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Published: 2011-06-03 00:56:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 12284; Favourites: 1002; Downloads: 118
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Critiques are appreciated! It's been a while since I've drawn something so... a little out of it atm... P:And also, I tried something new with the lineart. It takes a bit longer but I think it looks better overall.... tho I'm not sure if it's that noticable and worth that time
indigo & innocent sorrow c) me
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I love the lighting and the uniqueness of this piece! The face looks a tad off, but you did great for the most part.
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Nice background~ The overall mood is really good too. You can feel the sunset/sunrise on his back, and the sparkles are well placed. The only thing I would change would be the position of the eyes.
But other than that, it's wonderful.
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thank you very much 8)
yeah people keep pointing out the eyes O: what do you mean about changing their position? I think I've been staring at this so long, that I don't see where the problem is XD
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Hmm, I think it's too big.
Since his face is pointing downwards, his eyes shouldn't have that much space. It's mainly the left eye that's facing us that is the problem. Make that smaller, maybe move it a bit more to the left, and it would be perfect. The eye I'm talking about is his right eye. ^^
Oh, and you're welcome~
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///SUPER LATE D:
ok that was really helpful... thank you!!
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It's okayy~ It's fun to reply to people~ And help them xD
Wanna critique my artwork as well? Just choose a random one and critique away o u o
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//SUPERLATE AGAIN!!! I'm sorry D:
And of course! I'll go ahead and do it now <3 //like three weeks later :'D
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It's okay~ Thanks for the critique though~
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This looks amazing. I like the angle of the picture, and the colouring and lighting is so good.
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The lines and the colors are so pretty ;u; Love the composition.
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i love your coloring it's all so shiny and warm ;__;
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Wow, you have about 500+ messages more than me XD
*don't worry reply when you can 
Okay so you know this is awesome, what more can I say...well her arms scare me :'D still awesome XD
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haha XD Well still a lot of messages!! @_@ OMG
thank you so much 
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i love the colors, pose, basically the whole picture :3 awesome job!
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This is freaking amazing
You really are a professional artist!
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wonderful color and lighting
shading and detail are very nice, love this pic
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Why is he smiling if he's crying? It's making me wonder what his story is.
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*she C:
thank you so much
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I know and it makes me wonder what her story it to be doing both.
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well thank you! 8) It makes me happy when someone is interested!!
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Your anatomy and lighting seems to be improving
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The eyes are generally too big for this type of style. If you really want to make it better, focus on the expressions.
Also, I can't tell if it's a guy or a girl. It's not just the eyes. On the left part for the person chest, it looks like a bit womanly, and the other side doesn't.
The lighting is fine. I just think you need to fix the anatomy just a bit. Otherwise, good job.
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(sorry for my super late reply D:!!!)
they're too big? Like too wide or tall or both?
ok, well this character is a girl P: I will try to make it more obvious next time XDD Thank you very much for the critique 
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Don't worry about it. You said anyways that you wouldn't be able to reply that fast.
Well, both. In shounen styles, the eyes aren't as big as shoujo. Girls don't have that big of eyes, because they look like they'll pop their eyes out of their heads.
Also, if you really want to make it look better, add folds above her eyes. It makes her large eyes seem natural. Folds in general are just small lines over the eyelashes, really close to the eyelashes, following the same curves.
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FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF I LOVE THOSE FIRE LIKE EFFECTS ON TEH WATER!!!
The lighting is superb~~ You really know alot about shade and light,sis~~! I like how it appears so "ignited" and the title is "Ignition"----everything fits so well~~~~!!
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(sorry for my super late reply D:!!!)
WAHHH THANK YOU SO MUCH <3 your comments make my day <333
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asdahsgdghasgda me too! My late reply oksdoajsdajhfs
That's coz I LOVE YOU!!! AWWAFKWAKFKAKFAK
you and your works! I love them!
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