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IceyGrohl444 — You're Only so Well as Your Own Personal Hell
Published: 2012-04-19 00:44:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 123; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description He yells
She feels she's in her own personal hell
His voice booms out like a rifle
She holds back the tears, she feels stifle
As if the day wasn't crappy enough
As if those words weren't sappy enough
She's used to this stuff
it's tough
it's rough
But it's life
She must rise above the feeling of the knife
She'll escape the feeling in her gut
She'll power through and get out of the rut
She has to, you know why?
Because no one is worthy of making anyone cry
so why decide to push your own life aside
just to tell someone else of that sad feeling inside
only you can make it so
so don't ever let your life simply just go
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Comments: 8

CorvusAlas [2012-04-21 01:06:44 +0000 UTC]

srsly write more of this

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Wucariolf [2012-04-19 20:30:19 +0000 UTC]

Because no one is worthy of making anyone cry
so why decide to push your own life aside
just to tell someone else of that sad feeling inside
My favorite sentence nice poem ^^

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IceyGrohl444 In reply to Wucariolf [2012-04-19 22:49:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Wucariolf In reply to IceyGrohl444 [2012-04-20 00:49:43 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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horseydino [2012-04-19 01:50:07 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty cool really
Write more

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IceyGrohl444 In reply to horseydino [2012-04-19 02:01:24 +0000 UTC]

lol okey Thanksh

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nautcious [2012-04-19 00:55:31 +0000 UTC]

This is actually pretty awesome.
I like this line a lot: Because no one is worthy of making anyone cry
I hope to see more poetry from you in the future, these are awesome *_*

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IceyGrohl444 In reply to nautcious [2012-04-19 00:58:57 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks raddi :'D
that means a lot

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