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Martamin6083 [2017-05-31 03:08:04 +0000 UTC]
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While the colored version of this pic is quite awesome, I like the black and white version a bit more. There's just something about no colors that manages to become basically another world, and as far as this pic is concerned, these two are the only inhabitants. It's simple, but no less pleasing, and detail in stuff like skin tones, wrinkled clothes and lighting still get across just fine. As for the butterfly, while having it be the only thing colored(in this version) could be seen as unnecessary, I'll think of it as an onlooker from the colored world, plus it's harmless and the color blue used is still enough to stick out but not by much. As for the two peopels... well they're just adorable, so loving and so intimate(just the way the guy holds the girl's hand is enough for me, but their faces being close like that, the small smile on the girls face is just.... aaaaaaaaah so cute), and combined with everything else, almost magical.
So yeah in case you couldn't tell, this is a great piece, great job e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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Enoa79 [2017-05-20 14:42:48 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful work. Very well done.
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RcTheNatural [2017-05-20 04:02:57 +0000 UTC]
This is so amazing i love the color scale you used and how the butterfly really pops because if it!
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Souleater0000 [2017-05-19 21:29:32 +0000 UTC]
Sehr niedlich, ich liebe es.
how was that? Your description was mostly german so I figured I'd at least try.
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HasegawaKein In reply to Souleater0000 [2017-05-19 21:48:46 +0000 UTC]
Danke!
thats was a easy one, but i warn you, my german is a little rusty .
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chinchongcha [2017-05-19 18:07:27 +0000 UTC]
wow so beautifulll masterpiece >< Many detail and shading is really top notch ><
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TaniaBhaskar [2017-05-19 17:55:05 +0000 UTC]
Sooooo beautiful!!!!!!!!! I love the way you made this!!!!!!even the color version is awesome!!!!!keep it up!!!!!!(^▽^)
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HasegawaKein In reply to TaniaBhaskar [2017-05-19 18:31:22 +0000 UTC]
thank you!! i will try, this week as been busy and i didnt draw to much, but i like this one.
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bonnman100 [2017-05-19 14:45:08 +0000 UTC]
Very passionate... luv it
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Yumenoki [2017-05-19 13:24:33 +0000 UTC]
I think this is super pretty! I love the details like the particles and all the single leaves in the background and the choice to make it black and white (i looked at your pixiv but couldnt find a colored version i would have loved to see it though >w<) as well as letting the blue butterfly pop with color since it's a symbol :3 Her flowing hair adds to the dynamicness of the drawing and the light spots on their heads and shoulders make them blend in with the environment in a believable way too
As for improvement the only thing i notice is that their eyes seem to sit a little too low on their faces, especially the girls right eye (from our point of view) could be a little higher to match up with her other eye a little more Keep up the good work! By the way do you speak german? I'm from germany~
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Yumenoki In reply to HasegawaKein [2017-05-21 19:14:32 +0000 UTC]
Oh I see I like the colored one as well though it looks more like real life instead of dream world :3
It's okay don't stress about it just think about flipping it next time
Interessant zu wissen
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compass-uk [2017-05-19 12:52:50 +0000 UTC]
This is a very good composition.
And the choice of going with (mostly) monochrome in this medium is an interesting choice, but none the less, very effective.
I did look at the full colour version, but I do prefer this monochrome version, in this instance.
Well done!
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ViralTetris [2017-05-19 12:01:40 +0000 UTC]
this is so beautiful!!!! is that mai and shin in the other world?
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ViralTetris In reply to HasegawaKein [2017-05-19 18:56:45 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry about messages. We are all busy XD plus I am in school right now so it's ok, sensei XD kein! now that I think about it, you have more views and feedback compare to months ago. That's awesome! you are getting popular, sensei!
That's really interesting! I have that concept in my story too(sharing dreams) but it can only happen because one person has that ability to let people shared dreams) but it my story it is only use to talk to each other think or share thoughts . Because in mine, when you are in the dream state or world, time seems to be different in the real world. Let's say if you send 5 days in the dream in real life your body was only asleep for 24 hours
Curious what does the butterfly symbolize? And what happens when they share dreams?
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HasegawaKein In reply to ViralTetris [2017-05-21 17:40:00 +0000 UTC]
reallt thank you tetris!
actually i dont know if know this but the ability of sharing dreams or take control of your dreams is not all fantasy. itake part of real concepts of
dream to integrate them in the story. in the third novel they investigate a case related to the world of dreams when a guy is killing other people by entry in their dreams.
Mai gets trapped in her own mind along with this killer, the team need to investigate the real location of the killer, and in the mean time shin entry to mai mind to find her.
the thing get complicated when other two entities entry in the story, Lam, a creature created of the collective incoscience and the other is the shin own inconscience.
the world of the dreams of shin and mai get mixed creating posible one one of the better world i have created for my project (something similar to this www.youtube.com/watch?v=YKejRI… ).
because the butterfly has been referenced a lot of time in dreams and mai also is called moth or butterfly sometimes.
the morph butterfly (like the one i draw) have connections in some chamanic religions to dream states and also his name is related to the change (morph=change).
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ViralTetris In reply to HasegawaKein [2017-05-21 18:08:08 +0000 UTC]
don;t thank me XD no need XD because it is very very understandable. when ever you don't answer I just guess you are busy XD cuz you have so many things to do.
ooh cool! so is it like if you die in the dream you die in real life?(I thought that was a myth)
wow the movie coma seems interesting.....it seems they are trap in dream? and there were...set of laws
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HasegawaKein In reply to ViralTetris [2017-05-21 18:15:28 +0000 UTC]
no, actually that is the myth you cant die in a dream, but in the future exist dream
hospitals to fix some sleep disorders. The dreams can be shared and also saved.
actually exist some studies about sharing dreams between 3 or more people. When im saying "control dreams" im talking about
the lucid dreams, when the dreamer realizes he is inside of a dream and take control for transform the dream.
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ViralTetris In reply to HasegawaKein [2017-05-21 18:22:57 +0000 UTC]
oh like how they stored memories in ghost shell? XD
so why would they need to store dreams and in hospitals too? do they fix nightmares too in the hospital? can they cure coma?
oh I know that XD we(you and me) talk about lucid dreams last year XD
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HasegawaKein In reply to ViralTetris [2017-05-21 18:33:37 +0000 UTC]
if you stored dreams can study better what are the fears of the patients and how cure them. also for artists imagine you can store
dreams for inpiration. one of the best option of this in my novel is the second lifes the people have in dreams, whole lifes
and families, imagine if you can store a dream, you can continue that dream like a movie or a book.
actually in my novel a lot of diseases dont exist, coma yes exist, but you can talk with the patient in that state, the
comunicattion devices in the future are in the brain, so imagine is like telepathy.
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ViralTetris In reply to HasegawaKein [2017-05-21 18:53:41 +0000 UTC]
continue huh? even lewd?
but in coma do they remember anything? and can you cure it?
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HasegawaKein In reply to ViralTetris [2017-05-21 19:00:42 +0000 UTC]
i didnt think that but probably yes, even lewd dreams
yes they remember, but depend of the problem of the patient. can be cured but all patient are diferent. not all the coma are equal.
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linjunming [2017-05-19 11:48:51 +0000 UTC]
This is so beauty . I really love black and white illustration .
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