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N-Hyuman80 [2012-11-23 05:46:37 +0000 UTC]
I like almost every single thing about this picture. Naturally critical as I am though, I can't not point out the things I don't-
She's very tall(even with the geta), so she seems very lanky. Not bad, maybe it's a perspective issue. I didn't even know it was a guy til I read the descrip.
Is the sheath meant to be on the left, if she uses the sword with her left? It's not impossible to draw a sword from the same side, and if intentional, it's kind of a cool thing, I just wanted to know.
The face is very... dull- I think that's the word I mean. Very small, very dark, and, honestly, not as good as the rest of the pic. Should be a little bigger, to stand out a little more, otherwise it just sort of disappears into the picture.
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Hanoko In reply to N-Hyuman80 [2012-11-23 08:40:53 +0000 UTC]
Firstly I thank you so much for your criticism! Not so much people take the time to do it.
To answer your questions:
1. Yes I wanted her to look tall but it is also true that I have troubles with perspective and foreshortening. (And it's a woman indeed even if I like adding some manly features to the design)
2.For the sheath you got it right too, that's exactly what I intended! Maybe the sword should be shorter but since I created her thinking of a series whose characters do crazy things with their weapons (for example one of them draws six swords at once) so I just skip this detail.
3. Well I do agree that the face didn't come out well, in my first lineart ([link] ) it was ok I think but colouring a pencil drawing is always hazardous for me I often screw the face unfortunately.
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RedWingsDragon [2011-05-16 05:45:16 +0000 UTC]
Awesome work here
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hyugayume [2011-05-15 22:59:37 +0000 UTC]
wow this is a great drawing O_o!!!
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Hanoko In reply to hyugayume [2011-05-16 19:07:46 +0000 UTC]
Thankies!!
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darkslyer7raven [2011-05-15 11:52:00 +0000 UTC]
hi! i miss ur work! this one is seriously awesome! great work and progress
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Hanoko In reply to darkslyer7raven [2011-05-15 15:35:33 +0000 UTC]
Yeah! Hello and thank you! It's been a long time you're watching me, it's nice to hear from you ^^
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futarikimaru [2011-05-15 10:28:45 +0000 UTC]
hahah very nice, and why don't you like keiji maeda?, he's a funny kabukimono, do you know that there is a manga named "hana no keiji" by my favorite authour tetsuo hara with him as protagonist? the manga is older than the sengoku basara games though, maybe if you'd read that you would like the character better, it's like a funnier version of hokuto no ken in the japanese middle age hahah
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Hanoko In reply to futarikimaru [2011-05-15 15:34:19 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I've read the first eight volumes some years ago before knowing Sengoku Basara but didn't like it so much. Keiji in this manga is always depicted as magnificent, brillant, powerful, virtuous, awesome... he is depicted as perfect and everything is focused on him. I must say that I found this manga a little borring. I've read 8 volumes only thanks to the drawings that are really impressive, but the story needs to be more complex.
I don't like the SB version but for other reasons, he is almost useless in always negociating and he never fights, that's boring in a series where fights are so furious and enjoyable XD
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futarikimaru In reply to Hanoko [2011-05-15 16:04:41 +0000 UTC]
yeah you're right about the last sentence, he surely needs to fight more and talk less hahah, maybe you'd like better the version of sengoku musou(samurai warriors) of keiji maeda he fights more
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Hanoko In reply to futarikimaru [2011-05-15 16:55:38 +0000 UTC]
It's been so much time I haven't played Samurai Warriors! But video games is different than anime, there are obviously action. But I do remember Keiji in Samurai Warior, he looks more awesome. If one day I have the occasion to play again Samurai Warriors, i'll try him.
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