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Published: 2008-04-12 17:31:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 728; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 5
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homg!! What's this? Did I actually submit a deviation?! This took me an incredibly long time, mostly because I just haven't had the time to sit down and finish it, so I had to do it in spurts...and partly because I have really low inspiration during the winter...but now it's spring!!! And I hope there will be a large influx of creativity
I would very much appreciate and comments or critiques!!
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no problem, i'm only speaking the truth
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Oh Han-chan! This makes me all the more excited for the summer! I love the colors you've used and how you contrast the really vibrant colors of the water and the trees with the more neutral colors in the rocks and fauna. It's also good to see that you're slowly but surely loosing the compulsion to render every single leaf on your trees. Overall I'd say you're getting better and better despite not having taken an art class! Having said that, I think the elephant in profile needs a little more girth to his bottom, unless you're going for the anorexic look. Use that science-y mind you've got going for you and think of an elephant's interior, he needs a substantial ribcage to keep his hundreds of pounds of organs nice and settled in there. And this could just be me, but I would omit the character behind the elephant, if there were more characters occupying the composition I would say keep her, but as of now she's not really doing anything for the composition. Excellent job though, you've impressed me with my high standards and hatred of most things.
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8D Thanks a ton Boochsamasempaikunchan!! I always wait eagerly for your critiques made of win!! I definitely agree on both accounts...I was a bit dissapointed that I had left that nymph in there, but she was already inked X( Thanks again!! 8D
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lovely. makes a nice children book illustration!
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hahaha! Now I wanna watch it toooooo! XD
ooooh! and thanks for the fave!! 8D
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Thank you!! 
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Oh WOW! 
I love the colors, the poses, the waterfall is awesome! 
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