Comments: 17
Headzor [2018-03-30 01:07:47 +0000 UTC]
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Yoooo!
Ok i'm gonna break this down to various sections based on one core part of this art.
Cropping: The crop is very good with the basic portrait layout. The top crop leaves enough space for her head and the bottom leaves enough space for her feet as well as showing there is nothing distracting from either the background or (theoretical) foreground. The sides are also cropped nicely to include the complete background.
Background: I love the background for 3 main reasons: 1) It gives a very misty and therefore mysterious quality to the main character. 2) Its colours and shape frame the character very well indeed, i love the pink pastel colouring mixed with the white above and the black below denoting a light source behind and above the main character. I also love how you have blended the background into the foreground as well with the mist coming across her front. 3) I love how the background shines through the transparency the main character is wearing in a muted tone.
Main figure: The main figure is very well done and very original, Her contrasting pastel colouring between blue, aqua and pink gives very good definition of her clothing. If i had to guess i would say she is quite tall,. Proportion wise, i think hands, feet and head are all in proportion with the rest of her body, perhaps the feet/boots may be a tad too large though? She is one thick woman though and a glory to behold!
Pose: This pose is possibly the strongest part of this artwork! It absolutely oozes confidence, from her one eyed stare, her straight back, her arms by her sides and her hands partially closed makes anyone believe SHE IS IN CHARGE. Her pose also shows off her figure extremely well, i love how you have shown just about every curve she has.
Clothing: Mixed very closely with the main character, multiple layers of skin, clothing and transparency really give this character depth. If i came across her i would have to wonder if she were an enemy or a friend based on her clothing alone. I love her tight fitting mask and pony tail, especially how it appears partially gooey. Your attention to detail in regards to her collar, boots, shirt etc is extremely good. I love the parallel lines next to some angled lines that make up her clothing.
Reflections: An excellent eye to detail. The way you have blended the white light off her angled surfaces is really nice. Feathered and hard lines mixed together adds a lot of depth and shows the seriousness of your work. It's absolutely gorgeous.
Overall: Your skill is amazing as is your creative talent! If there was just one fault it may be that the background colouring detracts from the main character somewhat, there may be a little too much pink. I love your work and think this is the best piece i have seen of it. Thank you for drawing it!
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howling2damoon [2018-07-11 00:40:49 +0000 UTC]
great work as always. I'd lvoe to see more of her
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Infla-factory In reply to howling2damoon [2018-07-11 06:48:27 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much, I will try to do more drawing with this character
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ClassicalSalamander [2018-03-29 03:03:06 +0000 UTC]
I like the layers and translucency, the shine is quite wonderful! Looks like Dr. Silex is very well protected in her suit!
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Infla-factory In reply to ClassicalSalamander [2018-07-10 18:21:35 +0000 UTC]
yes she is very well protected with his outfit, thank you for your comment, I really like the difficulty of achieving kind of texture and material
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Infla-factory In reply to sakuchaoran [2018-07-10 18:19:49 +0000 UTC]
merci beaucoup sakuchaoran toujours à suivre mon travail et qui écrit toujours des super commentaires, merci mon ami
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Infla-factory In reply to sakuchaoran [2018-07-11 08:20:18 +0000 UTC]
je te cache pas que pour moi c'était la même entre le travail, mon déménagement et les seances photos j'avais pas beaucoup de temps, mais le dessin me manquait tellement que je me suis fais une grosse séance dessin ou j'ai fais plein de croquis et autre et la j'ai sorti un certain nombre de dessin.
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JonnybHKG [2018-03-28 11:41:16 +0000 UTC]
Lovely work as always 😍
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Infla-factory In reply to JonnybHKG [2018-07-10 18:18:36 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much my friend who follows my work and who always writes nice and encouraging comments
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JonnybHKG In reply to Infla-factory [2018-07-11 11:02:13 +0000 UTC]
Hehe your welcome buddy, ive always liked your work its just really good to look at ^^
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Headzor [2018-03-28 10:38:54 +0000 UTC]
Love it, will write a critique
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Infla-factory In reply to Headzor [2018-07-10 18:22:42 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much, I look forward to your criticism; thanks to you
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