Lunaraen [2015-09-20 13:41:42 +0000 UTC]
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Interesting. While I like the level of detail you have, such as the folds and creases in her shirt, the little speckles in her open eye, and the various shades of her hair, I will admit that the "pink ink effect" that you've left in seems more or less unnecessary. It fits when done with the hair, as the colors nicely compliment each other, but it just stands out when done elsewhere. It's evident from the picture that you can still create the illusion of depth and all that detail without the pink, as I can tell from the shading on the shirt. However, it doesn't take much away from the picture, and, as I said, does compliment nicely when done near the hair. I also find the actual shading that you've done to be very nice, and it really gives the picture a sense of life. One last nit pick of mine is that her open eye seems a biiiiiit too far away from the other one, almost making the face look lopsided.
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