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In response to =kkart 's critique journal, here is some brutal and unforgiving critique of your work. Don't take any of this personally, I am a professional.
nicely lit, but it's a shame that the male model's head is so close to the top of the frame. Bokeh is good, as is DOF. the fact that the shot is out of focus is apparent. A higher res would be good too...
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it's not a res problem .. it's more a lightning problem as it was kinda dark while I was taking the photos and the quality is like this cuz of the pp .. i kind of wanted to make it look like a rough film shot ..
thank you very much for the critique, if you have time you could look at the rest of my stuff too and have an oppinion
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I enjoyed the angLe of the Lighting, but thought this Lacked a LittLe "poLish".
Jess
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polish ? .. I'm not sure I understand ..
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Sorry, my computer died in the very middLe of my comment. 
I was heading towards the fact that a border, and reducing the vividness of the background (maybe using the "bLur" tooL) may serve to enhance the emotion that's showing in the coupLe's embrace.
I found the foLiage a LittLe distracting, but I Love the concept and the overaLL execution of this shot, it's dripping with emotion!
Jess
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thank you very much... i kinda wanted the background that way tho'
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This is a nice shot. I think there could be abit more emotion showing in the photo though. It would have looked great if the girl had maybe had her hand on his arm or something of that nature. I just feel that what your trying to convey gets abit lost. The lighting for the piece though is fantastic. Over all I really do enjoy the piece.^_^
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thank you very much for your comment .. yes I think you're right about the emotion in the shot, the whole shotting was kinda spontaneous probably that's why it turned out this way.. the image is part of a series tho'... you can take a look at the rest too if you have the time
thank you very much again for taking the time to look at it and comment
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Your very welcome. Ahh I can seen now why it wouldn't of had that much thought put into it if it was spontaneous. Don't loose that though. Keep doing spontaneous photo shoots.
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