TheLiteralLimerick [2015-05-30 21:46:53 +0000 UTC]
Your coloring has improved though you have made little progress on anatomy and facial planes and arguably, your previous cast shadow made the image more dramatic. A lot of the shadows imply folds which exist in areas which do not exist, such as the crescent shaped shadow on the hood.You might want to look more at folds, drapery and do some real life face studies, before reverse engineering it into the anime style.
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Ikuzram021 In reply to TheLiteralLimerick [2015-05-30 21:53:06 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the comment and the critique~
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