stormed into the Tallest’s office, slamming the data pad against the wall as he locked the door shut and removed his pistol. ‘You sick son of a-‘ He started only to be stopped by the Tallest raising his own pistol at his soldier. ‘Come Sev, sit.’ Tallest Orange said as he pointed to the chair in front of him.

Sever sat and holstered his pistol.  His head hung loosely as the taller of the two spoke.  ‘This is personal, son… I offered you that data, that view so you could judge for yourself what is to be done to that monster…’ Orange offered and patted Sever’s shoulder. ‘She was family Sev, and as her husband it is your responsibility to avenge her, and as your father I say give’m hell, but as your commanding officer, I must force you into six months of military leave… ‘

Sever stood without another word and exited his father’s office.  His mother would be mourning in her own way. Being the child of two Tallest made him have to work all that much harder at proving he wasn’t just an elite due to his bloodline.  He sat in the voot which he set on autopilot and allowed it to take him home.

Snapping back to reality Sever stood and walked slowly, and fairly drunkenly to his weapon’s cashe which most Elite’s owned and began to pack his weapons and their respective ammunition in bags. ‘As your father, I say give’m hell.’ He recalled his father’s words as he loaded rifles and ammunition, his data pad beeped and he answered the call from his mother, Tallest Pink.

“Sever, honey what are you doing?” She asked as he continued to load his weapons, without a word to her of his business. “Sweetie, you will not have aid by the military, and this monster is as violent and merciless as they come, are you prepared to handle that?” she asked in a pleading voice.  “Sever I cannot lose you too, Glitz was our daughter in law, and we loved her dearly, as well as the smeetling, but you cannot act rashly, Sever listen to me as a Tallest, if not your mother!” Sever turned to the data pad and dropped his rifle into its case.

“I’m on six months military leave, I don’t take orders during that time.” With that he pushed off the data pad and began loading his weapons into his Ring Cutter.  Stopping only to gaze at the picture of his beautiful wife one final time before shutting down the hologram and tucking it into his pocket.

The Ring Cutter was already prepped and ready for take off, Sever hopped into the pilot’s chair and plugged in his data pad, the ship rose slightly and rocked a bit to the left as it turned, he pulled back on the controls and pushed the petal with his foot, the ship rocketing out of his personal hanger, destroying the small living corters attached.

“Computer, I want all information on the Irken that escaped Devastis Max this afternoon…” Sever said as he tore through Irk’s atmosphere. The computer beeped and a file opened. “Name: Hyde, Class: Elite in training, Arch-Angel.” Sever looked at the photograph of the irken who had slain his wife and child and violently pressed the off button.
“Hyde… I’m coming for you, to put you down like the animal you are.” Sever said to himself in a voice which offered only hatred and malice, he would extract his revenge, even if he had to take down the universe in the process.
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Comments: 20

Rowandiamore [2008-09-27 05:44:23 +0000 UTC]

OMG!*hopping up and down excitedly* This has given my total inspiration hun! aww and tank yous for avenging me glitz^^. This is like, really good...exacting revenge on yourself..lol.
Kil: Go get em sev!
Glitz:.............

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Invader-Sideos [2008-09-24 13:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Sid is MEAN, to everyone, and he don't even know it!

But hum, I felt like you could have put in a lot more... background if you will, it was kinda confusing to figure out where he was.

But anyways, it looks like it could be a nice revenge-story!

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Irken-Maniac In reply to Invader-Sideos [2008-09-24 17:34:56 +0000 UTC]

I was feeling abit "Blah" when I wrote this but the next parts will be much better.

Sideos is like Samuel L Jackson, he's in everything even if he isn't mentioned

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Invader-Sideos In reply to Irken-Maniac [2008-09-24 23:24:03 +0000 UTC]

Indeed!
He's a whore for attention... like some kind of attention whore!

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Irken-Maniac In reply to Invader-Sideos [2008-09-24 23:34:08 +0000 UTC]

But he doesn't have any of the diseases that attention whores get.

His awesomeness totally destroys all lameness.

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Invader-Sideos In reply to Irken-Maniac [2008-09-25 00:00:02 +0000 UTC]

But what if he secretly blogs whining about how people don't pay him enough attention! D=

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Irken-Maniac In reply to Invader-Sideos [2008-09-25 01:22:56 +0000 UTC]

Sideos... a Blogger? ROFL, I could see that, him sitting at a computer, typing away, listening to Kash on the radio or something, bitching about how much more popular his son is than him, only never revealing he's the daddy, or that he is Sideos himself. Using some net name like Irkiller13 or something like that lol.

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Sanoon [2008-09-24 07:37:48 +0000 UTC]

"...the ship rocketing out of his personal hanger, destroying the small living corters attached."

Quarters, not corter, silly man.

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Irken-Maniac In reply to Sanoon [2008-09-24 17:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Mucho thank you homieo,

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Sanoon In reply to Irken-Maniac [2008-09-24 20:39:27 +0000 UTC]

Si

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Invader-Nyko [2008-09-24 00:50:50 +0000 UTC]

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IIGToons [2008-09-24 00:04:18 +0000 UTC]

wow, awesome man, cant wait to read more

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Irken-Maniac In reply to IIGToons [2008-09-24 00:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

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Gvozdi [2008-09-23 23:59:37 +0000 UTC]

One of the worst things you can when killing, making it personal.

Nice use of 'Malice'. You rarely see that word anymore.

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Irken-Maniac In reply to Gvozdi [2008-09-24 00:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I don't know of anyone who really uses the word anymore, cept for maybe Sid, because he's all diffrent kinds of awesome sauce.

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Gvozdi In reply to Irken-Maniac [2008-09-24 00:48:11 +0000 UTC]

Some bands use that term.

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Irken-Maniac In reply to Gvozdi [2008-09-24 00:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Awesome sauce? HOLY SHIT YOU HAVE A DEXTER QUOTE! YOU RULEZ NAO!

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Gvozdi In reply to Irken-Maniac [2008-09-24 00:55:00 +0000 UTC]

No 'Malice'.

ABOUT TIEM U NOTICED!

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Irken-Maniac In reply to Gvozdi [2008-09-24 01:02:45 +0000 UTC]

HEZEUS CHRISTOVE! WOOOO!

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Gvozdi In reply to Irken-Maniac [2008-09-24 01:04:31 +0000 UTC]

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