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Published: 2010-08-11 20:29:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 1376; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 38
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Guess what it is....
RANDOMGIRLPORTRAITYAY.
homg I uploaded 2 deviations today O_O
well, i've been workin on this for a while...so it doesn't really count. Baa.
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you seem to be afraid of taking risks and use dark colors (but i'm a dark artist so..)
i can see the shadows from the hair around her face but you forgot the neck.
Check this tutorial: [link]
for your image i'd say to you to check point 1 and 3 (above and frontal light) and you'll see what i'm talking about
Examples of finished works:
[link]
[link]
(though i'm not a big fan of heise's drawing style and inspiration her/his coloring is amazing)
keep up the great work!
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i'm not familiar with the drawing style so i'll stay with the coloring, even though the drawing style is visualy appealing and sweet.
About the coloring you forgot something very important: hair casts shadow aswell as the jaw. It's a very important aspect when it comes to rendering the drawing. Also her eyes seems somewhat expressionless but i just love the way you did the nose, the lips and the hair, even though the last one need more highlights.
sorry for the english
anything else just ask!
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Wow thanks so much for all that, it really helped! I've used your critique to update it, does it look better? Heres the old one for comparion: [link]
Thanks again!
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Thanks so mcuh for alllllll those comments, faves and
the llama and watch! You're so awesome!
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Wow, this looks really wonderful~! I love her eyes, they look really calm and peaceful and they are a wonderful shade of brown 
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Aww! Thanks so much for the lovely comment, it means alot.
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Oh my, she is so beautiful... ^^
Fantastic done with her hairs!
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Awww thankyou!
Yay! Hair is my worst area
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You're welcome ^_^
For me too, more you're welcome
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Aww thanks so much again. <3
That's really nice to hear since I find hair really hard. ^-^
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You're welcome!
Hair is hard
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