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MissArisu [2016-04-14 13:44:45 +0000 UTC]

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You did a great job on this! I love how you used the white color for their shine, totally adds to the slimy appearance! However, they look like they're slouching a bit. Remember to pay attention to your characters' posture, it might help to balance the head and neck (make sure their neck is not too off center - even if the angle suggests so). Also, try looking at neck-collarbone-shoulder tutorials, you would notice that there is something (kind of like a triangle) in between the neck and the shoulder bridge/blades, it might also help. Another thing I noticed is the girl's braid (is that a braid or a headpiece?). It's not really that noticeable but it would be really helpful to also look into tutorials on how to draw braided hair!

Other than problems with posture/proportions (I understand the proportions since they're chibis), I think you did great! I really like the girl's outfit. Especially love the colors (and did I already mention the white highlights? I did?.. Oh..  ) Oh wait, last thing, you could try adding a white highlight above the slimy curves instead of shadows to give them more depth. Hope I helped!  

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TheDviousOne [2016-04-12 23:00:03 +0000 UTC]

Hello, commenting on behalf of

These are some really cute chibis and the coloring is pretty decent. I would say there's too much shine, but since these are slime creatures, i willing to overlook that, though as the previous person said, maybe look up some references on how to substances like gel. Their accessories could use some work as some look rather wonky (like the female one's head band, and the male's bracelets). Just take the time to make them look neater.

And this is more a personal opinion than an actual critique, but since these are gel creatures, the normal hair, arms and clothes look rather odd against the jelly-like legs. Maybe giving their hair round edges and making their arms bendy (think Adventure Time or Ricky and Morty) would make them look more gel-like. Again, just a personal suggestion, so you can ignore if you want, and i don't know what these species are suppose to look like.

Hope this is useful to you and keep up the good work

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Sweet-heartwork [2016-04-09 23:46:44 +0000 UTC]

Aww!

First off, wonderful highlights and color usage. I like the contrast, it makes the characters look very shiny and cute. I will say that the big things of this image that make it lackluster is the fact that there is a shadow crossing the image itself. You need to be really careful about that in traditional work, especially without a scanner. Maybe add a light/lamp below the camera so the paper is lit up? The other thing is that I am confused about their light source. I think the highlights heed the image when they are placed without a light source in mind. An example is that there are highlights on the male where there are also shadows. A highlight is the center of brightness, and their placement matters. (I know they are gel people, but you should look up a lighting tutorial that will do wonders for that!

I like how you did your 'watermark'. Nice touch <3

 ~Sweet

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HelenaWT [2016-04-04 12:57:21 +0000 UTC]

How adorable !! I love them so much! your drawing looks fun, shiny, it's really nice

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Dark-Lina [2016-04-03 13:27:01 +0000 UTC]

och how sweet ! he has ladybird<3

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Inkcess [2016-03-20 19:56:08 +0000 UTC]

PixByrd i coloured them, finally. Is their design okay?

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Neko-jiangshi [2016-02-16 06:43:57 +0000 UTC]

so cuteee !! you drew these in front of me yesterday didnt u >?/
ill still agree ur lineart is bomb !

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