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Published: 2011-05-15 08:06:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1937; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 43
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Description It's gonna be an endless comment so I won't be angry if you don't read it ^^

It took me so much time to finish it! Not that it was the longest drawing I could do, but I never managed to find the time to do it seriously, it's been two months I do it little by little. I'm pretty happy with this one but I had many difficulties with her design.
Since I imagined her as an OC from Sengoku Basara (yes one more time I'm becoming a traitor to NG! xp) it was very hard to find a design and combination of colours that doesn't resemble too much the numerous characters of game. I changed it over and over. One time she looked like Motochika Chousokabe, one time like Akechi Mistuhide, one time like Date Masamune, even Keiji Maeda (argh no I don't like him >_<), Kotaro Fuuma etc. Hell, I stopped and coloured anyway. At first I didn't make her dark blue clothes, her arms and breast were bared under her haori. However, I decided to remove any fan service just to make an awesome character and exuberant like the others from Sengoku Basara. Don't know if I reached my goal of awesomeness, you'll tell me ^^'
Her pose is inspired by an illustration from the Dr forlen book by ~shipenglee .

Some quick story lines:
At first, no she is not an historical character at all, I'm not familiar enough with Japan's history for that.
Fukuyo Shitomari was a local unknown warlord's wife always assisting him in the clan's political and economical affairs. Though she is not good with classical ways of fightingg like Kenjutsu or the use of Naginata, she always had an affinity with martial arts and developped her own style. Her husband tried to face Oda Nobunaga's strenghts but died and half of the clan's army were killed. Fukuyo decided to take the head of the clan but couldn't afford to lead the battle since her army got too small. Instead, for the clan's security, she created a hidden network of numerous merchants, mercenaries and more that become very influential through the whole country but remaining unrevealed, thanks to extremly strict and complex rules.
However, one day, Sasuke Sarutobi's ninjas discovered about this network and visited her to deal an alliance that she refused. Few time after, her castle is attacked by Toyotomi Hideyoshi's army wanting to take the control of her organization. She wins the battle, but her foes were not very numerous and more would come soon. She takes the decision to leave her network and break all links with it in order to protect it, and she enters the war against Hideyoshi. Wondering how Hideyoshi discovered her organization, she firstly walks towards the Takeda clan to get explanations, given Sasuke Sarutobi and his ninjas were the only ones who discovered her organization and are still alive. But she is still pursued by Hideyoshi's armies...
In her way she'll meet several warlords: Mouri Motonari, Date Masamune, Chousokabe Motochika, Hisahide Matsunaga...
A nickname for her: The sharks fang XD! Because she always stayed discreet and she is hunted, and if you take off a tooth, another come instantly...

Also made for #UnseenArtists 's "OC at their best" contest, I am quite disappointed with the result (it seems that kawainess was the main criteria of selection over originality) but I can't do anything.

I have so much drawings to finish and many new ideas but lack time these days, I need some holidays to stay alone and draw =o
I know my perspective is still awful, but let me time to train and improve ^^

~Tori-Fan offered me a drawing of this character [link] thank you!
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Comments: 19

N-Hyuman80 [2012-11-23 05:46:37 +0000 UTC]

I like almost every single thing about this picture. Naturally critical as I am though, I can't not point out the things I don't-

She's very tall(even with the geta), so she seems very lanky. Not bad, maybe it's a perspective issue. I didn't even know it was a guy til I read the descrip.

Is the sheath meant to be on the left, if she uses the sword with her left? It's not impossible to draw a sword from the same side, and if intentional, it's kind of a cool thing, I just wanted to know.

The face is very... dull- I think that's the word I mean. Very small, very dark, and, honestly, not as good as the rest of the pic. Should be a little bigger, to stand out a little more, otherwise it just sort of disappears into the picture.

