HOME | DD
InokitheFox — #146 Moltres
#bird #birds #flame #flying #kanto #legendary #moltres #orange #phoenix #pokemon #red #yellow #tpye #firedbird #fire #kantopokemon
Published: 2017-12-20 15:18:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1032; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
Trying to step up my game with fire. I think it's an improvement to the fire I created in my Blaziken piece.
:thumb717152419:
Related content
Comments: 9
Hi! I see that you've requested critique on this piece, and I'm here to give you one
The fire effects here are absolutely amazing! 
I think that the rocks in the background could use some more and stronger highlights, since Moltres's flames are probably hundreds if not thousands of degrees, and would likely superheat anything in its vicinity. For the same reason, I also think that you can strengthen the flame aura around Moltres to more strongly convey the heat of the flames. These are really minor things though, and overall, your piece is wonderful~
Hope this helps, and keep up the wonderful work!
P.S. Just a heads up, the thumb that you linked in your description isn't showing up~
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Hey thanks so much! Its a very informative critique and I appreciate that greatly! The rocks were actually foreground but.. came out far to dark .. or really I didn't give a good background to make them pop out more. Ah.. something to improve for the future.. and well as the glow. I was actually pretty afraid I was doing to much for the flame's glow but Im glad you shared your thoughts about it
Again thanks so much for you input!! And i'll see if I can fix that thumb.. it shows up just fine in my end.. so I wonder what's going on with it ><
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
