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QTcomics [2013-08-15 03:09:29 +0000 UTC]
Cool, I'm guessing he's apart of Kou's crew?
Am I right?
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QTcomics In reply to Illuminatii [2013-08-15 19:07:54 +0000 UTC]
awesome can u tell me what you think of my oc fav.me/d6frjrp
also will kou meet luffy at some point?
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Illuminatii In reply to QTcomics [2013-08-16 03:37:41 +0000 UTC]
Pointers: She cannot be 304 pounds at 5'7" and with that build. if she had a Devil Fruit power that increased her mass or something, then I'd understand. Otherwise, change it to something more believable. Also, a 55,000,000,000 Beli bounty is HIGHLY unrealistic- Luffy is one of the highest living bounties, and he's at 440,000,000. All the likes she has listed are very generic as well- That could be any pirate's likes. As for the way she looks, it's... Plain. She has a fedora, which is great for the Fedora Pirates, but nothing else that really brings her image together.
Give her some work, and you'll have a top-notch character in no time!
And I don't think Kou would meet Luffy. Doesn't fit too well into Kou's story.
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QTcomics In reply to Illuminatii [2013-08-16 14:43:00 +0000 UTC]
alright, I've already change her profile a bit and i'll work on changing her appearance later.
thanks for the pointers
i've also upload the first two members of her crew
check them out
fav.me/d6iahym
fav.me/d6ian3p
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DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-21 16:46:18 +0000 UTC]
Mile: Woooow~ That's so cool~ 8D
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-22 13:39:37 +0000 UTC]
Miles: You're as cool as my gunman~ 8D
Whistler: Hey! What's that supposed to mean?! D:<
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-23 12:53:31 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: Oh yeah?! Well, I bet I could beat you in a showdown! D:<
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-24 15:24:44 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: Let's go. *puts his hands on his guns and then steps back*
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-25 06:39:41 +0000 UTC]
Ben: *Spreads his feet apart a little, his hands hovering over where his guns should be on his hip.*
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-26 17:12:26 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: .... Draw! *pulls out his gun quickly and fires, but the bullets go in different directions*
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-26 18:32:54 +0000 UTC]
Ben: *Doesn't even bother to throw his hands up, just thrusts his chest out and a huge barrel morphs out of his chest.* GUN GUN CHEST CANNON!! *Fires it and goes flying backwards, effectively dodging any bullets.* HA HA HAAA~!!
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-26 18:36:27 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: *uses his magnetic powers to stop the cannon, dead in its tracks and then toss it at Ben* Oh, did I forget to mention my Devil Fruit power?
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-27 04:17:42 +0000 UTC]
Ben: *Dodges to the side and grins.* Indeed you did...~
(I think you meant cannonball XD )
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-27 10:40:10 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: *used his magnetics to drop the cannonball* I ate the Magnet Magnet Fruit, giving my body it's own magnetic field. >3
(Yes, I did mean cannonball. XD)
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-28 04:24:48 +0000 UTC]
Ben: Well then, I guess I'll have to get creative... *Suddenly points his fingers at Whistler, his index fingers turning into barrels.* *BLAM BLAM!!*
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-28 06:49:58 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: *moves out of the way and then uses his magnetic field to attach the bullets to his body* Nice trick, now here's mine. *fires two bullets from his pistol, but they both went in different directions*
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-28 06:53:59 +0000 UTC]
Ben: Eh? What was that?? *He keeps his eyes on whistler, reverting his fingers again and firing them off once more. He's wary but still on the offensive.*
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-28 07:16:37 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: Double Homing Shot! *suddenly, he uses his magnetics to turn bullets to the direction of Ben and fire them at him*
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-28 07:42:18 +0000 UTC]
Ben: Shit! *Suddenly turns his arms into long barrels, deflecting the bullets narrowly.*
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-28 09:49:45 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: So how about I show you another trick? Scrap Scout! *summons a bunch of scrap to create a giant metal man* Whaddya think?
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-28 13:21:10 +0000 UTC]
Ben: *Low whistle.* Quite interestin'! *Suddenly turns his legs int cannons, firing them off so he flies high into the air.* Gun Gun Leg Cannons! *High in the air, gun barrels and cannon barrels sprout from his body from every angle.* Gun Gun: HEAVY RAIN!! *Spins in the air while firing every barrel on his body once, scattering bullets and cannonballs down below him.*
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-28 13:33:10 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: Shit! *tries to block as many of the canons and bullets as he can, but his Scrap Scout was destroyed in the process*
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-28 13:49:56 +0000 UTC]
Ben: *Finally lands on the ground, standing up and dusting himself off casually.* How was that?
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-28 14:20:05 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: Impressive... But can it do this?! *the scrap starts to move about and reassembles itself into the Scrap Scout*
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-28 17:42:33 +0000 UTC]
Ben: I haven't given up yet. >T *Turns all ten of his fingers into barrels.*
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-28 17:50:36 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: Scrap Meteor! *suddenly, the scrap scout turns into a giant ball and goes into the sky*
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-28 18:47:28 +0000 UTC]
Ben: *Dashes forward, suddenly closing the distance between them.* Check~ *Aims all ten fingers point-blank at his stomach.*
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-28 20:16:19 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: Well, I would raw the white flag, but I wouldn't look behind you if I were you. *suddenly, the Scrap Meteor was heading towards them*
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-28 21:01:05 +0000 UTC]
Ben: *Grins wickedly and grabs his collar.* Guess it looks like a draw then, hm? Unless you wanna get smashed by your own meteor.
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-28 21:03:23 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: Heh, agreed. *stops the meteor dead in its tracks and drops it on the ground* Let's do this again sometime. >)
Miles: Woah.... THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED!!! 8D
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Illuminatii In reply to DuskNinjaKenji [2010-07-28 21:08:52 +0000 UTC]
Ben: Sounds like a gas! >D *Lets go of his collar and dusts it off.*
Kou: Our crewmates are so cool ;w;
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-28 21:17:40 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: *pulls out his hand for a shake* Until our next duel.
Miles: I know right? QwQ *is next to Kou, with popcorn in his hand*
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DuskNinjaKenji In reply to Illuminatii [2010-07-28 21:50:47 +0000 UTC]
Whistler: *walks off, in a cool, cowboy style*
Miles: They're just too cool, aren't they~?
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Illuminatii In reply to TDFCAdmin [2010-07-18 02:35:44 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha if only XD
THanks a bunch! (Where can I check out my beri totals??)
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