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Hanoko In reply to N-Hyuman80 [2012-11-23 08:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Firstly I thank you so much for your criticism! Not so much people take the time to do it.
To answer your questions:

1. Yes I wanted her to look tall but it is also true that I have troubles with perspective and foreshortening. (And it's a woman indeed even if I like adding some manly features to the design)

2.For the sheath you got it right too, that's exactly what I intended! Maybe the sword should be shorter but since I created her thinking of a series whose characters do crazy things with their weapons (for example one of them draws six swords at once) so I just skip this detail.

3. Well I do agree that the face didn't come out well, in my first lineart ([link] ) it was ok I think but colouring a pencil drawing is always hazardous for me I often screw the face unfortunately.

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joejr2 [2012-02-21 08:10:31 +0000 UTC]

nice char amazing job

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Hanoko In reply to joejr2 [2012-02-21 09:14:37 +0000 UTC]

I've really put all my heart and so much efforts in this character, glad you like her!

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joejr2 In reply to Hanoko [2012-02-21 16:16:34 +0000 UTC]

jejeje yep i like looks really cool
mi fucking deviant ,dont show me your news jajajajX_X thas why i dont coment lately but i find this jajjaa

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Hanoko In reply to joejr2 [2012-02-21 18:21:32 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes I have the same problem in my inbox. However this one was made some months ago, so you couln't have received it in your devwatch inbox

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joejr2 In reply to Hanoko [2012-02-21 20:37:16 +0000 UTC]

ajjaje yes fuking inbox
i hope to see more stuff

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RedWingsDragon [2011-05-16 05:45:16 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work here

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Hanoko In reply to RedWingsDragon [2011-05-17 17:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm back

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hyugayume [2011-05-15 22:59:37 +0000 UTC]

wow this is a great drawing O_o!!!

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Hanoko In reply to hyugayume [2011-05-16 19:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Thankies!!

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darkslyer7raven [2011-05-15 11:52:00 +0000 UTC]

hi! i miss ur work! this one is seriously awesome! great work and progress

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Hanoko In reply to darkslyer7raven [2011-05-15 15:35:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! Hello and thank you! It's been a long time you're watching me, it's nice to hear from you ^^

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darkslyer7raven In reply to Hanoko [2011-05-15 16:33:45 +0000 UTC]

its nice to see new works from u, u should check my progress also, am whipping ass

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futarikimaru [2011-05-15 10:28:45 +0000 UTC]

hahah very nice, and why don't you like keiji maeda?, he's a funny kabukimono, do you know that there is a manga named "hana no keiji" by my favorite authour tetsuo hara with him as protagonist? the manga is older than the sengoku basara games though, maybe if you'd read that you would like the character better, it's like a funnier version of hokuto no ken in the japanese middle age hahah

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Hanoko In reply to futarikimaru [2011-05-15 15:34:19 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I've read the first eight volumes some years ago before knowing Sengoku Basara but didn't like it so much. Keiji in this manga is always depicted as magnificent, brillant, powerful, virtuous, awesome... he is depicted as perfect and everything is focused on him. I must say that I found this manga a little borring. I've read 8 volumes only thanks to the drawings that are really impressive, but the story needs to be more complex.
I don't like the SB version but for other reasons, he is almost useless in always negociating and he never fights, that's boring in a series where fights are so furious and enjoyable XD

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futarikimaru In reply to Hanoko [2011-05-15 16:04:41 +0000 UTC]

yeah you're right about the last sentence, he surely needs to fight more and talk less hahah, maybe you'd like better the version of sengoku musou(samurai warriors) of keiji maeda he fights more

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Hanoko In reply to futarikimaru [2011-05-15 16:55:38 +0000 UTC]

It's been so much time I haven't played Samurai Warriors! But video games is different than anime, there are obviously action. But I do remember Keiji in Samurai Warior, he looks more awesome. If one day I have the occasion to play again Samurai Warriors, i'll try him.

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futarikimaru In reply to Hanoko [2011-05-16 10:32:34 +0000 UTC]

good

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