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RhinoWing [2017-11-19 16:37:24 +0000 UTC]
Wow good story
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FantasyPen21 [2013-01-16 19:25:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I LOVE THIS! You made the story believable, and by explaining why she's so much like Johnny, not a sue! Great job!
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Readasaur [2011-02-27 16:15:10 +0000 UTC]
Johnny has his Bad Luck Shadow, and Kitty can make men disappear with a kiss.
Does Viv have any powers like that?
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Readasaur In reply to Illogicat [2011-02-28 07:05:37 +0000 UTC]
And you can't really give her mechanical powers because that's already Technus' thing.
Hmmmm...
Sorry, but I fear that I don't know enough about her to give you much advice.
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Readasaur In reply to Illogicat [2011-03-01 02:47:46 +0000 UTC]
True.
Poindexter seemed to do alright without one.
Though he seemed to exert some control over the Princess in her dragon form.
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Illogicat In reply to Readasaur [2011-03-01 04:31:23 +0000 UTC]
I was thinking maybe shape-shifting? But I'm still trying to think of a better alternative. I mean, when you think about it, Johnny doesn't have powers, per say, he has the Shadow. Haha its just frustrating, since he DOES have Shadow, and Kitty has her kissing power. I just don't want her being left out, but I just don't think Shapeshifting suits her.
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Readasaur In reply to Illogicat [2011-03-01 04:44:09 +0000 UTC]
That, and Amorpho already has that power.
Why would you pick shapeshifting? Cause she changed herself to emulate her brother after his death?
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Illogicat In reply to Readasaur [2011-03-01 05:35:57 +0000 UTC]
It was actually the first thing that popped into my head @~@
This really has me stumpe :/ lol
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Readasaur In reply to Illogicat [2011-03-01 06:07:27 +0000 UTC]
I was wondering if she could do something like a bad luck curse.
Her brother's Shadow does what he commands, but the bad luck it inflicts is often unintentional.
She might be able to simply curse a person or a thing to experience bad luck, only the downside is that something equally bad happens to her at some point down the road. This prevents her from being overly powerful, and also keeps with the semi-lighthearted tone of the series. (...Well, the lighthearted tone when we don't mention the actual DEATHS).
If she was annoyed, for example at some skateboarder who nearly ran into her and laughed about it, she might curse him so that his wheel would come loose and he would fall in a pond. Naturally, the backlash would be something like someone accidentally tipping ice cream on her shirt.
And her with a grim smile of satisfaction, going 'worth it'.
If her curse made the wheel go wonky and he wound up hitting something and actually hurting himself, the backlash would be more severe, such as a stray energy blast striking her, in keeping with the theme of bad luck that she and her family carry around with them/her.
If she got serious and started inflicting more powerful curses, one after another, she might be largely unstoppable, until the backlash hit and she was defeated by her own powers.
Could make for some interesting and even funny scenes.
Naturally, this would keep her from using her powers too much, explaining why they don't seem to factor more heavily into her story yet.
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Readasaur In reply to Illogicat [2011-03-02 06:53:33 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I can be pretty creative sometimes.
When we were younger, my siblings would have me create really elaborate fantasy worlds and play out a bunch of different roles for them.
Naturally, I took to RPing online like a duck takes to a thing which a duck takes to quite readily.
In this case, it was just a matter of triangulating on the problem.
I had to ask you questions, look at the pics, and get a better feel for her character.
When I could picture her doing all those things it just kind of tumbled out.
Of course, for every idea like this that is approved, I have about ten that no one likes.
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Readasaur In reply to Illogicat [2011-03-03 04:41:40 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I was surprised that this pic and the other one I commented on didn't have any comments posted before mine.
Oh well.
People do get a little leery of OCs.
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Tori9457 In reply to Illogicat [2012-02-19 22:40:09 +0000 UTC]
maybe the skull on her shirt is like her shadow
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