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Haku360 — La Sonata del Lobo Azul

Published: 2012-02-18 07:52:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1575; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 29
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Description Kiara: Desde mi alma puedo ver aquel animal,
rodeandome al ritmo de cada tonada del musical.
No le hablo y ese animal no me habla,
aparece hasta que mi vista se dobla.

Azul es su color del cuerpo como el color de mi alma,
gira alrededor de mi con ojos como los mios.
No puedo dejar de tocar la sonata hasta verlo desaparecer,
mi tonada no se detendra hasta que mi violin se rompa.

Me siento como un un ser que flota,
alrededor de espesa niebla azul que sigue al animal.
Mi cabello cubre mis piernas,
y bloqueando mi presenentimiento de tener piernas

El tiene una cola cortada,
pero tengo el presentimiento que antes era como el mio.
Mis manos estan cansadas pero no se detienen de tocar la melodia,
Estoy exhausto, quiero detenerme, pero esa bestia atrae mi atencion.

- Kiara
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Kiara: From my soul i can see that animal,
surrounding me in the rythm of each tone of the musical.
I don't talk to it and the animal don't talk to me,
It appear until my sight gets doubled.

Blue is the colour of it's body like the colour of my soul,
Spin around of me with eyes like mine.
I can't stop of play the sonata until see it dissapear,
my tones will not going to stop until my violin breaks.

I feel like a thing who floats,,
surrounded by a wide blue fog that follows the animal.
My hair is covering my legs,
and blocking my feeling of that i have legs.

He has a scar tail,
but i have the feeling that before it was like mine.
My hands are already tired but they don't stop playing the melody,
I'm exhausted, i want to stop, but the beast attract my attencion.

-Kiara
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Comments: 24

VI-X [2012-02-18 16:24:58 +0000 UTC]

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this is very Awesome looking,but for me I just think your went a little too dark on the shading.
try this: use the airbrush for shading,then use the blur tool to make it smooth and blend a bit with the original color.

I have seen spirit pictures,and music playing,but I have to admit
I've never seen a pic with both of those combined
The Technique is good,I like how the Spirit/Soul is formed.
Very well done on that part.
You could have added some lumonosity to the Soul/spirit but it's lovely the way it is at the moment,but it's still gonna be awesome no matter what^^

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Haku360 In reply to VI-X [2012-02-18 16:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critic, about the blur, i'm not good using it, i only use airbrush for everything.

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pollydragon [2012-02-18 08:04:33 +0000 UTC]

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Wow he use his shading and the color of the background that was an new start for him the and the violin them is perfect you people should proud of him ^^ accept his work the color, shading, background its perfect like he's an computer artist he use some color and them for this drawing im proud of him he's my DA big bro and a good friend the only he needs is more practice and he'll be better and better like me never forget it people like an artist needs practice and learning like him he knows that he's an true and kind artist never forget it people

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migueruchan [2012-10-13 05:03:21 +0000 UTC]

No esta mal, pero las manos se ven raras, y el codo izquierdo lo veo como mal posicionado.

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Haku360 In reply to migueruchan [2012-10-13 06:17:02 +0000 UTC]

No le puse esfuerzo, 12 minutos de dibujarlo y media hora de pintarlo

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CrazyCakesunesART [2012-02-23 11:36:30 +0000 UTC]

Veo que te encantan los efectos de Textura :3 Estan increibles tus dibujos!! Mejoras mucho!! X3

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SilverAlchemist09 [2012-02-19 00:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Me encanta!!! x3

Aww y esta en traje adan como me comentaste x3, aww mi querido tesorito ya crecio x3

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Haku360 In reply to SilverAlchemist09 [2012-02-19 00:46:35 +0000 UTC]

jejejeje sii :3 crecio fuerte y barbaro o3o

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SilverAlchemist09 In reply to Haku360 [2012-02-19 00:48:12 +0000 UTC]

sii x3, como adoro que lo hayamos hecho ^///^

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Haku360 In reply to SilverAlchemist09 [2012-02-19 00:51:14 +0000 UTC]

Claro ^///^ es un encanto

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SilverAlchemist09 In reply to Haku360 [2012-02-19 01:15:40 +0000 UTC]

siii X3

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cuat21 [2012-02-18 23:32:56 +0000 UTC]

hehehe salio mas padre haku :3

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Haku360 In reply to cuat21 [2012-02-18 23:41:24 +0000 UTC]

Graciaaas :3

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bluemoonblade [2012-02-18 21:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Woah eres mejor al shading q yo! XDD
Gran trabajo Haku! :3

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Haku360 In reply to bluemoonblade [2012-02-18 21:19:03 +0000 UTC]

ni tanto asi X3

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bluemoonblade In reply to Haku360 [2012-02-18 21:26:29 +0000 UTC]

Shi eres >:3

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Haku360 In reply to bluemoonblade [2012-02-18 21:28:06 +0000 UTC]

no se hacer shading tradicionalmente ^^

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bluemoonblade In reply to Haku360 [2012-02-19 05:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Enserio? Ohhhhh pero como sabes q dibujo tradicional? XDD

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AnaMariaTheHedgehog [2012-02-18 11:09:14 +0000 UTC]

ME ENCANTA!!!! *.* X3333 A FAVS X333 Me encanto hermanito ^w^

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Haku360 In reply to AnaMariaTheHedgehog [2012-02-18 15:19:19 +0000 UTC]

Gracias hermana :3

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AnaMariaTheHedgehog In reply to Haku360 [2012-02-18 15:31:09 +0000 UTC]

De nada >w<

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KurobaFox1412 [2012-02-18 10:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Somehow this looks sad... But cool, too! I like that!

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Haku360 In reply to KurobaFox1412 [2012-02-18 15:19:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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KurobaFox1412 In reply to Haku360 [2012-02-18 15:20:36 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome^^

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