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Published: 2005-02-05 17:21:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 942; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 317
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I have'nt submitted much recently, so this is my poor attempt at a deviation. Comments appreciated.Related content
Comments: 29
poor attempt !! ..god ..I'd hate to see it when you try !! .. thats a great pic !!.. would be even nicer if it was larger so I can use it for a desktop !... great work !!! Keeping an eye out for sure !!
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id like it better with no //// lines in the BG
best deviation so far i think
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Another awesome design. The only very small thing that could be improved (as a few people have said) is the diagonal lines opacity could be lowered slightly, They're a little too visible at the moment.
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I think this is pretty cool too, your eye just keeps moving all over the place in this piece
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It's a nicely composed image.
I find, however, that it's also a regurgitation of recently-trendy design styles. The diagonal lines, the dripping paint effect, the splattered dirt, the geometric shapes. This is not to say it's bad, but it certainly lacks something.
Frankly, I think there needs to be a definite focal point. Right now the viewer's eye doesn't feel too excited about this because all of the shapes are similar in hierarchy. You've got a blue background, which sinks to the back, and a white foreground. The slight shadowing on the white shapes certainly adds some depth, but so far that only makes 2 planes in the composition. If you only had one or 2 shapes, you probably wouldn't need to add more depth or a focal point, but since you've got so many shapes competing for my attention...well, something's gotta give.
I suggest picking a shape you feel should stand out most. Make that shape a very vibrant color, and see how it looks. Ultimately it's going to come down to playing with it and seeing how it looks to you, but I really think that a bit more depth and a bit more focus would serve this piece nicely.
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Nice, the only thing I could suggest is that y ou had kept the rays going all the way. Very nice work regardless.
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Dont put this work down man this is an awesome piece, very interesting, lots happenin, hope to see more soon!
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very inspirational piece, love it to peices, only crit is im not keen on the 3d'sh effect around the circles. Nice job
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thank you all for the comments D D
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I love this! its not a poor attemt at all! Im just sorta learning to do vector and mine are truely pants lol.
i think this is great, I love the paint splatter effets on this.
Just an all around great job, gonna have to check out your gallery now
Well done mate!
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I love it! Beautiful shapes and colors...my only gripe is that the striped pattern is too prominent.
Great job!
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well,you have a nice outline,lol^_^
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well,you have a nice outline,lol^_^
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i love the colors and the vector professionalism in this picture 
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Thank you for the fav! and i really appreicate your comments! , as for learning, try messing in photoshop, with random shapes and different combinations, something should fall together
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