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GothDream — The Presence

Published: 2005-07-28 12:18:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1703; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 220
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Description Inside my mind

the storm is crying upon this lonely desert
and thunders are crashing upon this sandy graveyard..
cemetery of innocent and yet broken dreams
I only want to lose the sense of reality..
this world hurts me too much..
lightnings are dancing a mourning melody
winds are singing their funereal brutality
but the dead tree still calm..perfectly motionless
like nothing could touch my emotions anymore..
I feel my mind implode..

Then, through the storm, a warm breeze keeps me alive
tender words whispered from nowhere
a dim light from the elder memories
takes me slowly to the sweetest oblivion..
this presence..
holds my hand until dawn..
another chance to change the world

I Believe
I'm not alone
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This is done for =Moniquette contest "Magic"
I don't know what's this presence..maybe dreams.. or God..or angels..or loved ones.. probably all them togrther..but it's with me whenever I'm in need...to save me when the sky turns to storm.. to me this is real magic..
--------- credits---------
dancer->~MirandaRose-Stock
presence-> *lockstock
background-> philipn @ [link]
sky-> rsvstks @ [link]
wings brushes -> wix (i think.. )
smoke brushes-> ~Rykan
lightning brushes -> =Scully7491
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Comments: 22

AlessandroManno [2006-10-04 10:11:42 +0000 UTC]

Spettacolare.. Bravissima!

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DarklyJaded [2006-05-21 18:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Very emotive and desolate, as though at the end of time,
nothing matters except the reality locked in our essence,
yet there is that one element,
one that brings a touch
of hope, comfort
and solace.

This is what I see in this piece and wrote the first part before I read your
words. I like to put in words what I see in another's work before reading
their thoughts and description.
This allows my interpretation of your work through how well you executed it,
basically a small testimonial of your talent (if my evaluation is right).
It also keeps my senses honed to the sensitivities of others.

Nicely done, very expressive
Desolation of the heart and loss are the most severe of mental anguish.

dJ

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GothDream In reply to DarklyJaded [2006-05-22 12:21:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much..yours is one of the most beautiful comment i ever recived..i love to see how people feel about my works..no matter if it's different from my concept...the matter is that my works can express feelings..thank you so much!!

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DarklyJaded In reply to GothDream [2006-05-22 21:48:34 +0000 UTC]

We all have our guardians, most of the time we do not realize this.
I think it is being aware of our surroundings. There are no coincidences,
everything happens for a reason. The largest hurdle is realizing this is fact.
The next obstacle we put in our way is not noticing the direction or path these
'coincidences' push us towards. Those around us nudge our journey in this life
along the right path. Most of the time the tendency is to ignore our gut feelings.
We then choose a different path, maybe not always the one we are nudged
towards, one that is not necessarily wrong, yet one that is less than it could be.

dJ

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gensanity [2005-11-03 18:02:31 +0000 UTC]

nice one

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IdaLarsenArt [2005-10-20 07:58:14 +0000 UTC]

looks great like the atmosphere in it

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wampirek [2005-10-15 15:42:56 +0000 UTC]

beautiful work

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Xondria [2005-08-19 15:45:44 +0000 UTC]

What a lovely description. Your sentiments are beautifully interpetated in your stunning piece. Best of luck in the contest, Hon.

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emoyou [2005-08-15 18:50:05 +0000 UTC]

wow..this is beautiful..!

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MelGama [2005-08-14 18:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!!!!!!

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Scully7491 [2005-08-02 04:52:24 +0000 UTC]

Very nice work!

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Irwen [2005-07-31 21:39:14 +0000 UTC]

wow *.* it's really beautiful *.*

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MirandaRose-Stock [2005-07-29 19:07:24 +0000 UTC]

This is a gorgeous manip!
Good luck for the comp!
Um...I don't mean to be picky but the dancer is actually from my stock.

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GothDream In reply to MirandaRose-Stock [2005-08-03 04:59:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i'll change credits!

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MirandaRose-Stock In reply to GothDream [2005-08-03 09:39:34 +0000 UTC]

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Moniquette [2005-07-29 12:08:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the entry! The idea of the "presence" is wonderful, and I think you brought it to life in a very vivid way. I also like the way you combined different stocks, and the "interlacing" of the images. Good luck in the contest!Pls check my front page and see the icon of your work in the journal.
let it be magic!

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lockstock [2005-07-29 04:04:03 +0000 UTC]

That's really creative and well-done! I can see you put a lot of thought into the imagery here. It's wonderful!

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GothDream In reply to lockstock [2005-07-29 07:58:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you I really appreciate!

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ElvenAngel [2005-07-28 16:06:27 +0000 UTC]

That's very pretty....

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Galhad [2005-07-28 15:51:03 +0000 UTC]

bella, bella... sia la poesia, sia la fotomanipolazione!

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GothDream In reply to Galhad [2005-07-28 18:58:53 +0000 UTC]

grazie!

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dudah [2005-07-28 13:01:37 +0000 UTC]

very nice!!

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