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Eternal-Shadow-S [2019-06-30 15:52:22 +0000 UTC]

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Good work you've done here! You did a good job capturing the appearance of the character. Its captures the similar style of the actual character, while adding your own bit to make it yours. Artwork is good, and the overall colors are pretty well done, with the shading blending around quite well and neatly. Her pose is also very well done, and the anatomy looks good too. All in all, I'd say you've done a good job with this. 

Now, my only criticism would be the light around the body. It kinda implies that it's coming off her powers, which isn't a problem. However, looking at the glow, it looks rather faint, and the shine kinda stops at a certain point, yet the lighting on the body indicates that it ought to be shining brighter. What I'd suggest is making the shine on the abdomen less, or you could make the lighting around her power a bit brighter, so that they'd at least compliment each other. 

Despite this, it is still a good image and you've done very well with it. 

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VAERMILLIO [2019-06-28 13:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful composition! Tips? Few but very useful to take your work to the next level! 1 - Work more on color contrasts: knowing how to be able to control color contrasts really allows us to make our works 1000 times more interesting and appreciated by those who look at them. The color contrasts push both on the emotions of the observer and on the interest, understood as the desire to continue looking at the picture. Seeing colors, tones and lights contrasting and emphasizing one another amuses the viewer and does not bore them. 2 - While I repeat how excellent it is as an illustration, both from a stylistic and graphic point of view, which takes in full the style of that animated film, I would like to see more movement in the bodies. Move the shots more over the characters or below: this makes the observer identify much more, brings him closer to the main character and makes him even more interested in the illustration. I hope I was also a useful minimum! I look forward to seeing progress! If you are interested and if it seemed useful to you as a comment do not hesitate to write me for any advice or just to show me the progress you've made!  
Vaermillio out.

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Firelock13 [2019-06-25 16:07:00 +0000 UTC]

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I'd like to say first off that this is a fairly solid composition. You've definitely framed Violet well with the use of the skyscrapers and shadows in the background. You've definitely managed to capture a jubilant atmosphere with her expression and pose, and I like that you've kept in mind the shadows cast by violet and the reflections of the buildings in the background. Your use of horizontal lines on the right side in the background gives it an air of being old style film, and I like that as well.

Going into the criticism, you definitely could have done with more contrast. With the use of the very similar reds between the background and Violet's suit, she sort of fades into that giant field of red. You could have probably benefited with using a different color for the background entirely. Also, with the reflections, you could have maintained a greater consistency throughout the whole piece by giving a clearer reflection to Violet herself. The figure is well drawn, though I think maintaining the proportions of her original design would have worked better than making her as busty as she is here would have helped you. As she is, she feels very off balance with a large head and upper body compared to her thin legs and arms. I do like how you gave her suit different textures by playing with the light, giving the red a very shiny feel while the black of her gloves and boots appears very matte. 

I think you could have played with stronger lighting as well as consistency with where the light is coming from. Picking a light source is integral when it comes to using such strong cast shadows as you have, and while it appears that there's a strong light in front of her, the shadows on her body don't reflect that. Instead, it seems as if there's a very soft, ambient light shining from the upper left side of the piece. I do see that you've attempted to rope in the light coming from her force field and while it's a solid effort, you could have done a little more with it. I think the use of hard light edges would have helped solidify the lighting, not just the use of the soft. You could have definitely added some smaller little light shines in her hair and the shinier parts of her suit. 

In regard to the background, I agree with the previous commenter in that the background blur is unnecessary and in this case rather detrimental to the style you're going for. Otherwise, you do get the main points across and you'll definitely get the hang of all the little details with practice. I'd recommend doing light and figure studies to practice going into the future, and just make sure you're keeping the little things in mind. While they don't make the piece, keeping them in mind and learning where to use them can definitely draw a piece together into a more concise work of art. 

I hope this was helpful and happy arting! 

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tece-cartoonist [2019-06-16 13:48:59 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I come from the ProjectComment group, and your drawing caught my attention. It was obligatory, since I'm a fan of the Incredibles!

I find that Violet is very expressive, and I recognise her famous force field. That said, said force field is not very visible, it is a bit unfortunate. More contrast -without forcing- could have been welcome. But maybe I'm wrong! Regarding the style of drawing itself, I think that you have appropriated the character to the extent that it is obvious that you drew it here, and not the cartoonists of Pixar. And despite you appropriated the characters, you did not fall into the ease of "japanise" the character, and that I find this decision excellent! I particularly like the way you drew her boots, less stylised than on the original drawings. More generally, the character has rather nice shapes, and significantly more realistic than the original drawings. Making more "realistic" some characters very stylised originally, this it can give the best as the worst, but here, it gives the best. Only small drawback about her forms: compared to the original, I think that the size of her breasts is perhaps a little exaggerated. But nothing serious though. Finally, regarding the background, I find it correct. I find the stylised skyscrapers rather nice, but I like less the red background with the directional blur. I think a solid red would have been more appropriate, and more in keeping with the abstract aspect of skyscrapers. In conclusion, I think that your drawing is very good, in spite of some littles drawbacks here and there previously mentioned. It's a very good representation of this dear Violet!

 

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Omnivault [2019-06-03 19:20:28 +0000 UTC]

I like her expression.

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SwordSparks [2019-06-03 10:47:16 +0000 UTC]

Best Pixar daughterfu!

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Shipping-Guy [2018-08-24 10:56:33 +0000 UTC]

can't wait to see it in german!!!

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TheStellarSage [2018-07-11 01:21:21 +0000 UTC]

Her role in Incredibles 2 was intriguing.

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StarmyuFanYuta98 [2018-06-27 08:27:00 +0000 UTC]

I like Violet.

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Fail-Seeker [2018-06-24 19:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Super!

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TerraMarkova [2018-06-24 16:50:20 +0000 UTC]

I do love her 

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GamePonySly [2018-06-24 16:49:18 +0000 UTC]

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blackevil915 [2018-06-24 16:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Nice drawing of her, even i like Mr. Incredible or ElastiGirl, but i do like Violet too, especially for her interesting character development of the subplot for the accidental exposure and her love interest got memory erased (kind off... ^^).

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100procent-Juul [2018-06-24 16:34:19 +0000 UTC]

the colors are so beautiful *w*

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