MeineSehnsucht [2012-06-05 22:01:30 +0000 UTC]
It's an interesting poem with some pretty poignant or striking images/lines in it, though the poem could be a little less 'obvious', if that is the word. Yes, there is room for interpretation, but there could have been more room though. I don't want to sound like a bitch, by the way. I think you have got potential. Keep writing.
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hazzy-dreams In reply to MeineSehnsucht [2012-08-24 18:19:38 +0000 UTC]
Hey thank you so much for your comment! i really appreciate it!
MeineSehnsucht In reply to hazzy-dreams [2012-08-25 12:29:40 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. Glad to hear you appreciate it so much.
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GUDRUN355 [2012-06-04 16:20:55 +0000 UTC]
I can feel the deep emotions as I read this. Very good poetry.
hazzy-dreams In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-06-04 17:21:04 +0000 UTC]
Wow thank you so much
GUDRUN355 In reply to hazzy-dreams [2012-06-04 17:29:24 +0000 UTC]
Not a problem.
hazzy-dreams In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-06-04 17:29:53 +0000 UTC]
GUDRUN355 In reply to hazzy-dreams [2012-06-04 17:31:35 +0000 UTC]
Steel-Razors [2012-06-04 16:18:32 +0000 UTC]
Ok, that's deep.I wish I could write like this.
hazzy-dreams In reply to Steel-Razors [2012-06-04 17:20:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!!
Steel-Razors In reply to hazzy-dreams [2012-06-06 13:51:57 +0000 UTC]
You are always welcome. =]