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Published: 2015-08-23 03:24:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1511; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 3
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Description EDIT: Changed the title, added some more detail and proportions to his legs, as well as tweaked the right (Mickey's right arm) a bit.
Tell me what you think! Needs a better title? Maybe something else could use improving...

Remember that project I kept rambling about? So yah, here's the cover for a little comic I might start working on~ Let me know how you see the pose of Mickey falling, because the cloak blocked out his torso and most of his legs ;_; I'm also a little unsure about the title, but you guys tell me what you think~

Yeah, it's nearly midnight right now, so I'm probably gonna wake up tomorrow morning and regret ever doing this xD

Here's the pitch~

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Mickey Mage is a thief, and has a gift that not many Mortals have: The ability to wield both Light and Dark Magic. But Mickey takes this gift for granted, and is addicted to Dark Magic.

Surely Minnie, a Demon Hunter and his fiancé, can keep the addiction under control, right?

Troubles rise when the all-powerful Sorcerer’s Hat chooses Mickey himself to fulfil a prophecy centuries in the making. But why would the hat—an enchanted item made for light magic—choose someone with such a dark heart?

Now, Mickey must learn to control his special gift, and save the universe before the Dark Magic consumes him.

Inspired by Twisted-Wind's Count Mickey Dragul reimagining.

Thanks to for help with the story and cover.
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Comments: 89

IntrovertedArabi In reply to ??? [2015-09-29 20:29:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I did take some inspiration from the anime Bleach :3

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omegaragnrok In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-30 00:33:25 +0000 UTC]

XD just dont hollowfy mickey 'cause ill never look at him the same way again! XD

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to omegaragnrok [2015-09-30 00:47:22 +0000 UTC]

Well... now that you mention it, I can't promise you that Lol~

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omegaragnrok In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-30 00:50:54 +0000 UTC]

hmm. hollowfied mickey mouse..........................  ..AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!( runs right out the freakin door)

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to omegaragnrok [2015-09-30 19:58:00 +0000 UTC]

Aaawwww yyyeeeaaaahhhh~ Think I'm gonna do some art for that~ (Though it won't be canon to the story, so no spoilers there )

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omegaragnrok In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-10-01 22:20:59 +0000 UTC]

What have I done?! (bangs head against wall)

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PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-11 15:02:34 +0000 UTC]

the cover is just great. i love the tribal art look it has, and the font is beautiful too. i would not change a thing. it should be a very effective cover art for your comic. remember that you, me, no one, will EVER please all the people all the time. there's probably thousands, millions of alternative covers that would work very well. this is one of them.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-11 20:20:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, Glenn! And yeah, while one piece can't please everyone, I'm just aiming for the art to be as relate able to the audience and comic as possible ^^

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PeterGriffinislove In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-12 01:33:48 +0000 UTC]

the style of your cover art is perfect for the comic. i think i am going to enjoy this comic book!

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-13 12:47:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3 Just released the third page yesterday~ Fourth page is gonna be awesome~

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PeterGriffinislove In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-17 12:23:24 +0000 UTC]

and i am enjoying it very much.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-17 21:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Yay!! I'm glad that you like it ^^

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PeterGriffinislove In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-17 22:13:06 +0000 UTC]

and i am sure i would enjoy your books too, but i cant find enough time to answer comments even.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-18 19:51:14 +0000 UTC]

Awww, that's alright!! I can barely find the time to even answer all the messages I get ;_; I used to be able to do it all in one day during the summer, but now it's just~ ;_; Sorry if I can't respond to every single message like I used to.

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PeterGriffinislove In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-18 20:26:53 +0000 UTC]

understood. and perfectly fine. i know, you just don't love me anymore lol just JOKING DAMMIT. XDDD
we are good. i am thrilled to just hear from you every day!
but make sure you keep me filled in on the very good and the very bad.
i have to keep an eye out for my baby sister.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-18 20:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Around how many messages do you recieve daily? Cuz like, I'm at the point where I can't respond to everybody, but I feel so bad ;_;

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PeterGriffinislove In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-18 20:40:17 +0000 UTC]

maybe 30 notes, 100 comments, just guessing. and then usually 1/2 the day on kik with Nati (again, yes)

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-18 20:57:46 +0000 UTC]

Ah, okies. Yeah I usually have around 50-100 comments, but only around 1-2 notes.

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PeterGriffinislove In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-20 06:34:11 +0000 UTC]

in 7 months, i have these left to either delete or store in folders. i have already deleted thousands, and stored thousands.
i have over 1,000 in just THAT GIRL's folder with probably that many more to put into it. but i never have time to delete
or store, BECAUSE I AM ALWAYS GETTING OR SENDING NOTES. that's like a catch-22 i think?
and i have no idea what the 174 drafts are! omfg. me fingers is bleeding from it.
and of course i am not complaining, i love it.
         

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-20 13:29:54 +0000 UTC]

O___________________O

Yeah, I'd probably die of heart attack if my inbox was flooding with messages like yours xD

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PeterGriffinislove In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-20 15:33:41 +0000 UTC]

hey, a guy has to do SOMETHING here on dA if he is not an artist.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-20 16:12:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I guess that's true~ Meanwhile, I'm struggling to balance my time between art, writing and dA, despite my organizing and planning xD

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PeterGriffinislove In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-20 16:20:21 +0000 UTC]

i am starting to see why some people team up with others  to handle one account.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-22 19:48:01 +0000 UTC]

That's actually not a bad idea.

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PeterGriffinislove In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-22 21:57:37 +0000 UTC]

i know. but i haven't given up trying to maintain mine alone, not yet!

