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husheddaisies — Barbed Wire Dreams
Published: 2014-02-12 02:58:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description I've covered my body in roses
but they wilted at my feet
now barbed wire wraps my body
in a cocoon of dead flesh
and withered beauty  
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Majikku7 [2014-02-14 01:30:35 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written, could us some punctuation, but that doesn't really matter. I think you did a great job; I love it

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husheddaisies In reply to Majikku7 [2014-02-14 01:31:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you! ill work on the punctuation!

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Majikku7 In reply to husheddaisies [2014-02-14 02:34:58 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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