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Lady-Serpa [2009-09-04 18:07:34 +0000 UTC]
Awesome D:
I think I've got something like that in my drawer... >.>
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Hellstryce In reply to Lady-Serpa [2009-09-04 18:11:05 +0000 UTC]
I would be frightened if you did, I actually see him sometimes as a hallucination, caused by lack of sleep.
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Lady-Serpa In reply to Hellstryce [2009-09-04 18:19:57 +0000 UTC]
yeah.. I see someone named Simon that's somekind similar to this guy... But he lives in a closet D:
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Hellstryce In reply to Lady-Serpa [2009-09-04 18:24:57 +0000 UTC]
I'm actually trying to make a film out of the story, but I have no means...
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Lady-Serpa In reply to Hellstryce [2009-09-04 18:31:39 +0000 UTC]
Do you have a story? O_O
I wanna read it.
You interest me very much, your art is...
Different :3
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Lady-Serpa In reply to Hellstryce [2009-09-04 18:56:38 +0000 UTC]
I have no idea. It just has this effect on me... >.>
I can't find words to explain it. Dx
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Hellstryce In reply to Lady-Serpa [2009-09-04 18:58:10 +0000 UTC]
Well, here ye go! (There's a sequel too), this version, has sonme kinks, but I'll work them out, it is an old text.
LEMON SWEET
By Jordan Saltonstall
Lemon H. Sweet is a young man who enjoys drawing. He enjoys it so much; his drawings come to life in his mind. He draws so much; his emotions are locked away in an egg in the back of his mind. The drawings escape as his mind fills, entering the real world through a rift in Lemon's conscious reality, becoming actual creatures...
The creatures start to be seen by the people of the real world, but he doesnβt realize it. Lemon also has the ability to draw whatever he wants to happen and it will come true, even if it has already happened, say George Washington's death. This lets many odd and unusual things happen and then change at his will.
One not so very special morning, Lemon wakes and takes a small square of paper out of his folder and draws a few lines on it, not looking like anything in particular. He sticks this paper to his wall with tape. Lemon repeats this process without realizing it every morning, until the drawing is a full picture; a girl, Cloche, the love of Lemon's imaginary life. Because of this drawings completion, she becomes reality, and begins wandering the globe in search of a place to sleep. This may seem like a good thing, but this event also causes the egg containing all of his suppressed emotions begins to crack, but only crack. This tiny crater leaks dark and sinister ooze, forming a body in its wake. A ribcage, a slender stomach, and a desk, fashioned in the shape of Lemon's favorite. The egg, still connected to the body, lifts up, and two crescent eyes form on the upside down, egg shaped head of the creature. Three sinister mouths smile maliciously on top of one another. This is the Triad, Happiness, Sadness, and Anger. This is Lemon's greatest enemy, for it holds all of the unrealized knowledge that Lemon holds, knowing all of his weaknesses, and ultimately wanting to rule this new world it has entered.
Along with the Succubus Lilleathea, a past drawing of Lemon's sexual oppression, the Triad plans to kill Lemon and reign supreme over his endless creations. He finds out about Cloche, and comes to understand that she is Lemon's only snap into reality, so he goes searching for her...
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Lady-Serpa In reply to Hellstryce [2009-09-04 19:13:21 +0000 UTC]
wooooah D:
this is SO awesome
and seems... close D:
I've red/heard/thought of this somewhere, somewhen, somehow...
wow, this is... awkward even D:
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Hellstryce In reply to Lady-Serpa [2009-09-04 19:16:52 +0000 UTC]
Odd! I really would like to make this into a film.
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Lady-Serpa In reply to Hellstryce [2009-09-04 19:28:03 +0000 UTC]
Maybe I saw it in a dream?...
or maybe drew something familiar...
Oh, there was an incident - I drew myself a boyfriend once.
>.>
Maybe that's why it sounds close...
Simon draws his world.
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Hellstryce In reply to 75paperclips [2009-06-22 14:43:08 +0000 UTC]
I have though about it, but I really need some help doing it.
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lastkyker [2009-06-21 20:00:40 +0000 UTC]
nICE WORK MONKEY. KEEP IT UP.
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Vhantasmica [2009-06-21 19:50:37 +0000 UTC]
.So he did finally upload it.
.... Awesome work, but you know that!
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Khastalle [2009-06-21 17:20:52 +0000 UTC]
...Holy fuck.
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Hellstryce In reply to 5CE [2009-06-21 16:28:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. Lemon Sweet is one of my deepest stories, and I hope to present the majority of the main characters at some point!
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