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-23 14:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha xD I just have no idea who to share it with, if I ever end up doing that. There aren't many irl friends who know dA enough.

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PeterGriffinislove In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-23 18:03:45 +0000 UTC]

oh, they don't need to be IRL at all. Nati shares accounts with others from other countries. all that is needed is trust in each other and one shared password.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-23 19:21:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that could work :3 Idk, thinking about it, I think it would be a little confusing for me to share an account with someone online, since like, what if you need to note their original account or something, and they're not logged in yet?

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PeterGriffinislove In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-23 21:13:17 +0000 UTC]

maybe skype or kik or whatsapp them

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to PeterGriffinislove [2015-09-24 19:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that could work~

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WishExpedition23 [2015-08-30 16:35:12 +0000 UTC]

DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE!!!!!  That looks AWESOME! And FYI, I too, made a Sorcerers Apprentice comic not long ago. The link to see the first page is down below. Feel free to check it out and reference it for ideas.

fav.me/d8u191p

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to WishExpedition23 [2015-08-30 18:18:54 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks! I'm glad that you like it!!

And yeah, I just checked out your fanfic, and I read it all the way through. I absolutely love the way you portrayed the almost father-son relationship between Yen Sid and Mickey, it's definitely something I haven't seen before! (Yen Sid in the ending though, PRICELESS! )

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WishExpedition23 In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-08-30 19:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I hope your comic comes out swell, too!

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to WishExpedition23 [2015-08-31 22:39:24 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure! Thank you for showing me your comic ^^

And thanks so much! I'm halfway through the first page by now, but I'm a bit unsure about the second panel... Meh.

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WishExpedition23 In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-01 02:23:38 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure. Feel free to look at my stuff whenever you want. Do the best you can. It's better trying than not.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to WishExpedition23 [2015-09-01 19:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! It's great that you've got a ton of references of Yen Sid from all angles, there aren't that many out there!

I'm just a little worried that a specific design won't look as good as I first envisioned it...

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WishExpedition23 In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-01 21:55:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it's irritating they don't have much. I'll bet you anything they would have a lot of reference and tutorials of drawing the sorcerer in the Disney Archives. The best way to get the design you want is to try and try again. Just keep practicing on it, but don't stress out.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to WishExpedition23 [2015-09-02 19:36:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I guess that is the best way :3 Damn, I'm wondering how the animators of Yen Sid were able to accomplish animating him xD

But wait, what are these Disney Archives?

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WishExpedition23 In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-02 22:13:16 +0000 UTC]

In the Disney Studios in Burbank, CA.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to WishExpedition23 [2015-09-03 22:30:05 +0000 UTC]

._.
o_o
O_O

I MUST GO.

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WishExpedition23 In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-03 22:50:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry to say this, but they don't give tours anymore. The only way for anyone to get access to go into the studio are A) work for the company, B) be an actual archivist in the Disney business, or C) gain 12,000 points in the Disney Rewards access codes online when you buy movies and merchandise.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to WishExpedition23 [2015-09-03 23:26:06 +0000 UTC]

Damnit, that sucks ;_;

I mean, I'll probably be working for Disney as a concept artist in the future, so that could be a ticket in :3 Do they have any archives online, like a public domain website or something?

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WishExpedition23 In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-03 23:44:52 +0000 UTC]

Pretty much. Here's the link to the site. d23.com/walt-disney-archives/

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to WishExpedition23 [2015-09-05 13:01:42 +0000 UTC]

EEEEIIII

THANKS SO MUCH

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WishExpedition23 In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-05 15:36:33 +0000 UTC]

Next page finished yet?  

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to WishExpedition23 [2015-09-05 16:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Not yet XD Got a ton of other projects on my hands, so I'm trying to finish them all at once ^^

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WishExpedition23 In reply to IntrovertedArabi [2015-09-05 17:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Ok. I'll be looking forward to the next page. Just don't stress yourself out.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to WishExpedition23 [2015-09-06 00:17:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanksies :3

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dragonpigeons [2015-08-24 17:57:26 +0000 UTC]

I like the general concept you are going for with this cover page. As for the falling pose of Mickey, it looks a little odd with those legs tbh. It's not clear to me what positions the legs are in. Perhaps it would be better to make his legs shorter so most of it is covered by the cloak, leaving the feet sticking out on top (if that makes sense). Mickey generally has short limbs anyway, unless you are going for an altered look on the Disney mascot?
The left arm (or Mickey's right arm) looks slightly out of place as well. I think it's too far back and should be closer to his head otherwise it would look as if his neck is really long.
I really like this idea of mixing white and black on Mickey which represents his Light and Dark Magic abilities, and I see the link between the dark hand closing in on Mickey and him reaching out for the Sorcerer's Hat i.e. going from Dark to Light. But I wonder if there's just too much darkness for the background for such a story? If it was up to me, I'd have lightened the area around the hat more to make it obvious that it represents Light.
One final thing - the title is too generic (no offence ) I'm not sure if you're going for a serious mood with this story but I feel like naming it more like 'The Curse of Mickey Mouse' or something would sound better.

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IntrovertedArabi In reply to dragonpigeons [2015-08-24 20:36:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much for pointing this stuff out! I've been staring at this picture for days until I became blind to it, so thanks for being my second pair of eyes ^_^

And yes, I was thinking the same thing about the title. I just wasn't sure what to name it at the time, so I had Dark Magic as a placeholder ^_^ Something better will come up eventually...

Again, thanks so much! I truly appreciate it <3

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