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Hansta31 — Forever and a day: Chapter 1- The Move

Published: 2012-06-18 11:22:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 209; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description Delilah was throwing all her belongings around her room. She didn't want to move to the country. She didn't want to move at all. She hated almost every type of animal. She wanted to stay with her friends in Los Angeles. Her father said she would make new friends, but all she thought was 'I'm not going to hang around the Beverley Hills Hillbillies or any other country person; It would be so not cool.'

The time came to leave and Delilah was forced to pack everything she wanted to keep. Stepping outside Delilah turned around, to have one last look at her house. A single tear crept down her face and dropped onto the ground. She was really leaving, everything and everyone. She and her father caught the first plane to the country.

The flight was long and uneventful. When Delilah arrived, she saw only animals in paddocks and plants. Where were the five star hotels, fancy restaurants and Shopping Malls? Delilah only saw a post office; a small food store, which was a third the size of Aldi and a miniature chemist, with only two Aisles.

Walking to her new home, Delilah decided to call her friends and tell them that she had finally arrived in the middle of nowhere. She decided to call Stacy first. Clicking on Stacy's name,
Delilah yelled "Darn!!! There's no reception. What am I to do? I won't last a week in this Hellhole." She ran off into some random paddock, searching for some reception. Bang, she had run into a 'hot' country guy. 'Why am I thinking this? It's only a country person. And aren't they all ugly people, who can't speak properly?' she thought. "Sorry, are you alright. My name is Carter."
"Yea, I'm Delilah. Um, do you know if there's any phone reception around here."
"Yes, up near the old church"
"ok. Thanks, bye." Delilah ran towards the old church, but her father stopped her, by telling her to go to her new home.

The house was nothing like her house in LA. The windows were tall and chequered, the roof was beige coloured, and there was a chimney, and a long front veranda, and the outside perimeter was lined with rose bushes. Inside the house seemed somehow bigger perhaps it was because it was empty or the fact the she had never been there before.

-To be continued-
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kiddopolis [2012-06-19 07:24:34 +0000 UTC]

HOHOHO!
Remember, when writing with speech, each sentence goes on a new line!

Walking to her new home, Delilah decided to call her friends and tell them that she had finally arrived in the middle of nowhere. She decided to call Stacy first. Clicking on Stacy's name, Delilah yelled "Darn!!! There's no reception. What am I to do? I won't last a week in this Hellhole." She ran off into some random paddock, searching for some reception. Bang, she had run into a 'hot' country guy. 'Why am I thinking this? It's only a country person. And aren't they all ugly people, who can't speak properly?' she thought. "Sorry, are you alright. My name is Carter." "Yea, I'm Delilah. Um, do you know if there's any phone reception around here." "Yes, up near the old church" "ok. Thanks, bye." Delilah ran towards the old church, but her father stopped her, by telling her to go to her new home.

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Walking to her new home, Delilah decided to call her friends and tell them that she had finally arrived in the middle of nowhere. She decided to call Stacy first.
Clicking on Stacy's name, Delilah yelled "Darn!!! There's no reception. What am I to do? I won't last a week in this Hellhole."
She ran off into some random paddock, searching for some reception. Bang, she had run into a 'hot' country guy. 'Why am I thinking this? It's only a country person. And aren't they all ugly people, who can't speak properly?' she thought.
"Sorry, are you alright? My name is Carter."
"Yea, I'm Delilah. Um, do you know if there's any phone reception around here?"
"Yes, up near the old church"
"Ok. Thanks, bye."
Delilah ran towards the old church, but her father stopped her, by telling her to go to her new home.

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Hansta31 In reply to kiddopolis [2012-06-19 11:21:51 +0000 UTC]

shhhhhhh...
"thanks Elyse" I am whispering at the moment.

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kiddopolis In reply to Hansta31 [2012-06-20 07:05:12 +0000 UTC]


"It was no problem really~" I giggled.

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Hansta31 In reply to kiddopolis [2012-06-20 09:17:37 +0000 UTC]

"oh really?" I questioned.

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kiddopolis In reply to Hansta31 [2012-06-21 08:00:21 +0000 UTC]

"Yes really?" I groaned.

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Hansta31 In reply to kiddopolis [2012-06-21 08:11:25 +0000 UTC]

o_O "ya sure?" I questioned back laughing.

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kiddopolis In reply to Hansta31 [2012-06-21 08:30:40 +0000 UTC]

o_________o
"See you after the hols maybe?" I asked.

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Hansta31 In reply to kiddopolis [2012-06-21 09:02:05 +0000 UTC]

"Yes, maybe..." I answered, "jks of course after the hols" .

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monkeeyz98 In reply to Hansta31 [2012-08-30 06:57:41 +0000 UTC]

"you guys are weird!" I stated. "Hana, it's really good!" I continued.

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Hansta31 In reply to monkeeyz98 [2012-08-30 07:20:13 +0000 UTC]

"We know!" we reply. "Thank you, Daniello my Caramello friend." Hana answered, while smiling.

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monkeeyz98 In reply to Hansta31 [2012-08-30 07:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Danielle shakes her head in shame. "Gosh my friends are weird" she says

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Hansta31 In reply to monkeeyz98 [2012-08-30 07:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Hana smirks and says "yes, we're special... Special K"

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monkeeyz98 In reply to Hansta31 [2012-08-30 07:48:30 +0000 UTC]

"Special K, the best way to start the day" Danielle quotes

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Hansta31 In reply to monkeeyz98 [2012-08-30 07:50:17 +0000 UTC]

Hana laughs thinking of Special K, then gets distracted by the awesomeness of One Direction.

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monkeeyz98 In reply to Hansta31 [2012-08-30 07:52:14 +0000 UTC]

Danielle thanks Hana for reminding her that she must watch five very sexy lads on youtube

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Hansta31 In reply to monkeeyz98 [2012-08-30 09:27:02 +0000 UTC]

Hana says "No Problemo, somewhere on YouTube there's a video and it shows Louis' 'Bear Donkey'... Just thought I'd let you know..."

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monkeeyz98 In reply to Hansta31 [2012-08-30 09:37:27 +0000 UTC]

"What?" Daniee questions

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Hansta31 In reply to Hansta31 [2012-06-21 12:33:31 +0000 UTC]

If not sooner

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