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GreatMarta — Guren and her brothers

Published: 2011-01-27 05:58:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 2008; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Characters from "Keeping Hope Alive" verse I share with Atemuzuko. Rock Guren (LeeSaku daughter) with her two half-brothers: Rock Mayu (LeeHina son) and Haruno Makoto (SasuSaku son).

Atemuzuko and I draw our characters around the age of 12 in their profile pictures, but I wanted to show the age difference between the siblings (Mayu and Makoto are 6 years older than Guren - they are 18 here and she is 12)

Mayu at 18 is not much different than Mayu at 12. He loves to babysit (especially his little sister), is nice to people, is freakish strong and doesn't get jokes. Oh, one thing that changed is that he is looking for a girlfriend to start a happy family ^_^.

Makoto at 18 is much more quiet and reserved than as a child. He has mastered sharingan, has become jonin and ANBU captain. His ambition is to become the next Hokage, to finally proove that he isn't a Sasuke-clone.
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Comments: 16

nikkissippi121 [2013-12-29 07:10:03 +0000 UTC]

I have to say, Mayu is probably my favorite Naruto OC. I just want to hug him! Of course, you, atemuzuko and ode2sokka make fantastic characters as it is. You guys are really an inspiration!

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GreatMarta In reply to nikkissippi121 [2013-12-29 19:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It was a pleasure working with atemuzuko, these sisters do have this something about themselves. Pity they are not so active anymore, but I understand that real life takes priority

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goodzuzu14 [2011-02-05 05:28:22 +0000 UTC]

would you like a wife for Mayu?

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GreatMarta In reply to goodzuzu14 [2011-02-05 10:31:43 +0000 UTC]

Well, this verse is shared with Atemuzuko, so whatever changes I would like to introduce I will have to consult with her first.

But the fact is that we have so far agreed for 9 "kids" in this verse (she still has to design a ShinoHana daughter and a GaiShizu son). So in order to pair everybody up we will need one more girl indeed. I don't know as for now which guy will end up without a girl, so let's wait till Atemuzuko does the remaining two designs, then she and I will discuss this.

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goodzuzu14 In reply to GreatMarta [2011-02-05 17:04:57 +0000 UTC]

oh okay

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goodzuzu14 [2011-01-27 17:29:41 +0000 UTC]

aww Mayu is looking to settle down? that is so sweet....

amazing picture by the way! :3

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GreatMarta In reply to goodzuzu14 [2011-01-27 18:22:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah Mayu is very much a family guy with lots of love to give (and loves children ^_^). One thing he still has to learn is how the "chemistry" works between men and women (as for now he pretty much understand only the platonical kind of love ^_^).

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goodzuzu14 In reply to GreatMarta [2011-01-27 21:44:24 +0000 UTC]

aww.... who is he gonna (eventually) marry?

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GreatMarta In reply to goodzuzu14 [2011-01-28 13:30:32 +0000 UTC]

It is not decided yet. Whoever that'll be she'll have to have a lot of patience for him (Mayu is sweet and all, but he can be an idiot to the extreme ^_^ very much like Son Goku)

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goodzuzu14 In reply to GreatMarta [2011-01-28 17:25:13 +0000 UTC]

awww

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atemuzuko [2011-01-27 16:00:00 +0000 UTC]

This is so cute I LOVE it! I adore seeing Guren with her brothers, especially where you can see the age difference. That is so awesome! I adore Makoto's older design, he's very spiffy And Mayu is so adorable I want to hug him.

Great picture, really, it is so amazing! Words to not describe the joy I feel at seeing this. I love it!

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GreatMarta In reply to atemuzuko [2011-01-27 18:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Your words are music to my ears ^_^

My goal was to make the boys have some uniqueness and not be their fathers' clones. So I styled Mayu's face after Hiashi's and Makoto's after Fugaku's. Gave nice result in the end ^_^

BTW you may want to update Hato's profile now that I designed a sister for him ^_^

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atemuzuko In reply to GreatMarta [2011-01-27 19:32:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad

I think it is an excellent result. They look fantastic, I really do love their older designs. And the emotions in the picture is palpable, very good

Ooooh yes, I'll have to do that. Sorry I've been busy lately

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Bringitsport [2011-01-27 15:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Who was married to who first?

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GreatMarta In reply to Bringitsport [2011-01-27 17:22:45 +0000 UTC]

Lee and Hinata were married first, for which Hinata was disowned from the Hyuuga clan. They were happy together, but when Hinata was pregnant and Lee was away on a mission she was poisoned by a Hyuuga elder. The man left her to die, but Sakura came for a surprise visit and found her on the floor. Hinata begged sakura to save the baby, so Sakura performed C-Section and managed to save Mayu. Hinata dies knowing Mayu would live.

At that time Sakura had a 3-month-old baby - Makoto. In this verse Sasuke was still a missing nin. Sakura and Naruto were hunting for him, but he managed to capture Sakura and rape her when she was unconscious. Konoha law forbids aborting children who might have a bloodline limit, so Sakura had to keep Sasuke's baby.

After Hinata died Sakura felt obliged to look after Mayu and brest-fed him along with Makoto. She and Lee supported each other with looking after the kids and eventually became close and decided to get married. In the end they had a daughter together. Thus Guren is much younger than her two brothers.

and that's basically it.

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Bringitsport In reply to GreatMarta [2011-01-28 20:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Cool story

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