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Act 22!
Haha been guite busy, the next act will be up after a month's wait!
Until then, enjoy this one. Things are running pretty wild and even comical.

Edgar is being a total jackass but why, oh why, I start to feel it's kinda attractive...? I must be going crazy... Gretchen needs anger management. Willy shows the power of friendship asdfgh...!

Have a nice day everyone!
Ine-chan loves you all sooooooooooOOOoooo much~!!!




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Sigfriedofgaea [2014-04-14 06:20:07 +0000 UTC]

HOLY SHIZ!   Morgana's fourth form!  LOVE IT TO DEATH!

As a personal preference, I think the name "Artemis" would've suited her better, and the ability she used be called something like "Archeress Arrow" or "Pierce Arrow."  Still... how many forms will Morgana have?!

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Inesidora In reply to Sigfriedofgaea [2014-04-16 17:38:14 +0000 UTC]


Haha, thank you!

I'd lie if I said that idea didn't cross my mind, but I didn't want to name her Artemis because Artemis is one of the most known deities and widely used in all kinds of fandoms and artwork -so to say, it's so obvious I wanted to branch away from it a bit this time and make her little less "labeled" I already use a lot of forms that have an actual name/deity name so this was my preference

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Sigfriedofgaea In reply to Inesidora [2014-04-17 06:09:51 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

Really?  It was for the sake of originality...

I doubt it would have hurt to add another Legendary named after a well-known deity to your collection of Bakugan, but that's just me... I see your point though.

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Inesidora In reply to Sigfriedofgaea [2014-04-22 19:00:05 +0000 UTC]




My point was I already do use them a lot -so therefore, something different for a change. I stand behind my decision, I'd dislike her as Artemis, this one works better. Her form's idea was to be a warrioress with bow and arrow, and Artemis is a Goddess of Hunt and Moon, so even if Artemis is often portrayed with the bow defining her as an "archeress" isn't entirely correct -and my idea was to portray a soldier lady, not a goddess ^^

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Sigfriedofgaea In reply to Inesidora [2014-04-26 07:29:57 +0000 UTC]



I did not think of that... very interesting indeed!  I like this thought process!

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DestinedOneofIce [2014-03-05 16:24:21 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully done^^ I love^^ Great job I can't wait to read more!

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Inesidora In reply to DestinedOneofIce [2014-03-07 21:22:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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DestinedOneofIce In reply to Inesidora [2014-03-12 19:35:17 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome^^

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Yuvena [2014-03-05 15:59:54 +0000 UTC]

I feel so sorry for Gretchen She has such a sad face...

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Inesidora In reply to Yuvena [2014-03-07 21:23:02 +0000 UTC]

Yes, poor thing she chose a bad company otl...

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Yuvena In reply to Inesidora [2014-03-07 21:34:56 +0000 UTC]

Edgar should give her a hug... although, I'd look weird seeing him do something like that. Maybe Edward.... At least someone who's name start with a 'ed'

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Inesidora In reply to Yuvena [2014-03-07 22:06:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh my yes...

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Yuvena In reply to Inesidora [2014-03-07 22:22:01 +0000 UTC]

Hehe

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Runo2 [2014-03-04 11:51:24 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing,dear Inesidora! Your art is great!
God jeab,dear!
Your drawing is awesome!

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Inesidora In reply to Runo2 [2014-03-07 21:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Runo2 In reply to Inesidora [2014-03-07 21:51:08 +0000 UTC]

no problem dear Ine!

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kamenridermebius [2014-03-04 03:52:02 +0000 UTC]

me: i grow bored just watch time for to get in on the fight arise hex  titanium crimson!

