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kiddopolis [2012-06-19 07:24:34 +0000 UTC]
HOHOHO!
Remember, when writing with speech, each sentence goes on a new line!
Walking to her new home, Delilah decided to call her friends and tell them that she had finally arrived in the middle of nowhere. She decided to call Stacy first. Clicking on Stacy's name, Delilah yelled "Darn!!! There's no reception. What am I to do? I won't last a week in this Hellhole." She ran off into some random paddock, searching for some reception. Bang, she had run into a 'hot' country guy. 'Why am I thinking this? It's only a country person. And aren't they all ugly people, who can't speak properly?' she thought. "Sorry, are you alright. My name is Carter." "Yea, I'm Delilah. Um, do you know if there's any phone reception around here." "Yes, up near the old church" "ok. Thanks, bye." Delilah ran towards the old church, but her father stopped her, by telling her to go to her new home.
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Walking to her new home, Delilah decided to call her friends and tell them that she had finally arrived in the middle of nowhere. She decided to call Stacy first.
Clicking on Stacy's name, Delilah yelled "Darn!!! There's no reception. What am I to do? I won't last a week in this Hellhole."
She ran off into some random paddock, searching for some reception. Bang, she had run into a 'hot' country guy. 'Why am I thinking this? It's only a country person. And aren't they all ugly people, who can't speak properly?' she thought.
"Sorry, are you alright? My name is Carter."
"Yea, I'm Delilah. Um, do you know if there's any phone reception around here?"
"Yes, up near the old church"
"Ok. Thanks, bye."
Delilah ran towards the old church, but her father stopped her, by telling her to go to her new home.
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Hansta31 In reply to kiddopolis [2012-06-19 11:21:51 +0000 UTC]
shhhhhhh...
"thanks Elyse" I am whispering at the moment.
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kiddopolis In reply to Hansta31 [2012-06-21 08:00:21 +0000 UTC]
"Yes really?" I groaned.
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kiddopolis In reply to Hansta31 [2012-06-21 08:30:40 +0000 UTC]
o_________o
"See you after the hols maybe?" I asked.
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monkeeyz98 In reply to Hansta31 [2012-08-30 06:57:41 +0000 UTC]
"you guys are weird!" I stated. "Hana, it's really good!" I continued.
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Hansta31 In reply to monkeeyz98 [2012-08-30 07:20:13 +0000 UTC]
"We know!" we reply. "Thank you, Daniello my Caramello friend." Hana answered, while smiling.
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monkeeyz98 In reply to Hansta31 [2012-08-30 07:23:44 +0000 UTC]
Danielle shakes her head in shame. "Gosh my friends are weird" she says
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Hansta31 In reply to monkeeyz98 [2012-08-30 07:45:39 +0000 UTC]
Hana smirks and says "yes, we're special... Special K"
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monkeeyz98 In reply to Hansta31 [2012-08-30 07:48:30 +0000 UTC]
"Special K, the best way to start the day" Danielle quotes
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Hansta31 In reply to monkeeyz98 [2012-08-30 07:50:17 +0000 UTC]
Hana laughs thinking of Special K, then gets distracted by the awesomeness of One Direction.
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monkeeyz98 In reply to Hansta31 [2012-08-30 07:52:14 +0000 UTC]
Danielle thanks Hana for reminding her that she must watch five very sexy lads on youtube
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Hansta31 In reply to monkeeyz98 [2012-08-30 09:27:02 +0000 UTC]
Hana says "No Problemo, somewhere on YouTube there's a video and it shows Louis' 'Bear Donkey'... Just thought I'd let you know..."
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monkeeyz98 In reply to Hansta31 [2012-08-30 09:37:27 +0000 UTC]
"What?" Daniee questions
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