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Published: 2008-01-25 18:46:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 212; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 4
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Description The Hidden Girl

Across the room they seem to see
A smiling girl who looks like me.
With two huge dimples on each cheek
She laughs and talks, and always speaks.
She's the girl they think would have it all.
But inside her is where tears fall.
Inside her mask is where I dwell
This broken girl she hides so well.
I try to wipe her tears away
But they fall more each coming day
She tries to laugh when her heart breaks
But hurts with every smile she fakes.
And inside her is where I dwell
The hidden girl she hides so well.
The girl that no one ever sees,
Behind a mask that looks like me.
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Comments: 12

sabrinapsycho12 [2008-01-30 20:08:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow, This is a amazing poem! It's def one of my fav's so far!

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ihatelife1029 In reply to sabrinapsycho12 [2008-01-30 20:36:15 +0000 UTC]

Awwe thanks.
and thanks for the fav

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Mickeychan45 [2008-01-26 19:48:49 +0000 UTC]

Good job! I love the subject. I feel like that sometimes too...

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ihatelife1029 In reply to Mickeychan45 [2008-01-26 20:38:33 +0000 UTC]

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munkeeboi [2008-01-26 11:07:29 +0000 UTC]

Very well written.

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ihatelife1029 In reply to munkeeboi [2008-01-26 16:34:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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HyperActivePrower [2008-01-25 23:12:14 +0000 UTC]

Aw...this is so good, yet so sad. The flow of the words is quite excellent.

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ihatelife1029 In reply to HyperActivePrower [2008-01-26 00:54:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, ofr the comment and the fav.

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aepyro666 [2008-01-25 22:07:55 +0000 UTC]

omg i love this i know what its like but anyway i love this

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ihatelife1029 In reply to aepyro666 [2008-01-25 23:06:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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MaddyBunny [2008-01-25 21:56:11 +0000 UTC]

Amazing poem! One of the best you've ever written in my opinion!
That poem sounds just like me... o.o

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ihatelife1029 In reply to MaddyBunny [2008-01-25 23:06:05 +0000 UTC]

awwe.

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