skiesofchaos [2009-11-08 01:21:59 +0000 UTC]
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As to the costume. Suggestions only. The read cape would be nice in heavier, more drapey fabric. Maybe velvet or some such. the light weight of it and the wrinkliness detracts a bit I think compared to the drape of the rest of the outfit. I think the hair frankly works very well with the costume, as darker hair would blend in too much. I like the props, but maybe a darker case would be nice. Of course your likely limited in your available choices. A doctors bag would be most excellent.As to the photography. It is nice and clear, though a little more light on the side would be nice, just to bring up the details a little with a touch of contrast. I could certainly see this walking down a shadowy street in old london, appearing out of the fog. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> All in all, I think its quite brilliant and once again I am impressed by you and your sisters talent and imagination.spirits bless my friend,
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InKibus In reply to skiesofchaos [2009-11-11 19:00:31 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for this critique! I always appreciate hearing EVERYONE'S view on how to improve or what can be re-done better.
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