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BakuganWC [2014-03-03 03:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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Inesidora In reply to BakuganWC [2014-03-03 21:35:06 +0000 UTC]

Please don't use my account/art for personal advertisiment without asking me :/

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chealsea2307 [2014-03-02 16:50:34 +0000 UTC]

After reading this, all I have in mind was MORGANA!!!!Why are you so badass?  
Seriously if there is a nomination for best lines in this Act, I'll give it to Morgana I love how she called Medusa a "useless piece of junk" and the way she taunted Gretchen is just...argh, I just love it Go warrior!   Her manner of speech is so similar to Luka's too. I wonder if it's natural or he inspired her
I think so far Archeress is her most beautiful form! She's become a complete human, and a beautiful one!

Haha, sure Gretchen is so aggressive toward anyone who opposed her Edgar-sama She has such great agility though! Too bad her opponent is also very agile himself

It seems everything is going well with Willy's group I still feel a little sorry for Vince though, cause it's 3 against 1

All the while I wondered to where Cleopatra went, and there she was, hiding in the cliff Her encounter with Bird is so hilarious! Typical girl! I can't wait to see how she deal with this bug

P/S: Willy's smile brings such warm feelings!

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Inesidora In reply to chealsea2307 [2014-03-07 21:38:23 +0000 UTC]


Haha Mona-chan is kinda mean when it comes to this
Haha oh my that's some recognition! x///D
You know these are times when I'm so sad I'm not Japanese -I could use such a large range of sayings and vocabulary to create a unique "way of speech" to each character and also use more "rude" tongue, I'll try to limit the swearing to bastard or such (and some will still get offended lol) but it'd be fun to use more, ahem, strong expression of words in a bad situation xD But if this is well enough then I'm happy!
Ah yes Morgana is like, the epitome of fighting haha... A warrioress not to be pissed Her behaviour can have guite dramatic changes off and on battle.
Haha Archeress, the first none-mutant lady Normal amount of limbs~ She was supposed to be some weird elf-lady and also inspired by Artemis the Goddess of Hunt. I wanted a form that uses weaponry to attack. Inventing new forms to Morgana has become one of the things I really look forward while making the storyboard

"My Edgar baby asdfgh hands off you damn who ever you are never seen you before in my life but ima slice you with my blade!!" ... yeah, that's the aggressive Gretchen at her best lolol... Though not the best choise to pick a fight with haha...
Haha yes well, bad Hex needs to be taken down. No can do. No mercy! xD
Cleo is a bit lazy haha... Bugs are irritating hoho... I wonder how it'll work out...

P/S: Finally the emo is happy. Took long enough! (and grew more tough since act 5 )

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chealsea2307 In reply to Inesidora [2014-03-08 14:53:04 +0000 UTC]

There's nothing wrong with stronger word expressions. If anything, it better shows the characters' emotions in crisis situation And since most of your readers are teenagers or even older, I don't think many people are offended by a little profanities here or there. Actually, I've seen worse in other manga. Yours are still nice

Yes, she's definitely not one to be messed with Oh my...don't tell me her attitudes change accordingly to her forms
Archeress is beautiful! And I really like the Artemis reference Lol, at this rate you might have to make a reference booklet for Morgana's different forms

Not that it would be easier facing Mai either The girl may want some payback time
The epic encounter between a Queen and a bug Yeah, I wonder

P/S: Good for him!

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Inesidora In reply to chealsea2307 [2014-03-08 20:04:49 +0000 UTC]


I hope so! But there will always be people to complain otl (not that I care much but haha). Personally I think my vocabulary is guite limited so at times I need to seek good phrases. Other manga helps a lot though, but I'm glad if it's good in your eyes. Maybe I'm just too critical too haha... (I especially like the way the manga/anime says "temee" which is very vulgar way to say you and often translated as "bitch" etc so I need to think twice if I wanna use such strong words xD Also the lovable f-word "you f*cking bastard". While I try to keep the tongue clean and proper there are times when it could be more, ahem, insulting? xD Anyway, the safe ways are the easiest I think If this was adult content in full force it wouldn't be bad. I've always seen swearing as a part of speech to express the negative emotions so I don't mind it, but there's of course the limit when it's used in good tastes and when not

