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Published: 2012-11-25 03:46:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 20002; Favourites: 2600; Downloads: 177
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Open Woundslife is but an open wound
always pouring
forever drowining us
never slowing
people are foolish
to think that they can stop us
but they cant
each one of us is filled with flaws
good and bad
we are different
yet the same
no one can truely see
what we see
they will never understand
the pain
the suffering
the anguish
there might be others like us
but we are alone
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You are nitpicking and it is called phone with the buttons to close. Together and if thats all the unintelligent critic you have to offer then don't bother the poem was creative was good.
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Uhm, I'm sorry, I guess.
I was really just trying to point it out so the creator could change it real quick if they wanted to, nothing more, really. I cannot really see what part of my comment made you think that I thought the poem was not creative or good, it definitely is, it's far better than anything that I could ever hope to create. I guess I'm just being an idiot here, soβ¦yeah, I apologize.Β
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jesus christ i say "im just tired" so much
I DONT EVENΒ
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I'm tired too. I sometimes cry because I can not get a bed.
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But I am actually tired. I would kill someone for a bed.
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This is edgy, I'm not even gonna insult it or anything
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If all of you don't mind, I have a few words... thoughts and feelings that I poetically/lyric would put fourth... as I know no other way: NB! Read at your own risk. Nothing is aimed/associated towards any named/unnamed groups:
(~) Our pain and suffering will not cease, but do not fear in endless despair... As that will swallow you whole, into the vast unknown void called the Abyss. I feel a surge of hopelessness, a jolt of anger quickly arise off as I succumb to self loathing - yet it is no abnormality, in this reality of ours. Torn apart, limb by limb as if I were a doll in a toy factory... I'm scared, that is all I've felt during the reassemble, during the process of recreating what is viewed as impure ... broken. Β They don't want us, they want servants... Cute dolls, dressed up in maids clothing - with smiles painted on. With empty eyes glaring towards it's maker, towards the once that deems the doll impure ... until they thrown away or remodeled once more. Until then, they'll always be last rate material, "We can always gather more", "There's just no end to these aren't there?"... They are the few who puts down the rules, the norms of our lives... be it simple or be it complex - it is not us who has any form of power, above the unfair mandate of others.Β
Yet, they our makers... are shuddering, while putting our arms back on - while fixing a broken toe. Brushing our hair, smoothly and neatly as 'it's supposed to be' ... unwilling to accept their own flaws - exacting their anger onto us, regardless of how little we have done to infuriate them.
There are around 6 billion people in this world, thus you could ask yourself - How many makers do you think, makes up for this number? Those with power, riches... those who puts other peoples lives on the line. We are just their toys, the playthings that breaks eventually. (~)
What do you all think? Would've loved any feedback, if possible. - It's a text I'm currently working on, for a possible book with multiple stories.
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I can relate to this..... a little bit more than I want to relate to this but...... Great writing!
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thanks for uploading this..... i finally know how to express myself now. "tired".
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that's true when my friends ask me "hey are you ok?" all i just say is "i'm fine, just tired.."
when i really feel just like this ; .. ; beautiful poem i really love the meaning.
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I just noticed how much I say "I'm just tired" as an excuse.
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I can't begin to describe how much I can relate to this...
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you know, it's just a copy from similar pictures @ tumblr or other sides. that's nothing new, not even the "tired" thing. I saw many pictures that look almost the same...
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DONT BE A FUCKING JACKASS! who gives a rats ass she liked i liked others liked it get over yourself no one cares she is just expressing herself so fuck you k? k!
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All you need is a dose of self confidance and determination.
If life gives you lemons, squeeze them in his eyes, knee him in the balls and keep kicking while he's down.
At least that's how I think about things.
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I wonder why we're all fed with the idea that we must keep our problems to ourselves and fake a smile. This seems like such a common thing people express through their art here, and it's always the front page, which means many feels the same.
Really, I think we're only as lonely as we make ourselves to be.
If everyone have problems, wouldn't it be great if people just share their problems with each other so they'll feel less alone about it?
I mean, when we were children, we all cried when we're sad. Then as we get older, we realize that others may not always have time for us, and we try to keep our problems to ourselves in order to not bother people. Then, after we get into the habit of keeping our problems to ourselves, we feel uncomfortable when other people are being "whiny", because we expect others to be as "considerate" as we are.
But really... sometimes we really need break that habit. It keeps society functional and stops people from melting into a puddle of sad whenever they feel bad for themselves, but ultimately it's not healthy.
I wish our society is constructed in a way which is more open, and people can feel free to share their thoughts and feelings with each other. '
Ah, sorry for the irrelevant rant on your comment, iceprincess2016.
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This is.... beautiful <3 Yet sad...
Just forget what those other assholes are saying about how this is emo, which I see no reason why it should be seen like that...
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IT. IS. SO. TRUE! 
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Hah! I like the picture
And the poem's not half bad either
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This was beautiful, sweetheart...And it makes me want to hug you!
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Thank-you. That is kind of you. I just posted another poem called "River" and also read "Stars" if you want! [link]
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*Goes to your page and reads them*
Wow...Those are pretty good! I have a little folder in my gallery called 'Thought Writes'...Or I think that's what it's called.
Anyway, you can look through those and see if there are any that you like!
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For those who don't like my poem, this was written for my friend's cousin who committed suicide. Not too long ago was her 1 year anniversary. I wrote this for her even though I didn't even know her. So shut up and don't comment if you don't have something nice to say or constructive criticism. Thank-you.
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Last words: I'm tired. I'm going back to bed.
Who: George Reeves
Note: Reeves committed suicide. This was the last thing he said to his friends before shooting himself in his bedroom.
This line is also referenced on S14E13 of South Park, when Mysterion killed himself for the last time.
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I continue along on my path towards recovery but then I go through the forest of mixed feelings and there are monsters monsters that tear me apart from the inside out until I am no more than an empty shell without what used to be my soul.
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Maybe you should check this or let a bèta read it before you post it. Because although it's a nice poem, the mistakes really ruin it for me.
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Beautiful~! I wish more people could understand that and not just saying "emo" :/
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I'm loving this ! That's always how i feel during my hoiday shopping... :v
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I love the acronym in the picture; it's very deep.
Wonderful work here!
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Maybe if you stopped crying and start cheering up and making friends, then you wouldn't have to cut your skinny little arms.
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Uhm ok well first I have a really good best friend which is good enough for me and I'm making more friends.I'm also cheering up alot more since I met my best friend so I'm good there.My arms may be skinnyXD but I assure you I'm not a Fucking emo dumb-ass that I have to cut my arms.I am being alot more cheerful that I used to,I may of had my bad times in the past but at least things are looking up a bit more for me...Stop getting into other peoples business without knowing what they've been through.
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