Tarturus [2013-07-26 01:30:11 +0000 UTC]
I have mixed opinions on this.
On one hand, the idea of life forms living and thriving in the vacuum of space is one I am quite fond of. Also I do quite like the design of your creature here.
Setting wise, it is an interesting thought that the Alpha could have made more things other than just all the non-Earth humanoids, and it does raise interesting questions on why the Jormungand were made.
On the other hand, the idea that they should pose "ever-present threat to commercial routes and miner sectors" is one I'm quite critical. Considering the vastness of space, you could have literally trillions of Jormungand in that one galactic quadrant alone, spread out very widely, and they would still only occupy such a miniscule portion of that space that space craft could navigate perfectly safely without coming even remotely near any of the beasts.
The whole thing about space being somewhere one can just happen to bump into stuff is one aspect of sci-fi that somewhat irritates me, as it appears to really significantly underestimate just how vast space is.
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