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heavenriver β€” Tarnished Steel

Published: 2010-05-25 16:00:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 707; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Description Ultra Fractal 5.01

I see little of good in this, I really don't like how it came out at all. I'm putting it here so that someone might suggest me where exactly I have gone wrong. Please, will you?
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Comments: 23

WhiteKimahri [2010-06-02 20:49:37 +0000 UTC]

Questo lavoro si discosta molto dagli ultimi che hai postato, forse per i colori molto decisi e per l'apparenza chiaramente... come dire?, metallica del tutto.
A me non dispiace affatto, il gradiente Γ¨ molto sinuoso e l'intero insieme non sembra nemmeno un frattale, ma un lavoro artistico ben programmato. Potrei azzardare che la fonte del tuo poco convincimento possa risiedere nel modo... bizzarro con cui i colori si muovono, specialmente nella parte bassa del frattale.
Ma per il resto ho ben poco da dire, se non complimenti!

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heavenriver In reply to WhiteKimahri [2010-06-03 16:21:06 +0000 UTC]

Sì, in effetti è il gradiente che mi lascia parecchio perplessa. Inizialmente ho scartato il monocromo, ma me ne sono successivamente pentita. Probabilmente sarebbe stato ben più efficace. Oh beh! Si ha sempre da imparare dai propri errori, mi servirà per il futuro Grazie mille del commento!

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WhiteKimahri In reply to heavenriver [2010-06-03 18:03:41 +0000 UTC]

Prego, figurati!

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BlackMikaName [2010-05-28 19:10:25 +0000 UTC]

Psichedelico

Mi da l'idea di stare dentro una tromba xD Speriamo solo che non si mettano a suona Xp

Bel lavoro

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heavenriver In reply to BlackMikaName [2010-05-28 19:11:58 +0000 UTC]

MA LOL.
Speriamo di no!!!
Grazie mille!

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balthasarcraft [2010-05-25 19:44:00 +0000 UTC]

I like the molten, metallic look of it ... what specifically bothers you about it?

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heavenriver In reply to balthasarcraft [2010-05-26 12:42:57 +0000 UTC]

All and nothing in particular I think
I wanted to make it look more metallic, but the colours didn't turn out well. The flame effect is good, people say, but I still believe it's not that good. And... dunno, the overall is somewhat mediocre.
Glad there's someone who disagrees with me!

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balthasarcraft In reply to heavenriver [2010-05-26 19:45:07 +0000 UTC]

the weakness to me is the colours as well; I think I'd have gone with something more uniform, like ... more -metallic- colours. but I did definitely get an overall metallic effect. so perhaps a re-work will get you where you wanted to be with it?

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heavenriver In reply to balthasarcraft [2010-05-26 20:06:37 +0000 UTC]

Grand, I'll try making a more monochrome one next time.
Thank you!

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balthasarcraft In reply to heavenriver [2010-05-26 20:14:42 +0000 UTC]

metal ... as it heats up, changes colours. but I think the colours you used here reflect the way flame changes colours, not metal. kind of an unconscious transference maybe, and that's why it didn't quite work. You were picturing the forge, but you kept focusing on the fire.

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heavenriver In reply to balthasarcraft [2010-05-26 20:24:24 +0000 UTC]

My.
I really made a mess.
Thanks for telling me.

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balthasarcraft In reply to heavenriver [2010-05-26 20:32:03 +0000 UTC]

haha, good things come from messes

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AnaInTheStars [2010-05-25 17:36:04 +0000 UTC]

I like it, it looks like liquid metal, very interesting colors too...

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heavenriver In reply to AnaInTheStars [2010-05-25 17:55:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, as always.

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ExperimentalStuff [2010-05-25 17:11:23 +0000 UTC]

yes, heavenriver, this is nice. I agree with SyphonLetter and Twarda8...

The colors run the entire gammet of the spectrum, and that works quite nicely in this form. It looks to me like there is a flame at the bottom-middle that we are looking through, and it is so hot that the light coming from beyond is being distorted, leaving what's really out there up to the imagination of the viewer.

Good piece of art work!

Peace,
COACH

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heavenriver In reply to ExperimentalStuff [2010-05-25 17:56:06 +0000 UTC]

I actually meant it to be a flame which was melting down the steel, that's why tarnished. I'm glad it looks like that! Thank you!

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SyphonLetter [2010-05-25 16:22:05 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work

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heavenriver In reply to SyphonLetter [2010-05-25 16:22:42 +0000 UTC]

May I ask you why you like it?
I mean, do you just like it or is there something in particular you liked?
Thank you anyhow

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SyphonLetter In reply to heavenriver [2010-05-25 16:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Yes i can friend A small appreciation for your wonderful work I an say that this wonderful fractal makes me more cheerful will all this colors wondering around it The waves you have here makes me feel like floating around crazy plasma or something^^ Really Awesome job

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heavenriver In reply to SyphonLetter [2010-05-25 16:31:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol
Thanks for your opinion! I didn't like this, that's why I asked you. Different opinions always make the artists get better. Thank you

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SyphonLetter In reply to heavenriver [2010-05-25 16:34:06 +0000 UTC]

Its awesome

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Twarda8 [2010-05-25 16:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Ive never seen something like that. This is fractal but usualy they are more... fractalish? ^_^' Anyways I enjoyed the colours here.

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heavenriver In reply to Twarda8 [2010-05-25 16:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Yes, they're more fractalish. Well, if you have seen some fractal flowers, you'll understand just what you can do with UF
Thank you anyway!

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