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Published: 2013-09-02 21:32:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 498; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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Description At the end
of oppressive life,
when rest
is imminent,
one more thing
left to be done
between approaching
darknesses -
One more thing
as you forsake
the moon
and reach out...
Reach!
for the sun,
fading fast
in fire
and color.
Color of laughter.
Color of love.
Color of water
and crimson skies...
rolling, rolling
together
and away
from this world
to begin
your journey
and to
remember...
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Comments: 8

thehackslash197 [2013-09-02 22:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow! It seems like the setting could be like this:
You are about to die. Memories of all those years flash before your eyes, the good and the bad, all in shades of color.
The blackness could be a metaphor for the death that will inevitably happen. Body is slowly shutting down...
The sun could be the gateway into the next life, the life after earth.
I could be totally wrong, but this is my interpretation, lol.

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GUDRUN355 In reply to thehackslash197 [2013-09-02 22:53:40 +0000 UTC]

You are right in your interpretation. Thank you so much. I hope it's a good poem because sometimes spontaneous stuff seems too rushed?

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thehackslash197 In reply to GUDRUN355 [2013-09-02 23:24:21 +0000 UTC]

This is an UNBELIEVABLY GOOD poem.
And yay, my interpretation is right!

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GUDRUN355 In reply to thehackslash197 [2013-09-02 23:24:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you again! Β 

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dejesusscott [2013-09-02 21:35:06 +0000 UTC]

Dat's is soo sweet yo. I wishedΒ I could write a poem like dat... Well done nena.. Suave.......Β Β Β 

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GUDRUN355 In reply to dejesusscott [2013-09-02 22:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you so much! You're such a nice person to read my poem and comment!! Β 

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dejesusscott In reply to GUDRUN355 [2013-09-02 22:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome mi amiga. It's was no prob to read y it's was beautiful yo...

So a good y safe week ahead for you yo..Β Β  Β Β 

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GUDRUN355 In reply to dejesusscott [2013-09-02 22:54:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and I hope your week is wonderful!

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