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Big-Bad-Wulf [2010-06-14 22:57:28 +0000 UTC]
i'm sorry about the whole partner thing. however, this is one good piece of battle ^_^, and the story u put in the bottom is awesome.
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Bleach99 [2010-06-14 18:39:20 +0000 UTC]
Inuuuuuuu! While I may not be able to give any artistic criticism (as frankly, I see NOTHING wrong with this image), I *CAN* commend you on the wonderful job you did all on your own. I know you went through hell and back to get this done, and it really shows how much time and love you put in. So kudos to you for biting the bullet and shouldering all the work. 83 If you get kicked because of his fail, I'll be HELLA pissed for you.
As far as the piece goes, I think it's really well thought out and VERY dynamic. There's a lot going on, but the way you've got everything placed doesn't make it look at all cluttered. And the really bright, icy highlights are a great touch. 83
I really liked the writeup, too. 8D I like how it reflected your frustrations in the situation, and how Kaori pulled it together for the win. Your writing is really at its best when you pull from your own emotions, and like I said before, I'd love to see the same level of believability in all of your pieces. :>
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Inunaide In reply to Bleach99 [2010-06-14 19:30:06 +0000 UTC]
<333 Thank you Bleach, though I may sound like a tardette saying this, I do love getting good criticism. Especially when it's written and explained as lovely as this, rather then just "It's awesome lulz" but even those I love because I know people like my art 83. Now if only I could get the DF critics over here xD.
But back to this now, I'm glad my redrawn version of this came out awesome, since the other one had the issue of being too cluttered by some, so I tried to pull the camera back just a bit to give the viewer more room, I'm glad it paid off 83. I honestly wasn't very proud of my highlights, I tried to make them bold and crisp because of the intense light beaming from Kingdra, but to me it looked messy, so I dulled them down, but in turn took away from giving that intense light. But I'm glad it didn't come off as total fail <33
xD Glad you loved the little story I added, I try to do all of that for these images <3 I actually plan to do a comic of how Kaori and Chich make up, since I have made up with my partner. Like I said, he is able to admit wrong doing and was an awesome person to write the head of the group to ask not to take me out just because of the fact it wasn't a collab, and not to for his own mistake. That showed me that through the frustration, he is a stand up guy, he just needs to learn to be more reliable and remember the projects he's doing. But even if he let me down a bit, at least he isn't a tool as a person. And once I get the okay to edit the deviation description from the head boss, I will edit my rantings of Hearsigner, because he has apologized and I see no reason to keep the ill will there. But since before it was cause for disqualification if we edited ANYTHING from our deviation once it was submitted, I need to leave it until I have the go ahead.
And on the bright side, I got to play with the effects myself and get back into working on the color theory shading. Thanks for leaving me such a wonderful comment, I hope my writing continues to impress you. And now that I'm doing more of it, I am sure you will write some lovely critiques for me in that department.
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