Haha I wouldn't say her personality changes with the forms, but she's calm and even nice to others outside battlefield, if that makes any sense. Enemies she'll slaughter with evil laughter and sensation haha... xD
Well I have made refences for my personal use, actually. Since I can't memorize all the details over characters that I draw seldomly I need an example picture. Maybe I'll upload a chara of the forms aventually, not I have a colorless sketch haha xD

Haha yeah, Gretchen needs to realize the surroundings before rushing in the battle

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chealsea2307 In reply to Inesidora [2014-03-09 11:06:19 +0000 UTC]

I don't think there're any problems with swear words in this type of comics though, because, y'know, teenagers nowadays curse a lot And if you notice, even in movies that are rated PG, there are still many swear words
But if you still find yourself hesitant to use too strong words, then use euphemism. I found this interesting article about swear words and euphemism, hope that helps fandom-grammar.livejournal.com…

Oh great, I wonder how many forms she has She also has different ball forms for different forms, right?

Or it's just Gretchen's bad luck

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Inesidora In reply to chealsea2307 [2014-03-09 17:10:05 +0000 UTC]


Really? Well good then xD
Otl I'm so oldschool... Like some old hag being horrified of kids swearing haha...
Oh my, thank you, I will read it!

A lot haha xD Not sure if she'll be seen in them very much though. Sure she has, but usually she "reverts back" to the home form (the mutant centaur lol).

She has chronic bad luck lol...

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SoarToTheSky [2014-03-02 12:00:39 +0000 UTC]

Moragana kicks butt. 

I like her "Darkon Archress" design. She's got 2 arms and legs!!

Page 572, that's the reference of Morgana you uploaded to your scraps.

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Inesidora In reply to SoarToTheSky [2014-03-07 21:39:21 +0000 UTC]

She does haha...
Ah you noticed! Normal amount of limbs!
(aaah you remembered that! xD)

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ENCSSIKITTYx [2014-03-02 09:00:33 +0000 UTC]

WOW! I like the story

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jackpotrocks [2014-03-02 05:07:57 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't stop laughing when Cleo was trying to get away from that Mech Bakugan, but my favorite part of this chapter was how Luka was reminding me of his attitude as Blackjack. It gave me goosebumps when he fought off Gretchen and told her she had no hope of winning.

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Inesidora In reply to jackpotrocks [2014-03-07 21:39:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
I'm glad you liked it!

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cherrydestinysakura [2014-03-02 04:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Another excellent art from you ine-chan! Love ya!!!! ^^  

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Inesidora In reply to cherrydestinysakura [2014-03-07 21:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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cherrydestinysakura In reply to Inesidora [2014-03-08 13:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Np! ^^

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mangafa20 [2014-03-01 21:29:19 +0000 UTC]

Awsome act Ine chan and the last page is very funny that Cleopatra doesnt want to fight the mecha bakugan.

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Inesidora In reply to mangafa20 [2014-03-07 21:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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mangafa20 In reply to Inesidora [2014-03-07 21:49:39 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome dear ine chan. ^^

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The-WinterRose [2014-03-01 19:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Yay another act!

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Inesidora In reply to The-WinterRose [2014-03-07 21:39:57 +0000 UTC]

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The-WinterRose In reply to Inesidora [2014-03-07 21:52:43 +0000 UTC]

OMG! I love your new icon!!

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Inesidora In reply to The-WinterRose [2014-03-07 22:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Buahaha oh my, thanks... x///D

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The-WinterRose In reply to Inesidora [2014-03-07 22:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Np it's just so cute!!

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Inesidora In reply to The-WinterRose [2014-03-07 22:37:34 +0000 UTC]


*random doodle that took like 30 secs to draw and color otl...*

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The-WinterRose In reply to Inesidora [2014-03-07 22:48:52 +0000 UTC]

It still looks cute   

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Inesidora In reply to The-WinterRose [2014-03-08 20:05:23 +0000 UTC]

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