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My classmates arranged a (long) trip to a small archipelago. And I'm really thankful they did, because I've never enjoyed the sea as much as I did then.

Ah, the good times... I still remember the sea-dipped grilled fish. It was crazy.

That was where the inspiration came from. And I've never been on a train. So I imagined a flying train which heads to a floating archipelago. There are some ways to get there. By birds, helicopters, hot air balloons, kites, anything that flies. I chose train because it's my dream ride.

I love comments and praises. Yummy! But I'd be most honored if you would tell me which part could use some improvements. Critiques are the best kind of feedback, really. Please enjoy!

EDIT : I've added some highlights to the peach and lighten the sky and sea.

Description
My classmates arranged a (long) trip to a small archipelago. And I'm really thankful they did, because I've never enjoyed the sea as much as I did then.

Ah, the good times... I still remember the sea-dipped grilled fish. It was crazy.

That was where the inspiration came from. And I've never been on a train. So I imagined a flying train which heads to a floating archipelago. There are some ways to get there. By birds, helicopters, hot air balloons, kites, anything that flies. I chose train because it's my dream ride.

I love comments and praises. Yummy! But I'd be most honored if you would tell me which part could use some improvements. Critiques are the best kind of feedback, really. Please enjoy!

EDIT : I've added some highlights to the peach and lighten the sky and sea.