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Published: 2009-04-26 01:17:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 464; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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dont know what the title should have been called...BUT here is my fur test! how is it?
and a new OC, the light around his neck i got the idea from 2 other people's OCs
dont know whats around his mouth...
he needs a name too if anyone got any
....it may be a she too.... dont know on the gender too D:
BUT plz help me with the fur..
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Since you requested a critique and I'm not a subscriber (I'm just dyting trying to get a sub DX) I can't use the critique, but I can here.
Flaws:
1. It looks too thin to me.
2. The fur looks too triangular-ish and sharp.
3. The eyes are a bit too large.
4. Muzzle is too shot.
Sugesstions:
1. Try blending the glow with a tissue or whatever.
2. Look at photos more, also look and try to learn what the wolf's skeleton looks like, it helped me alot.
3. *this is an overwal sugesstion for all your art* Practice, study some anatomy, and try to get more variety in your gallery.
Overwall, I'd give this 3 stars, it's preety nice.
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awww i like him hes cute^^ and i love the fur.
hay do you think he would like kandis 0.0
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The fur is nice, but it looks a bit "hard"- try making the triangle-like shapes longer, thinner, and more flexible looking. They don't have to be so perfectly organized in placement- make them more organic, curving, yet flowing together.
If what I said above is too confusing, I'll clarify later. Sorry. xD;;
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Alright- can you get on iScribble?
I'll draw it out there. c:
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Your board.
Eh; "Icey's Board, help me become a reg"
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ok, how do you clean the paper when you're done drawing?
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...What?
I'm sorry, I don't really understand the question.
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to make the background look white(if you didnt draw a background) on the pic
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How do you make the background white on paper...?
Uh... I'm not sure I fully understand what you're asking. Erase the stray marks, and just don't add color?
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I'm sorry if I'm coming off as rude, but I'm not really quick when it comes to catching on to explanations.
I have a slow, one-track mind. xD;;
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I like the fur. to make it a little better though instead of making them so triangular try smoothing and curving the triangular pieces. It might make a difference. Also try looking at people's hair that might help. Praactice some more and you will improve but your drawing is very good.
I think your OC should be a female. I don't have any name ideas though, sorry.
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Oh I know! 
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