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Published: 2010-09-15 03:41:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2758; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 27
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Description Experiments with tones and word bubbles and sound effects and comics in general.

I still have no idea what to call this series anyway.

I have a second page that I'm in the process of inking. Expect it later! Perhaps!

EDIT:
O btw, Daran did the 'Augustists' poster on the wall.
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Comments: 13

Diorai [2010-10-13 15:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Question: how did you compile this? Was it drawn on paper and then edited, or straight in Photoshop/Manga Studio etc? Love it!

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gregly In reply to Diorai [2010-10-13 20:15:31 +0000 UTC]

The big picture behind and the smaller panels were separate. Scanned everything in black and white, and then cut out the white space around the borders in photoshop, and put them on top of each other. Then I shaded everything with tones!

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Caitie-Hinchey [2010-09-16 06:11:50 +0000 UTC]

I like this a whole shit ton. I want to read more!

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gregly In reply to Caitie-Hinchey [2010-09-16 14:40:27 +0000 UTC]

you have I showed you the next page

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Jesteppi [2010-09-15 16:44:12 +0000 UTC]

I especially like the word bubbles and her snoring sounds. It's very easy to read and understand, so nice work.

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gregly In reply to Jesteppi [2010-09-16 14:40:11 +0000 UTC]

Sweet! That's what I was worried about!

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turqteischa [2010-09-15 08:21:02 +0000 UTC]

...What is Haaaaaaqch a sound effect for? Squelching?

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gregly In reply to turqteischa [2010-09-16 14:39:54 +0000 UTC]

Snoring inwards; the 'zzzzz' is exhaling.

I made it a really gross noise because I thought it would be funny if she made gross sleeping noises.

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turqteischa In reply to gregly [2010-09-16 23:26:55 +0000 UTC]

k

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dillyisawilly [2010-09-15 05:45:10 +0000 UTC]

dude, this even looks better than what you showed me a while back

good job a+

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gregly In reply to dillyisawilly [2010-09-16 14:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeeaaaah

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MarkHartman [2010-09-15 05:05:28 +0000 UTC]

Hey, Greg, now that I look at this again, I really like the little extra detail in the shading (on her bedding in the first frame) and I think you should apply this some other places. Like maybe the chair or the hair and fabric in the other three panels? Plus with the textures added the filler lines in the second panel make it look extra busy or energized or something, I almost get the impression she's waking up in that frame because of it.

Just sayin. I still really, really like it and am kind of jealous of your skills. Sorry if you didn't want a critique.

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gregly In reply to MarkHartman [2010-09-15 06:25:58 +0000 UTC]

I guess I'll try to shade it more, since the light is coming in through the window.

Or if I want to make it easier for myself I'll just make everything be flat

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