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Hervilleville — I'm Fine

Published: 2008-02-27 00:43:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1555; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 16
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I’m fine really


No really I’m fine


Why am I crying?


I’m not crying


I just have something in my eye


I swear I’m fine


Really I am


No hard feelings


Why are you pushing me?


I already told you I’m fine


No I’m not depressed


What do you mean what’s on my arm


That’s nothing


The cat scratched me, that’s all


No I didn’t cut myself


People who do that are crazy


I didn’t cut myself


Don’t think you’re that special that I would want to do that


Why won’t you leave me alone?


Just leave me alone


That’s all I ask


You’re not that important anyway


What do you mean I need help?


I don’t need help


You need help


You’re the one who won’t leave me alone


There’s nothing wrong with me


I’m perfectly normal


No I am not cutting!!!!!!!


Leave me alone


Just leave me be


Let me go to my room


Thank you



I slowly slid it across my wrist


Letting it rip into the warm, tender flesh


This is what they get for pushing me


They should have left me alone


I warned them


I warned them all

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Comments: 27

PR-Imagery [2010-11-01 16:15:26 +0000 UTC]

used to be there. great poem

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Hervilleville In reply to PR-Imagery [2010-11-01 16:43:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Bubblesnuffer [2010-05-27 13:57:55 +0000 UTC]

This is an amazing peice, I can almost feel the emotion coming off it as I read. I have had friends that cut and have often been the person in this poem who keeps asking, "whats wrong?" only to get the same "I'm fine!" Over and over.

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Hervilleville In reply to Bubblesnuffer [2010-05-27 18:28:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me.

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Bubblesnuffer In reply to Hervilleville [2010-05-29 04:16:21 +0000 UTC]

No problem! Its good to see talented poet's/writers on DA.

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BlackBlood941 [2010-05-12 23:40:26 +0000 UTC]

very very good.

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Hervilleville In reply to BlackBlood941 [2010-05-12 23:45:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Twilightstare [2008-05-17 22:33:51 +0000 UTC]

wow its greatt
the cat scratch is the exact same excuse I use too...
too bad they didn't beleive me either

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Hervilleville In reply to Twilightstare [2008-05-18 06:12:39 +0000 UTC]

yah. it's a good excuse though

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Twilightstare In reply to Hervilleville [2008-05-18 16:02:38 +0000 UTC]

yeah except you need a new one after a while...
and its all I have

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Hervilleville In reply to Twilightstare [2008-05-18 21:35:48 +0000 UTC]

exactly

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webster14 [2008-03-26 19:03:02 +0000 UTC]

nice...good job...

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Hervilleville In reply to webster14 [2008-03-26 19:35:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the fav

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webster14 In reply to Hervilleville [2008-03-27 03:20:53 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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Pur3Nons3ns3 [2008-03-24 23:53:01 +0000 UTC]

Stopping by to comment on your poetry and I must say..good job!

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Hervilleville In reply to Pur3Nons3ns3 [2008-03-25 00:20:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i know there crap. i haven't ever written before

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FallenBeauty-81 [2008-03-07 03:32:07 +0000 UTC]

wow thats really good ^^
I love it <33

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Hervilleville In reply to FallenBeauty-81 [2008-03-07 03:40:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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FallenBeauty-81 In reply to Hervilleville [2008-03-07 18:32:34 +0000 UTC]

your welcomee

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shatterd-soul-13 [2008-03-02 20:28:50 +0000 UTC]

OMG! thats amazing! im emo omg it sounds so much like me OMG! :+fav+

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BlackBlood941 In reply to shatterd-soul-13 [2010-05-12 23:39:56 +0000 UTC]

fail. emos dont say omg...
im emo, just saying...

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Hervilleville In reply to shatterd-soul-13 [2008-03-02 20:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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shatterd-soul-13 In reply to Hervilleville [2008-03-02 20:53:01 +0000 UTC]

same here

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Hervilleville In reply to shatterd-soul-13 [2008-03-02 21:22:21 +0000 UTC]

cool

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design-fatality In reply to Hervilleville [2009-07-08 09:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Your use of the word emo in the comments confuses me a little
...I dislike it when cutting gets lumped into the who emo label as it sounds here hmm

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Hervilleville In reply to design-fatality [2009-07-09 20:12:03 +0000 UTC]

that was a comment to someone else, and that was like two years ago.

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design-fatality In reply to Hervilleville [2009-07-10 09:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I didn't check the date, but now I have, just to be pedantic it was last year.

Any way if poem's true, hope you're in a happier place from when this poem was written and things are easier.

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Hervilleville In reply to design-fatality [2009-07-10 22:48:19 +0000 UTC]

not really, but thanks

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