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soda-rain [2009-07-22 22:55:15 +0000 UTC]
WOW, this is so epic >w< The wing is so shiny, I can't stop staring at it lol~
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not-indigo89 [2009-06-22 15:25:32 +0000 UTC]
did you get onto my account or was that nicole?
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KuroLove [2009-06-21 02:25:46 +0000 UTC]
Whoa...her hair and wing are amazing! *----*
Her hair has really nice texture, great job! <3
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marbels In reply to indui [2009-06-21 19:43:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! 8D
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Nakanesu [2009-06-19 19:46:39 +0000 UTC]
wow so cool and love the wings and the moonlight cause you brtightened it up more so great i love it
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hotfuzzrules [2009-06-19 17:19:58 +0000 UTC]
D= i is so in love with your coloring skillzzzzz! <3
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AetherealBunny [2009-06-19 17:11:13 +0000 UTC]
And wow, I just noticed that you made sure to reflect light off the snow owo;; Or...it just happened, but I'll assume you did it on purpose XD It's not perfect, but it's there.
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indui In reply to AetherealBunny [2009-06-19 18:58:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Yes I was trying that, but I dunno if it's very good o.o
and btw, sorry.. I have little motivation to do RPs... T-T My writing still needs work..
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AetherealBunny In reply to indui [2009-06-19 19:12:09 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome XD And ah well. I noticed it, so I guess you can say it was at least that good XD
And well...if you say that, you miss the point of an RP XD RP is a great way to improve writing :3 Both writing something out, and thinking about a situation. You should try responding at least XD
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indui In reply to AetherealBunny [2009-06-20 02:43:52 +0000 UTC]
yayys :3
hmm ok I tried responding.. x_x LOL.. I think I don't like my writing as much because I never show people it, unlike my art :U
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AetherealBunny In reply to indui [2009-06-20 02:56:00 +0000 UTC]
Ah. Well, this should help you do that too XD
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AetherealBunny [2009-06-19 17:09:48 +0000 UTC]
I don't know XD Your part seems pretty good to me. ^^
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Akasuki-Mamaro [2009-06-19 17:03:04 +0000 UTC]
It's so nifty lookin' XD
and since I has no sub I shall write my crit here. I am noobish, and if i say something that doesn't make sense or something, sorry, I took a course on art critiquing, but I sucked at it, and it's summer, I forgot everything orz *deep breath*
First off, I LOVE the wing. The colors in it are amazing and it looks really soft and fluffy, and the same with the hair. You got it to look Woosh very well, though there are some conflicting winds or something of the sort. The little sparkly dots look like their falling to the right, and the bottom of the hair does the same thing, but the clumps at the top are moving in the opposite direction.
The shading on her clothes looks great, but the proportions look off to me. the gloved part is a lot bigger than the bicep bit (LOL I suck at memorizing body parts HOW did I get an A in Health), and the body looks a little too small in comparison to the head as well... but the glove is big, so that probably explains it lul
As for the light source, I'm having a bit of trouble. In some areas it looks like it's coming from the huge glowy one in the top left, but on other parts it looks like it's coming from the left, especially on her torso and the part of the arm that's parallel to it.
The eyes are very pretty, and I love how you color eyes. The only thing I see with the eyes is that the right eye's shape was a little warped with the head turn.
Love the trees, they're really cool looking, and I like how airbrushed they look
Wow, that was a very long and rambly crit... ><
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Akasuki-Mamaro In reply to indui [2009-06-21 04:32:45 +0000 UTC]
lol anytime. I suck at it, so sorry for the rambling/not making sense/brainfarts *forgot what snow looks like when you shine a light on it*
size wise it's actually not that too far off, but the hair makes it look bigger. With my flawed drawing style, I usually make the head sort of larger, but then I use that as the line for the hair, so it evens out so the head is actually normal sized lol. But that's just me. I'm just saying you could try making the hair less poofy? IDK ignore meeee *flail*
Hm...see, that's what it looked like to me first off, but then it looks too long. Maybe if you tried shortening it? They're the same size now, but if it's closer, than it's be shorter with forshortening and whatnot, yes? Though I don't have a clue about how one would go about doing this XD I still suck at the prequisites of forshortening on fanciful objects. Like boxes. Ok, not boxes but...other geometrical shapes...lol.
And YES. I know what you are talking about. I can't believe that I had SUCH a brainfart that made me forget that snow is freaking reflective. Not seeing it for 6 years made me forget or something, lol. Sorry!
And the moon is in front of her? To me it looks like it's behind her for some reason, though size wise and everything it looks like it's in front of her *faulty brain*
And 3 isn't too many, so don't worry, especially since they're all rather soft lights lol
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indui In reply to Akasuki-Mamaro [2009-06-22 17:59:34 +0000 UTC]
BRAINFARTS! 8DDD
yes yes hair... I used to make hair normal, but I keep looking back at it and it looks too...UNpoofy! XDDD so I make it really poofy just cuz poofy hair is fun to draw, and you can do more with it,,,sort of I guess, I dunno, I'll try doing that :3
hmmm yeah, actually what happened, was the arm went vertically down originally. Then I realised it looked very bad, so I rotated it (this is all in sketch phase HUZZAH) and it turned to that. But the perspective is off, now that I notice it. yay thanks!
OHNOES you haven't had snow for 6 years?!? holy poo! D: that's insane!!
LOL WTF WAS I THINKING, the moon is behind her XDDDDD wtf why did I say in front? I'm having bad brainfarts.
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Akasuki-Mamaro In reply to indui [2009-06-22 19:01:33 +0000 UTC]
Lol. Poofy hair is fun to draw XD Though most of the hair styles I draw, they end up with cowlicks XD
Lol XD you're welcome? XD
I know! TTATT And to top it off the rain of scorpions has begun. We've found some in our house already, crap. Thank goodness my room is the coldest room in the house almost all the time...
AND LOL OK, then it's just a really big moon like I thought the first time XDD Wahahahaha. Summer does this, it's frying our brains...
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Akasuki-Mamaro In reply to AetherealBunny [2009-06-21 04:13:12 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. It's sad I've seen snow a lot, and it didn't click that the snow was a light source XDD Must have blocked ou-i mean FORGOTTEN what snow was like when I wrote this. I looked back and had a wtf moment lol
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AetherealBunny In reply to Akasuki-Mamaro [2009-06-21 04:17:17 +0000 UTC]
Well, it's not a direct light source, it's secondary. But yeah XD It's a strong secondary light source o-o
And it happens XD
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Akasuki-Mamaro In reply to AetherealBunny [2009-06-21 04:42:05 +0000 UTC]
True XD
*dies* It was a bad idea to try and write a crit on 3 hours of sleep lol
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